Title {5/5}

I love the way you write the title

Description {5/5}

I love the description so much ><

Plot {30/30}

Totally love the plot!

Originality {10/10}

Wow! I never read a story like this before. It's so interesting.

Grammar and spelling {15/20}

Chapter 1: "I slowly addict to the creamy taste of dessert." {Wrong}

"I slowly became addicted to the creamy taste of the dessert." {Right}

Chapter 2:-

Second Paragraph: "h...hello?" {Wrong}

"H...Hello?" {Right}

"- he smiled..." {Wrong}

"- He smiled..." {Right}

There's other grammar and spelling mistakes too. Try to improve your grammar and spelling, okay?

Characterization {10/10}

No worry. I understand their characteristics.

Feeling {9/10}

Great story. Make a good story more.

Appearance {9/10}

It's unique and I love it. Just the letter are small.

Your marks : 93/100

Review by:

---Haemin

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