Title {3/5}

The title is fine but it looked like a little overused.

Description {5/5}

The description is just fine.

Plot {30/30}

I love the plot except for the cliff hangers that you always put. But, nah~ I don't really care about it 'cause I always do that thing too.

Originality {7/10}

I'd read a story like this before.

Grammar and spelling {15/20}

Prologue:-

Line 9: "... the priest said Finally." {Wrong}

"... Finally, the priest had ended the vows." {Right}

Line 15: "...arrange marriage." {Wrong}

"...arranged marriage." {Right}

Chapter 1:-

- : "1 week After that..." {Wrong}

"One week after that.../ One week later..." {Right}

Line 1: "...I asked him when i saw he was going down the stairs." {Wrong}

"...I asked him when I saw him walking down the stairs." {Right}

Line 3: "...he replied and grab the car keys before he left." {Wrong}

"... He replied and graabed the car keys before he left." {Right}

Hope you can improve your grammar.

Characterization {10/10}

Uuu~ Look at the characteristic of Minhyuk. I can understand all the characteristic of Minhyuk, you and other characters.

Feeling {10/10}

No comment.

Appearance {10/10}

Do I have to say anything :3

Your marks : 90/100

Review by:

---Haemin

With love and caring.

Hope you don't get hurt by my review.

Oh. And don't forget to update your story.

Keep doing a good work. FIGHTING!