A Cup of Sugar

Description

You live in one of the nicest officetels in Busan. Neighbors are supposed to be friendly right? What happens when you find yourself temporarily homeless? What happens when your neighbor, Nichkhun, whom you barely know gives you an offer you should not refuse? The line between being neighborly and actually caring becomes blurred. Where do you draw the line? Or should it even exist in your case? Let's just say things get very messy...

Foreword

Hi Reader,

 

This is my first fanfiction here on asianfanfics.com. I have been wanting to write a Nichkhun fanfic for a month but I did not know how to start and I didn't know to make this as realistic as possible. So, I did some research and waited until the light bulb went off in my head. I'm really excited about it! I hope this story is as wonderful to read as it is to write. I like to take things slowly so bear with me :)

Please give me suggestions on writing and constructive criticism that you think will help my writing skills. I realize that I am not always the the AMAZING writer that I think I am. That being said, please be kind and positive. If you would like to create an image for this story please leave a comment and I will try to get back to you.

 

And now, the story. :) 

Comments

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namzUd #1
I loved it because I think you made a lot of effort to make it seem as real as possible. I think you could make it better giving more details on Nickhun's job. It's not very clear and its a bit suspicious that the OC doesnt question it although she seems to be falling for him.
KpopluvOmely
#2
Chapter 19: omg from the game to the bathroom part I was freaking hooked
great update *______*
peasherman
#3
Chapter 19: You make me nervous the more I scroll down the page when they were playing I Never, oh Goooddd
Everything's worth it though~~ Nick and DaEun FTW!!!
And I hope you'll update Noona Call Me Oppa, KOI~!! ^^
miss_curang #4
Chapter 19: update soon please
AvenAcademyNichkhun #5
Chapter 19: I WAS WAITING FOR THIS CHAPTER MY WHOLE LIFE!!!! Update soln..u.u
Nichkhunieee #6
Chapter 19: YAY!!!! You updated!!!! I loveee this chappieee!! FINALLY!!! YOU FINALLY CONFESSED!!!! update soon?
70V3LY #7
Chapter 19: I'm so happy you updated! Thank you so much! The whole confession thing is super cute! Love it! Keep it up! :D
KOY333
#8
Chapter 19: Thank you everyone for being patient! Chapter 19 is up!!!
Beastlovergirl #9
update soon author-nim!
AvenAcademyNichkhun #10
Chapter 18: update soooooooooooooooooonnnnnnn <3