ღThe Loss Of Order Reviewღ
Forbidden Dreamers Review GalleryღThe loss of orderღ
Title 3/5
Not very appealing to me and you can take out "The" in Loss of Order.
Foreword and description: 8/10
Confusing I must say. It was too much at once. You might want to shorten the foreword.
Appearance: 1/5
Have a professional looking story by having a poster and a background. The poster you are using right now looks more like a character chart.
Plot: 13/15
Plot was interesting and captured me. There were points where I got lost.
Originality: 10/15
I have seen similar stories like this before. Especially Exo fans makes a lot of fantasy stories like this. It was original at some point. The ending was really sweet in its own way.
Grammar and Spelling: 17/20
I notice a few minor spelling mistakes and after the (...) skip a space.
Flow: 10/10
Nice flow to the story.
Characterization: 8/10
A little too much characters for me. I kept getting confused of who is who.
Overall Enjoyment: 5/10
75/100!
You could do better!! This story was so long lol. Hard to review on it.
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