Water, water everywhere......

What is this life if, full of care.....
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Taemin’s POV :

 

 

 

It feels so good sitting here in the cool breeze, beside Minho hyung, looking at the midnight lamps together. I wish I could do this forever.

 

 

 

hmm...though right now, I feel like doing more than just sitting around.

 

 

 

“hyung, would you like to take a walk around this place? The building grounds seem so huge and beautiful. Who knows, we might even come across something pretty like how we found the midnight lamp!!”, I looked at Minho hyung with expectant eyes.

 

 

 

“Your midnight lamps! Sure. Let’s go around”, he smiled, probably at my childishness. But ah well, I like it when he smiles.

 

 

 

We got up from our wooden seat. The grounds had pebbled paths that broke into different branches and there was also a pebbled path that seemed to go around the building. I decided to take one of the paths that took us away from the building. Minho hyung walked silently beside me. I wonder why he's so quiet?

 

 

 

As we walked on, I noticed that sometimes there were open areas with small flower bushels and seats scattered here and

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uoosemi
#1
Chapter 16: This sooo nice! The scenes described in here soo beautiful! I lv this story ans thanks for the Sequel! :D
kurniawatinia #2
i like it and eager to read this story, but i hope this story is one of best story i ever had read
fayrenz #3
Chapter 16: This was just amazing!!
The scenes you described were so vivid and beautiful in my mind...and the feelings in your words, so precious ♡
It was a very luxurious read x)
jjongshoe
#4
Chapter 17: Duuuuuude you should make movies <3
cute-little-oppas
#5
Chapter 17: I loved this fic!! <3
Your writing style *O*
Seriously love this!
It had a mysterious charm, a soothing effect!
I'm in awe of you *O*
kalistamaria #6
Annyeong unnie um do you mind if i give you comments? Hope you dont >.< First i'll gladly tell you that I LOVE your writting style so damn much it was sweet and flown smoothly like a river I love it so much but there's one thing that bothering me it's about the point mark (.) that you used so much - too much to be honest i just wondering why cause i didnt think it was nescessary except for giving a longer effect but it could be changed with space tho im sorry for critize your story unnie mianhae

anyway please check my fic too and give comments so i could be as good as you http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/219980/noisless-scar-2min-jongkey-shinee-slice--jongkey2minonew
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/221490
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nomrawr #7
I loved how you had each line for the chapters. Like epic. No one would think so deep.

And Yes. The style u write is so different from the other fanfics you read anywhere else. <3
31lily
#8
oh and PLEASE do criticize my shortcomings!! I want to improve my writing skills!!....and I will welcome negative ones too! I want to become a better author.
nomrawr #9
2Min. Ah! Finally! ^^ I loved the story.
So worth all the time i spent reading it :3
31lily
#10
aww.....it doesn't matter.....now that you know the symbolism behind the whole thing, if you ever read this whole fic the second time over, you'll get to see new things within it, that your mind's eye didn't catch before!! ^^