Calling bbyong0901 - A Fool's Tear {Review}
Simple Style { Close; finishing the request }Title {4/5}
It's not very interesting but, I like it :D
Description {4/5}
There's some mistake in the description
Plot {27/30}
I'd found some stories with the same plot as this one. So, yeah~
Originality {7/10}
Like I said, I'd found some stories with the same plot as this one
Grammar and spelling {16/20}
Description: Because my heart is a broken heart {wrong}
Because my heart had broken {right}
First paragraph: Every night I think about her, as if it became a habit of mine {wrong}
Every night, I think about her as if it'd became my habit {right}
Second paragraph: You got off of Woohyun's car... {wrong}
You got off from Woohyun's car... {right}
There's other mistake too. Hope you can improve your spelling and grammar.
Characterization {10/10}
I can understand the characteristic of Sunggyu
Feeling {7/10}
It's kindda boring since I'd read some stories like this
Graphic {8/10}
It's great
Your marks : 83/100
Review by:
---Haemin
With love and caring.
I'm sorry if I've hurt your feeling.
Hope you can accept my review.
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