Chapter 46: you tag harem right??? so i don't understand why would you ask who she end up with??? anyway love your story even though its frustrating at some point
Please update soon. I reread this story and I really like it. I can't wait and I'm really curious about what the other chapters are going to be about. Thx and keep up the good work!
I know were still in the introductory phase. I mean, we're not even in the part when her father gets murdered (you said this in the foreward). So I'm confident that we're still in the exposition part of the story. And honestly? I'm happy. I'm happy that we're still in the start of the story and there's already so much stuff going on. We still have 5 members left to introduce, excluding the fact that Kai and Lay still haven't said a single line. And I'm expecting more to happen and more to be revealed. I'm kind confused because there's nothing much revealed, but I'm eager to wait for the revelations to come.
About the title, "That's Right I'm a Wolf" doesn't seem to do justice to the mystery that your story offers. My high school teacher once said that in a story, the title should embody the whole concept of the book. I'm not too sure about "Cure or Kill" and "The Antidote". Both seem too direct and straightforward - a contrary to your strange and mysterious story. Did that make sense? Sorry if I can't help you in choosing.
And I really don't mind if there's no romance yet. I think that the development in the story is much more interesting.
But anyways, you're doing a good job. I like it. Although a lot of people seem to loose interest because of the slow pacing, I think they will come back when we're somehow near the rising action or the . So don't loose heart.
Hi I'm a new reader. Before answering the your question in changing the title, I would like to share my thoughts about the story first.
First of all, I'm really pissed at her mom. Like I really can't stand that she manages to act so indenial and nonchalant about other things, then act so concerned and worried about other things. It's like she's manipulating everything and it pisses me off that our OC is dancing under that spell.
Second, I wish Daran wasn't so clueless. She is a strong girl and she is not entirely helpless. I like that she is trying to adapt to things like how she wants to act normal when she hear the thoughts. And I like that because that shows character development. But the pacing of the story has put Daran as an ignorant damsel.
Now, though all my comment above are all negative thoughts, please don't be disheartenend. It just means that your story is good. Because you got all my feelings riled up. Because you had me wanting a development to happen. And when you're reader wants a development in the story means that you got her hooked. And I really am absorbed with this story! It's good!
Comments