One more day

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“Snowflakes don’t feel pain, they don’t suffer”, Youngjae said quietly.
“Then I want to become a snowflake”, Daehyun whispered and reached out his hand.

Out of a sweet friendship, love develops. But there's not much time left for Youngjae to confess, for the two of them being together...

 

Daehyun: shy, doesn't talk, suffers from the Wiskott-Aldrich-Syndrome, is very lonely because of that

Youngjae: cheerful, intelligent, caring

Youngjae's mother: works at the hospital in which Daehyun is stationed, cares a lot for Daehyun

 

This story is for my lovely friend Nell <3

 

 

A/N: omg guys, I'm still getting so much love for this story - can't believe it omg - and I'm sorry that I can't reply to all of your comments,
         so let me say THANK YOU and hug all of you here ♥ you are awesome

         ~Ichigo~

        

Foreword

Whenever I think back of the first time I met you,
my heart beats fast and I can’t help but smile, even when tears are rolling down my cheeks.

Every winter I will remember our first meeting, it was 3 weeks before Christmas.

 It was freezing cold and snowflakes were dancing through the white air that came out of my mouth.

I was mad when my mother dragged me along to her work, I didn’t want to go there, but she begged me and
promised me that for this favor I would get the best Christmas gift ever.

And I really got the best gift on earth, I just realized later... the meaning of this gift.

I’m thankful to her. Without her we wouldn’t have met. She knew probably before us. Do you think she felt that we were meant to be?

Right now, snowflakes are dancing in front of my eyes.

My hands are cold, my fingers are red, but I won’t go back.

I will stay with you for the whole day.

It’s Christmas. I brought you a little gift, I hope you will like it.

I hope to see you smile, because I really love your smile, it makes me happy.

 

 

Trailer for One More Day

 

 

 

Translation:

Read this story in Vietnamese (Thanks to solitarywraith)

Read this story in German (Thanks to Kpopdongsaeng)

 

IchigoKeks
I wrote a 'bonus-ending', which tells what will happen to Youngjae many many years later... uhm, yeah, dunno if anyone is interested. Let me know

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zelovesick
#1
I just want to say that this fic was, and still is, one of my absolute favorite stories ever. I always come back to it and read it again once in a while because I love it so much. Thank you so much for writing it.
YukariStarzYjae
#2
Chapter 9: Ahhh...*sobs*
zainita
#3
Chapter 9: what an ending. i want to cry. it was cruel. it was torturing. it was sad. but it was beautiful the way it is. how could you torturing youngjae like that?
dayahjae
#4
Chapter 9: Author-nim...i-i'm T,T my daejae.omg.this is so sad.why I read this before I'm going to sleep???whhhyyy????!!afagsjslafagsjs.I love this story.I'm not into angst but this is really good.please save my lil heart.i love this story. I want recommended it to everyone and I want they crying too.muahahha.I love this story. I. Love. This .I .love .author-nim for making this story.
candygirl
#5
Chapter 9: I read this while listening to B.a.p's Easy. Sure wasn't a good idea:))
This was an amazing fanfic, I haven't cried like this for so long.
Though this was all about them being in love this just made me realize more of how much the b.a.p members actually love each other and would do anything to protect each other.
Thank you for writing this masterpiece.
meemow123 #6
Chapter 9: It has been so long since I cried in a fanfic so I thought I'd already read all the ones good enough to make me cry, or I've hardened myself, and then I read this and I can't see and my pillow is soaked and I'm sobbing :'(
Its so sad!
I fell in love with B.A.P all over again after Skydive so I came looking for a fic and found this and was like "Ooh cutie daehyun and cutie youngjae are put into a couple?" and then I saw the tags and was like "hm its a school night and I have an authodintist (whatever the spelling) tomorrow in the morning - ah whatever bye sleep"
And its obly 10:36pm
And my tears ... This is heartbreakingly beautiful authornim ... Its amazing and so deep if this made ME cry tgen its more than good!! :)
Daejae *wails*
puppy_bae #7
Chapter 9: Waahhhh, i've only read the epilogue and yet i'm still crying..ㅠ.ㅠ
RealFangirl #8
Chapter 9: ah i forgot...btw what's the reason behind youngjae's death? '…'
RealFangirl #9
Chapter 9: shiit im cryingㅠㅠㅠㅠ hope u'll turn this into fantasy so daehyun's diseases could cured after he n youngjae slept together.... n then they will live happily:'')) *joke sorry... thanks for ur sweet n bitter story authornim:'''))