The Dancing Moonlight

What is this life if, full of care.....
Please Subscribe to read the full chapter

 

........................................................................................................................................................

 

 

 

 

 

Onew’s POV :

 

 

 

Mr. Honda asked Jonghyun what he liked best about Kyoto.

 

 

 

“um...Yes. I think so too, sir”, he replied after hesitating for a moment. 

 

 

 

What on earth? That reply didn’t even make any sense!! I bet he wasn’t paying attention again. I rolled my eyes and tried to change the topic before Mr. Honda could make out what Jonghyun had replied. He owes me one. Maybe I’ll get him to buy me some food for this later. Ooh, I wonder if they have nice dishes with chicken in Japan?

 

 

 

After a few more minutes of talking to Mr. Honda, I had learnt so much about Kyoto and Japan in general. He said that Kyoto is famous for its sakura* and that if I would like to visit for vacation, I should come around the sakura matsuri** time to enjoy the best of Kyoto. I would definitely like to do that someday.

 

 

 

Suddenly, Mr. Honda seemed to notice an acquaintance nearby and he asked to take his leave. I think I like him. Maybe I’ll talk to him some more later on and get to find out more about this country.

 

 

 

Speaking of finding out, I wonder what’s bugging Jonghyun though. He’s never been this inattentive before and he’s usually the first to talk. But, lately he’s been so quiet. And he hasn’t spoken much to me either. I wonder if he’s feeling alright. Or maybe it’s some personal problem?. Should I ask him face to face?

 

 

 

“Jonghyun-ah—“, I opened my mouth but, he stopped me and said that he needed to talk to Kibum about something.

 

 

 

I watched him walk off in a hurry to where Kibum was standing. Did he just run away from me? But, WHY? I didn’t do anything wrong, did I? I don’t think I did. But then, why did he seem so nervous? Maybe I SHOULD talk to him and find out after all.

 

 

 

I walked over to the nearest buffet table as I made up my mind.

 

 

 

The next time I looked over to where they were standing, I didn’t see them anymore. I looked around and caught sight of them just as they were walking out the window.

 

 

 

hmm...I would like to get some fresh air too.

 

 

 

 

 

**************************************

 

 

 

 

 

Jonghyun’s POV :

 

 

 

Please Subscribe to read the full chapter
Like this story? Give it an Upvote!
Thank you!

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
uoosemi
#1
Chapter 16: This sooo nice! The scenes described in here soo beautiful! I lv this story ans thanks for the Sequel! :D
kurniawatinia #2
i like it and eager to read this story, but i hope this story is one of best story i ever had read
fayrenz #3
Chapter 16: This was just amazing!!
The scenes you described were so vivid and beautiful in my mind...and the feelings in your words, so precious ♡
It was a very luxurious read x)
jjongshoe
#4
Chapter 17: Duuuuuude you should make movies <3
cute-little-oppas
#5
Chapter 17: I loved this fic!! <3
Your writing style *O*
Seriously love this!
It had a mysterious charm, a soothing effect!
I'm in awe of you *O*
kalistamaria #6
Annyeong unnie um do you mind if i give you comments? Hope you dont >.< First i'll gladly tell you that I LOVE your writting style so damn much it was sweet and flown smoothly like a river I love it so much but there's one thing that bothering me it's about the point mark (.) that you used so much - too much to be honest i just wondering why cause i didnt think it was nescessary except for giving a longer effect but it could be changed with space tho im sorry for critize your story unnie mianhae

anyway please check my fic too and give comments so i could be as good as you http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/219980/noisless-scar-2min-jongkey-shinee-slice--jongkey2minonew
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/221490
kamsahamnida ^^
nomrawr #7
I loved how you had each line for the chapters. Like epic. No one would think so deep.

And Yes. The style u write is so different from the other fanfics you read anywhere else. <3
31lily
#8
oh and PLEASE do criticize my shortcomings!! I want to improve my writing skills!!....and I will welcome negative ones too! I want to become a better author.
nomrawr #9
2Min. Ah! Finally! ^^ I loved the story.
So worth all the time i spent reading it :3
31lily
#10
aww.....it doesn't matter.....now that you know the symbolism behind the whole thing, if you ever read this whole fic the second time over, you'll get to see new things within it, that your mind's eye didn't catch before!! ^^