Title : 3/5

Just one word, simple. You know this kind of title can be found everywhere.

Description : 1/5

The description is very bland and I don’t feel like I want to read it.

Plot : 10/20

I have seen this plot many times.

So cliché.

Originality : 5/10

Like I said above, I’ve seen this many times. So it’s obvious to tell I’ve found this many times.

Grammar and spelling: 20/30

Sungyeol’s description “love to annoy others”

I think it supposed to be “loves to annoy the others”

Suzy’s “gets easily jealous”

It will better be if it is “easily got jealous”

“It’s too early” Yeunji said while her eyes are close and her back faced me

Change it to, “It’s still too early!” Yeunji said while her eyes still close while her back facing me

He walks to her room and starts hitting the pan with the spoon making a loud and irritating sound.

CLENG! CLENG! CLENG!

You made three sounds there. Then you say “a loud and irritating sound”

A is one. Not three.  You know that right? So it’s supposed to be

“He walks back to her room and starts hitting the pan with the spoon making loud and irritating sounds.”

There’s still many spelling & grammatical error there. I’m too lazy to point everything.

You know it’s bad too mix Korean and English. It’s look ugly. Seriously.   

And please put more punctuation.

Characterization : 5/10

With the grammar mistake, too many character. I will give you 5 only.

You know, you should introduce the main character first. If you put too many character in the introduction, people might get boring. So, that’s it.

Feeling : 2/10

It’s obvious, I don’t have any feeling when read this.

Graphic : 5/10

The font looks good but the picture is not in HQ.

And if you request for poster, make sure you request for background too.

Your background doesn’t look angst at all.

total : 51/100

review by:

chibixchibi 

with a lot of love

im sorry if its kinda hurt you.

review is i know.