Title (4/5)

I love the way you name your story but I need to know why does it called 'Thirst of Blood'.

Description (4/5)

Because of your description, I don't know why you name it 'Thirst of Blood'. Only the quote tell the reader why.

But, I still love the description because it's interesting. It would attract many readers to read your story.

Plot (30/30)

Your plot is just fine. I really love it. Keep up the good work. FIGHTING !!!

Originallity (10/10)

I can tell that this is originally made by you 'cause I've never read a story like this.

Grammar and Spelling (15/20)

Spelling: infront (wrong) in front (right)

Characterization (10/10)

I can understand the characteristic of them.

Feeling (7/10)

Not really great but still I love the story ^^

Appearance (7/10)

Well. For the poster. It doesn't really give out the feeling of horror. Reader only can feel dark and mysterious feeling about this poster.

The background is just fine.

Your marks: 87/100

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Reviewed by ---Haemin.

Note:

I'm sorry if I hurt your feeling. I'm a strict person when it comes too review.

And sorry for taking so long to do this review. Don't forget to credit me and the shop.