Title (4/5)

Good choice of title!

Description (4/5)

Good enough! But, try to make it longer

Plot (28/30)

Your plot is just fine. It's just that I often found a story like this

Originallity (10/10)

I know it's made by you.

Grammar and Spelling (15/20)

Grammar;

Chapter one:

"Miss Kang asked. She was holding a picture of a boy." ( change it to ) "Miss Kang asked as she holds a picture of a boy in front of Hyuna."

Chapter two:

"Just now he just lifted..." ( wrong ) "Just now, he just lifted..." ( right )

Spelling;

Chapter one:

"Can i help you, miss?" ( wrong ) "Can I help you, miss?" ( right )

Chapter two:

"... he pu his hands between Hyuna's head..." ( wrong ) " ... He put his hands between Hyuna's head..." ( right )

Chapter 3:

"... Go to go!" ( wrong ) "... Got to go!" ( right )

Characterization (10/10)

I can understand the characteristic of them.

Feeling (7/10)

Not really great

Appearance (9/10)

Nice poster and background you have there

Your marks: 87/100

Review by: ---Haemin

Notes:

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