Calling bbyong0901 - A Fool's Tear {Review}

Simple Style { Close; finishing the request }

Title {4/5}

It's not very interesting but, I like it :D

 

Description {4/5}

There's some mistake in the description

 

Plot {27/30}

I'd found some stories with the same plot as this one. So, yeah~

 

Originality {7/10}

Like I said, I'd found some stories with the same plot as this one

 

Grammar and spelling {16/20}

Description: Because my heart is a broken heart {wrong}

Because my heart had broken {right}

First paragraph: Every night I think about her, as if it became a habit of mine {wrong}

Every night, I think about her as if it'd became my habit {right}

Second paragraph: You got off of Woohyun's car... {wrong}

You got off from Woohyun's car... {right}

There's other mistake too. Hope you can improve your spelling and grammar.

 

Characterization {10/10}

I can understand the characteristic of Sunggyu

 

Feeling {7/10}

It's kindda boring since I'd read some stories like this

 

Graphic {8/10}

It's great

 

Your marks : 83/100

 

Review by:

---Haemin

With love and caring.

I'm sorry if I've hurt your feeling.

Hope you can accept my review.

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beautinity
#1
requested for a review^^
beeancathemermaid
#2
Hi I just sent a graphic request form. hope to hear from you soon ;) Fighting! :>
kayeuyvico #3
Chapter 14: i requested :) hope I'll get the results really soon :)
ft_stars
#4
I requested for a review ^^
CoolerThanYou #5
Chapter 14: Yay thanks. No it doesnt hurt my feeling at all ^^ I'll definitely credit :D
lovewithSJ
#6
Are you hiring?
ForeverU
#7
requested for graphic
caramel_22
#8
requested for a review hehe ^^