Adolescence Is Atrocious

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Several years ago, gay couple Jonghyun and Key adopted a Canadian-Korean girl named Lauren. Taemin and Minho, their friends, adopted a Korean boy named Yoogeun. Not long after, a baby boy the name of Kyungsan was born to some other friends of theirs Onew and Jessica. Now the three children are teenagers and though they have grown up as friends who simply push each other on swings, make mud-pies and play house together, things inevitably change as time goes on. How will their relationships become complicated as hormones and puberty get in the mix? Who's crushing on who and hiding it? Then, of course, every teenager has their growing pains, parental issues, looming future decisions, and crazy hard exams. These three might not survive their adolescence with their sanity in tact.

 

 

This is a sequal to SHINee: the fox and the hound. It's not necessary to read it but as I won't be going over the kids' beginnings nor the past of these parents' complex relationships and how they are all connected, it would be more enjoyable and easy to understand if you read that first. This story will be 100% based off of fictional events and futuristic characters based on real children. I hope you'll keep your mind open and give it a shot even if it doesn't have a lot of Kpop idols making central appearances. You'll still see jongkey/2min/onsica couple moments, I promise. I really wanted to try something totally diferent so please give it a shot!

 

 

Disclaimer: There may be rated content, so don't read and then go crying to your parents. I do not own any idols, ulzzangs, or child models in this story or claim any rights to anything besides the fictional representations of their charachters. I do not own the pictures in the posters but they were edited by me. .

 

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Kim Lauren-starts the story at 17, various ages throughout. She is a pretty, bright girl who gets along with everybody, is naturally curious, a little bit rebellious, and is talented at anything. She loves to sing and dance but she's also intelligent. Her weakness is anything pink or sweet. She has her own quirks that make her lovely and she just laughs at herself when she does anything strange or wrong. Every boy she's met falls in love with her.

 

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Choi Yoogeun-starts the story at 16, various ages throughout. He is handsome, cool at first glance, slightly mean-spirited but still can be nice and has a lot of friends. His only interests are baseball and sleeping and he hates school though he keeps up his grades to keep his parents off his back. He's pretty 'perfect' by standard terms but has quirks he shows to people he's close to. He will do anything for his friends and feels very protective of them. He's famous for being an unoficial ulzzang.

 

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Lee Kyungsan-starts the story at 15, various ages throughout. He is not typically good-looking but rather unique, almost foreign in his appearance and style. He's very boisterous, friendly, loves guitar, school, isn't a fan of sports, and is known for acting older than his age. He's a dork in that he picked up a lot of bad habits from his father but people find him very loveable because of it. He makes friends very easily but tends to be more comfortable around girls than boys since boys don't always understand him. Fashion and his hair is almost as important as grades and his noonas.

 

Their parents: JongKey, 2min and Onsica. All the other characters in F&H potentially will make a cameo appearance depending on their relations to the characters.

 

 

Foreword

Ever since Kim Lauren turned 9, she'd hated Valentine's Day for several reasons. For one, every year, her Key umma would stress over what she was wearing to school, making sure she looked extra pretty. It wasn't that the fashion designer didn't have good taste; it was just she really didn't like people making decisions for her, especially in what she wore. He'd also force her to make chocolates for every person they knew which was just exhausting. He wouldn't even let her eat any of them, though she loved nothing more than that sweet sugar melting in . He was always nagging her about her teeth rotting in the future but that's a story for another time.

 

For another, her Jonghyun appa would always stress over what guys were going to give her chocolates. He'd give her a speal about boys being really mean, nasty creatures until they hit their twenties and how she was supposed to refuse all chocolates, kisses, or 'invitations' from boys unless he would home-school her and put those guys in their place. He'd probably freak if he knew how many boys in her school confessed to her on those days, so she didn't tell him. Jonghyun appa was a famous singer and he had other important things to focus on. She didn't like to stress him out more than he already was as she grew up and showed a slightly rebelious, dare-devil attitude like her umma apparently had when he was younger.

 

The main reason she didn't like it though was because though it was supposed to be a day of love, her guy friends always seemed to get in fights over her and stop talking to each other. They pressed her to say which one she liked, got in fist fights, threw around harmful words. She was a girl that only liked peace and cheerfulness so when they were fighting because of her she just didn't know what to do to fix it. She felt so incredibly guilty and stressed. This year was probably the worst...because the guys that were fighting were her best friends from babyhood and she kind of had a crush on both of them...

 

"So who's it going to be, Ren?" Yoogeun asked coolly, clasping his long, gangly arms over his slim, plaid t-shirted chest.

 

"Yeah, who're you gonna choose, Rennie noona? Who, who?" Kyungsan pushed brightly with a sweet smile and a puppy-dog like expression.

 

Lauren looked between them nervously with a dramatic turn of her head and her tongue stuck to the roof of . How many years had this been occuring in her mind now, this same conversation, this same battle? She just didn't know who to choose and never had. It had to be one of them. She couldn't have both, right? That wasn't a lady-like thing to do...

 

"I...I...."

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err4tic
#1
Chapter 8: I swear, I'm imagining Lauren as Gwiboonie, Kyungsan as Jinki, and Yoogeun as Minho. This is fun.
Gabisoares #2
Chapter 27: Hey!It's me again!
OMG,this fic is so amazing! T^T I don't even like fics that is not ,but I loved this one!(The same way I seem love everything you write XD)
The history is SOOO original,I mean,I was so sad for Kyungsan when Lauren and Yoogeun start dating! ;¬; But Thanks God that everything ended up well!When I watch kdramas I'm always sad about the friendzoned guy...
I loved the way you make to include 2min,Onjess,Jongkey and Mirjoon without letting them ofuscate the main characters!I loved Kyungsan since the beggining,he's such a Jinki's son!They have personalities a lot a like,but Kyungsan is a way more bold!hahaha
THe couples are so cute and the end is so beautiful! *O* Can you stop making me want to cry in every ending of your fics!?No,don't do that!I love crying! hahaha
What kind of sorcery did you made to find ulzzangs that looked so much a like to the real babies!? They're so pretty!How can Lauren be SOOO cute!? *O*
I'm trying not to exceed the maximum space here,so I must end the comment congratulating your for this story,you were amazing as always,Unnie!
Fighting! o/
~xoxo
Shanamexchingu #3
Chapter 27: Annyeong your new subbies here
omo so much awesome fic this is daebak story Love it C:
bunnySHINEEkeyLOVER
#4
Chapter 27: I haven't been on AFF for a while, and when I saw that you completed this story I immediately clicked on it! Hahah. I've totally been waiting for this ending, and you made it perfect!
Thank you for writing this story, it was really enjoyable! :)

I look forward to reading your future stories!
Shineedays5 #5
Chapter 27: *wipes forehead* Phew, I thought you forgot about us there for a minute! Haha, anyways thanks for wrapping it up sweetly. Once again, a touching ending to a beautiful fic. I really like that you ended it off showing that Kyungsan was a much more important character then it seemed in the beginning since it is true when you look at the development in the story. He also took after his father, Onew, a lot with his god awful jokes xD Nice touch there! Though he can be a playboy, he's still a dork. Looking back on TFATH, he's like an exact copy of Onew lol Lauren still has her lovable quirks. I like that you didn't make her perfect in this story like most other stories would have it. (The beautiful, smart, caring popular girl that everyone goes after.) You made Lauren REAL which is why I love her character so much. Yoogeun is just...Yoogeun haha such a teenager with his rebel badass attitude. Nice to see how relatable this character is to so many. The parents were of course great. You didn't put them in this story as much which of course makes sense because this isn't exactly their store but rather, their kids'. It was still nice to see them occasionally here. Jessica was rather interesting to read about for some reason. I don't know, she just seemed like the type to keep to herself but you still knew she was a comfortable person to be around. (I'm probably still obsessing over chapter 38 from TFATH, 1, 2, 3 Got 180 Degrees and I'm Caught in Between, which is probably why I can't get over her!! *,* you know what I'm talking about author-nim!!) x'D LOL but nonetheless, I still find her quite interesting in your stories. 2Min and Jongkey...what more can I say. They're just that perfect! You portrayed their real personalities really well in this, especially my bias Kibummie! *le sigh* okay, I'm going to wrap this up now, I've been going on for a while haha. Thanks again for an amazing, well written story. And congrats on graduating author-nim!!<3 :)
Shawol360
#6
Chapter 27: Thank you for coming back and finishing the story and congrats on graduation. You are a beautiful woman with great talent and I wish you the best future!
tonya50
#7
Chapter 27: congrads on everything. I loved the story, and every chapter was awesome. maybe later in the years, you could do a fallow up of them. after they have been in college and training for awhile. tht could be another whole new story. lol thanks for the great story.
epicbabo951 #8
Chapter 27: congrats your story was amazing!!!!