SERENDIPITY

COINCIDENCE

 

After 3years, I decided to go back...

Back to that place I hated most…

 

It was Friday afternoon…

The sky was painted with red and orange

 

I took the courage to open the door and step my foot forward

The moment I saw her laying on this bed my guilty heart stops from beating. I should be on her place. I should be the one suffering from COMA not HER.

 

Why? Why would she have to save me? Why didn’t she just ignore me?

 

I’m sorry… I’m really sorry…because of me, you are here…

I’m sorry for being a coward…

I’m sorry for leaving you here…

 

I sit next to her and looked at her peaceful face…

I caress her perfect face.

She’s my sleeping beauty…

 

Without even thinking, I placed my lips on her…

 

I smiled…

 

If it’s only a fairytale story, a kiss will wake her up

 

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The next day, Saturday, I visit her again…

I sit next to her bed and read a book

 

After a while, I went outside to buy a drink

At the corridor, I saw her father and her doctor. I didn’t mean to eavesdrop but I can’t help it especially when I heard So min’s name.

 

“Mr Jung, are you really sure you still want to keep her this way?”

 

“What do you mean?”

 

“I’m sorry Mr Jung, but your daughter condition is uncertain, we doubt that she will be able to wake up”

 

“Doctor… you mean? No, no, no! You’re kidding right?”

 

“I’m sorry Mr Jung, it’s been three years now, but nothing change, We already did our best. You should also understand how your daughter feels, it is not about you anymore, don’t be selfish, do you still want to see her like that? Your daughter might be tired now, I think you should let her go”

 

“NO! I CAN’T LET HER GO! I CAN’T DO THAT DOC”

 

I can’t listen anymore, I understand what they mean…I rushed to her room.

My tears fell as soon as I see her beautiful peaceful face

 

“So min, please So min…please wake up”

 

My heart is crashing. I hugged her tightly. I didn’t know that I fall asleep until somebody tapped my back, it was Mr. Jung

 

“It’s late Hyun joong, your parents must be worried about you, there still another time”

 

I don’t want to go home but Mr Jung is right, I can’t let my parents worry about me again but before I go out, Mr Jung called me

 

“Hyun joong, thank you and I’m sorry but, but I think I can’t see her anymore like this”

 

Mr Jung was crying. I left without saying anything

 

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It’s been two days already but I didn’t visit her

I need time to think…

 

I wanted to fight and wait for her

 

But…

 

But…

 

I’m losing all my hopes…

 

I open my wallet and look on our picture together, we barely know each other but we still smiles like we we’re friends.

 

How can I forget that day? She’s a crybaby and heavy. My back aches when I piggyback her. It’s good that she bought me ice cream at least I have my reward.

 

I thought that I will not see her again, but for the second time around, we meet unexpectedly.

It should be a perfect meeting but TRAGEDY set us apart

 

Will I ever see her again?

 

I took my guitar and went straight to the hospital. I sit beside her and started playing “Canon Rock”

 

How I wish she could hear this…

How I wish she would be able to hear my heart…

That she would be able to understand what I mean…

 

It’s time for me to say goodbye to her…

I placed my precious gift on to her hands and kiss her goodbye…

 

THANK YOU!

 

That was my last words to her…

 

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2 years past since So min gain consciousness…

 

So min was on the park, sitting on her favorite bench

 

‘So min ah, why are you still thinking about him?’

 

‘Mianhe Mind, I can’t help it’

 

‘It’s been two years already, He really think you’re dead?’

 

‘probably’

 

 

So min closed her eyes and hold unto the rose necklace Hyun joong gave her

           

‘I hope I’m still in Coma, at least I can see him’

 

She opened her eyes and saw the person whom she’s longing for

 

‘Hyun joong ah’

 

 “Why are you always there when I needed someone to comfort me? Are you some kind of a superhero?” So min asked him while crying

 

“If you want me to be your superhero, then let it be”

 

Hyun joong hugged her tightly

 

“As long as I could make you feel that I am here, that I exist. I will be your superhero. I will always be on your side”

 

Hyun joong whisper to himself

 

So min thought that she was dreaming. She hugged him back tightly

 

“Thank you Hyun joong, even if it’s a dream, you’re still here”

 

Hyun joong burst to laughter when he heard her

 

“You really think I’m not the real thing So min ah?”

 

“EH?”

 

He kissed her…the most passionate kiss he could ever give. After the kiss ended Hyun joong teases her

 

“Do you still think your dreaming? Or you want me to do it again?”

 

So min didn’t respond but she pulled Hyun joong closer to her and kissed him intimately

 

That’s her answer…

 

 

With every twist and turns

Even if it’s dream or reality

Their destiny will remain unshaken

 

 

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MIANHE EVERYONE :C

This was a very lame ending…

 

I know, I know, I’m really lousy…

But my mind was stranded in a deserted island

And I can’t continue my story very well…

Hope you all enjoy my very first fanfic and will continue to read my other fanfic

 

If there’s something you don’t understand or curious about

Feel free to comment/message me…

I will gratefully answer it :)

 

*if ever you’re wondering why I make the title “COINCIDENCE” well, it’s based on my blog that I made during my college days. I was really oblige to do a service for the replacement of my ID (admin staff are really harsh) but I’m thankful since I met a very cute guy…ahahaa! (I’m sure IAmLina will smile reading about this) we became friends but we lost connections after our service. After 2years when I went back to my school, I meet him again. But we are just friends, nothing more…we just meet at the same place and at the same time *bow*

 

*and also my chapter’s title has a connection, it will be FURIOUS :)

WHY? Because I’m furious about myself…ahaha! Since I started this story without a plot (bad writer) anyway, I really enjoy this story, I hope you all enjoy this too…

 

If I can rewrite this, I hope I can! (Laugh out loud)

 

THANK YOU AVID READER!

I WILL ALWAYS TREASURE YOUR COMMENTS!

 

KAMSAHAMNIDA! :D

 

 

LOVELOTS,

-PIABEYBI-

 

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jasminekachhap #1
Chapter 7: Short,sweet!
Spy_spy #2
Chapter 5: Who's that girl anyway?
Rani16 #3
Chapter 7: sweet story, and happy ending :D . I love your story author-ssi :)
lavi018 #4
Chapter 7: It is not a lame story..!!! It is a refreshing new love story for me atleast.... :-) I loved very much.... :-)
seluglitter
#5
Chapter 7: loved it! it was ver sweet, i didnt know what would happen.... thank you <3
lespapillons #6
Chapter 7: congratulation for ur story :) i like it
michily #7
i want again again again! hahaha crazy me right!
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ellabanaanaa #8
I knew it! I have a hunch that years have already passed and still she's in coma/dreamland. :) great update! I wonder how they will meet? :)) Keep it up! :)