Your stories are really nice.
But try to not ruin the whole story.
In the foreword, it would be better if you delete the highlighted words. Like 'Your father eloped with another woman and left you and your mother(The woman and her child will be revealed)' and more.
That means you're giving away the plot. that means the people who are reading your story will know what will happen next and blah blah blah.
So i just hope that you will delete the highlighted words in your stories so that the readers can be excited for each chapter :)
Chapter 11: Hahaha nice short update! Btw, i type mine on microsoft word before uploading them so i don't need to bother about saving anot. Maybe you could try that too! :D
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