Chapter 4: It was adorable of Hae when he stuck his tongue out to that police officer for calling his tea cup painting a kid painting.lol,so cute <3 I thought he was going to get caught when he slipped off the branch!Nooo!So much tension.Hopefully he didn’t though.Phew!

Minho sure is persistent.I mean,2 hours to convince him to go?They (Wonnie and Minho) sure are protective of Hae.

Aww,Hae doesn’t want to get rid of the ruined painting may be because it reminds him of Hyuk now?Or may be it created a chance for him to finally talk to his long time crush so a memento?

Again Hae and Minho interaction.I mean…wow!Minho cares a hell lot for Hae don’t you think?A little bit out-of-line caring though…Too much!I wonder the whole extent of their relationship and what they have been through so far.

Eunhyuk aww!He is happy and tries to look better because he will see Hae today.So cute!Even his teacher noticed!

Ah!I think you wanted to write “Why did he ask for a day off?” not why didn’t he.

“Killing would mean effort, so no”ROFL!I love you Hae!

Eunhae interaction was adorable.Especially this part below is my favorite:
“ You’re going to be late Eunhyuk.”
“ I’m never late.”
And with that the bell rang. Eunhyuk’s face flushed a bit as Donghae giggled.”Hehe!

“ Everyone messes up a bit in their lives Eunhyuk. Get used to it.”
^^Isn’t Hae right though?That’s the proof that him being in Hyuk’s life will effect Hyuk well.

“His professor only held a knowing-smirk on his face-”OMG!I love his professor! :D Hehe =D
Also,i REALLY love how you mention Hyuk's internal thoughts about Hae,his feelings when he is near Hae like how he gets really excited to be with Hae or how he couldn't get angry at Hae for not showing up at cafe and so on.
Anyway,need to go now to driving lessons but i just wanna say shortly that this story has so much potential and i hope you update and someday finish it;even if the updates are slow we still love this story =) So Kri fighting!

Chapter 3: “If anything, he’d hope he’d have an impatient Donghae at the entrance.”
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Fangirl mode first:Aww Hyuk,so cute!
Reality mode: Ooooh,did Hae ditch Hyuk for the things he said about his art?At the end of the previous chapter if you asked me about this i would have said yep,he deserved it but now that i’m reading about him waiting and stuff i feel sorry for him.LOL,bias feels!

Minho and Siwon appear in the story.Ho-ho!Can’t wait for their characters to be totally introduced.And Minho sure is possessive of Hae isn’t he?I mean, what’s with the sudden backhug? o.O

“Eunhyuk tapped Donghae’s shoulder, trying to be as friendly as possible, but once he was passed the two, he quickly wiped his hands roughly against his jeans.”Lee Eunhyuk!WTH is wrong with you?OMG!This is good for the future character interaction development but wth?How did he live his life like this?Why didn’t his parents take him to a doctor?It is not a bad thing to go to doctor for that.It would have made his life much easier too…poor baby!

I actually like Hae and Minho interaction.They seem awfully close.

So Hyuk is afraid of spiders?I don’t know if i want to laugh or feel sad for him.

“Kyuhyun whined, falling, and flailing on the ground dramatically.”SAHNKJSKSDDSCFKNJS SO ADORABLE!

Kyu and Hyuk interaction was million times better than Hae and Minho though.Love <3

So,um,Hyuk told Hae that his jeans were at the cleaners and he will return them tomorrow.But he comes home and Kyu says the pants Hyuk is wearing at that moment (mind you,they are the same ones he was wearing when he saw Hae) are not his.And Hyuk says they are Hae’s (that friend’s).lol,did he lie to Hae?Why?

Chapter 2: So Hyuk memorizes everything?Without understanding?Ouch,my head hurts even from the idea of it.I really can not, for the life of me, memorize much.I need to understand it otherwise it is a no-no.He is a lucky bastard.
OMG!Eunhyuk is a fanboy (i know i should touch upon his over-the-top cleaning/organizing habits but whatever)He types an e-mail to Hae,anonymously at that!lol,adorable!
Hyuk is sure sassy and grumpy.Hae was so patient towards him about paints on pants and graffiti and all the other stuff.
Aww!Poor Hae! He got called gangster and his graffiti was called stupid and immature by his long-going crush.Hyuk seems like totally out of his reach since he really hates Hae(well,not really Hae but his other identity) Really feel sorry for him T.T Hae fighting!

Chapter 1: I love the description of Blue Bakery.Just my cup of tea.Such a nice place to go or work.Lucky Hae.
Eunhae is so sweet.They are secretly aware of each other since the beginning ha?Lovely!
Aww,the workers in the cafe who are always friendly and smiling and the customers who leave tips and hurry out of the cafe for Hae not returning the money back to them are all warm and lovely people.
“It wasn’t rare for Eunhyuk to just find a hotel and sleep in it for the night instead of going home”Eh??Why?Don’t tell me it is because he gets lazy and sleepy and can’t bother going home and just crashes somewhere?LOL if that’s the case!He doesn’t have money problem so why not i guess?
LMAO!Fish dude?Kyu,i thought you were better than that.I love Hyuk’s artistic punk much more.A heart with a fish face is so like Hae OMG!Precious!
Ooooh!Eunhyuk is such a party pooper for being so dedicated to rules.I mean,his reason to hate Hae’s graffiti is because it is painted on public property?WTH?So stuck up he seems;so far.I love graffiti and the idea of using the world as an art gallery.As long as you don’t harm anyone and don’t provoke people by your paintings what/where is the harm?And the thing Hae drew is so endearing too.I mean coffee cup with a blueberry muffin <3 Yes Hyuk,find him if you can.I dare you!I really wonder what his reaction is gonna be when he finds out.

Chapter 9: It's good,though..i hate siwon..haha :P

Chapter 9: LMAO. Hae completely ignored the horse for the monkey.

Chapter 9: OMFG R U FINE, BE SAFE!!!!! Love your story by the way!!!! Love the story line too!!!! Update soon

Chapter 9: OH MY GOD ARE YOU OKAY?????!!!!!!!! did anything get damaged? obviously youre okay coz youre here but did anything major happen to you? also i love the chapte :D its just too cute XD yes pleaseeeeee more kyu! and if you can manage it maybe some kyumin? but anyway cant wait for the next chapter :D keep it up and DFTBA!

Chapter 9: Glad you're okay with the hurricane sandy xD
And no, this chapter isn't boring >< I really like how Hyuk and Hae become closer xDD

Chapter 9: i love this update!