~Crazy Swirly Review Request Shop!~ [CLOSED]

Description

If you want a story review with true & honest critiques for your story, then come and request from the Crazy Swirly Review Shop! :D

Poster made by:

~~♥♥☻xxAsianNinjaxx Poster Request ☺♥♥~~

Foreword

THE CRAZY SWIRLY REVIEW SHOP IS NOW OPENED! ;D

Hello people, we are yiling245 and joanne200969 and this is our first time opening a review shop ~

If you want us to write a cool and good (truthful) review for you, you can request from us anytime! xD

However, we still have some rules you would have to adhere to:

1. Please subscribe to this before requesting for a review. If you don't, you won't know when we'll post your story's review up here.

2. After you have received your review, please tell us how was it and you can give us constructive comments so we can improve on our reviews!

3. If we take too long to give you your review, please DO NOT rush me please. we still have a life (eg. studying for stupid tests & sleeping!) If we don't give you your review after 2 weeks, please ask nicely.

4. We will tell you on your wall whether your story was accepted by us for a review, if it wasn't, we have my reasons okay?

5. We do not review stories, sorry ><

6. Please CREDIT us for the reviews and you would have to post the review as one of your chapters! Thanks~

7. Please DO NOT bash if you are not happy with the review. If you are not happy, tell us nicely and I can work on it.

Review Rubric:

Title: /5

Does your title attract your readers?

Poster: /10

How does it in any way match your story and how does your poster make the readers want to read your story on the first look?

Description & foreword: /10

Will your readers understand your description and want to continue reading on? Or isit hard to understand and doesn't make any connection to your story?

Are the character descriptions giving correct infomation and how does it allow the reader to understand them?

How does your character, in the story, act according to how they are described to be?

Plot originality: /30

Originality and is the plot interesting in overall? Is it confusing?

Flow: /5

This it too quick? Or was it too fast?

Writing style: /15

Is the writing style easy to follow and understand?

Spelling/grammar: /5

Is there correct spelling, punctuations and tense usage?

Ending: /10

Does it end suddenly?

Is it confusing to the reader as they do not know what is going on?

Bonus: /5

Was it a good fic?

What did I like in your fic?

Overall Enjoyment: /5

Total marks: /100

The request form is here.

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flyingyen #1 Aug 13, 2011 14:46:28

Hey there! Sorry to be leaving a message like this in your comments but Ravenous Temptations are hiring for more staff! We are looking for dedicated graphic designers, reviewers, writers and advertisers! So please help us out because we are overloaded with requests and lack the staff to complete them ^^;; 
 
http://ravenous-temptations.blogspot.com

jwhong005 #2 Jul 31, 2011 15:06:31

i just applied for a review. i've been subscribed for a while and didn't realize i didn't submit a request. oops

chocolatenite #3 Jul 9, 2011 22:20:58

Thanks for your honest review.haha I didn't have time to check.

fizz-peaze #4 Jun 16, 2011 23:53:12

but may I ask, I still have no idea what's the difference of description and foreword. I just figured one is a description of the story and the other is just anything you want... i still get confused :(

fizz-peaze #5 Jun 16, 2011 23:41:37

can I point out something? My title is The Fall of the Trampled Rose" not "Tramped Roses" no, no, that wouldn't make much sense would it? lol...tramp rose. hahaha //can't get over that, tramped rose... LOL.. 
thanks for reviewing!

dawnrose #6 Jun 14, 2011 10:28:10

thanks~ LOL 
keep up the good work!

keymera #7 May 29, 2011 10:48:43

Username: keymera 
 
Title of story: It Started with a Promise 
 
Link to story: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/28059/it-started-with-a-promise-jonghyun-key-minho-onew-romance-taemin-you<;br />
 
Characters & Story foreword/description: Main characters are Key and Mika the others are like supporties. 
 
a story of a little girl who made a promise with her childhood friend. 
After 12 years she returned to her hometown, since she don't have any 
relatives in Korea, Minho (her best boy-friend) insisted that she should 
stay with him. To her surprise the guy whom she hated the most from the first 
time they met was one of Minho's mates and they're going to live in just one 
house. Will they stay quarrelling over things ? Will she find her childhood 
friend? Would she still remember the promise they made? 
 
mika : Then let's make a promise :) 
boy : What kind of promise? 
mika : That we will marry each other, I promise that I will return and find you 
boy : Then I'll wait for your return 
mika : Let's make a pinky swear :) 
boy : It's a promise :) 
 
Extras (What do you want me to do/ not to do): Nothing really. But I just want to say that I'm kinda lazy to edit my typo errors so I guess I'll edit it once I finished the story :)

summerswirlies #8 May 6, 2011 07:05:41

The reason why I used "Infinitely" is because the group is Infinite. 
It's a comedy meaning It's not to be taken seriously. 
The ending that I forgot to put is that Sungjong and Woohyun were watching the two of them... Well spying more like it. 
 
Thanks!

summerswirlies #9 May 5, 2011 19:22:50

Username: borrriing123 
 
Title of story: Drunk on Yogurt 
 
Link to story:http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/39702/drunk-on-yogurt-oneshot-myungsoo-sungjong-woohyun-you<;br />
 
Characters & Story foreword/description: Myungsoo/you... 
Cameo SungJong and Woohyun. 
 
One look at Kim Myungsoo, you'll think that right away he's cool, handsome and charming. But only his group members and you, know that he's crazy, random, weird yet innocent at the same time. Why? Because he gets drunk on yogurt. How's that for being innocent? 
 
Extras (What do you want me to do/ not to do): 
I don't have a poster yet. Sorry! 
and theres only one chappie because it's a oneshot :D 
I have several mistakes but I still hope you can enjoy :)