Conquering the Mind's Maze....

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Onew’s POV :

 

 

 

 

 

“Jonghyun-ah, Minho said that he and Taemin will look for Kibum. Can we just sit down near the water for a little bit longer before we head back?”, I asked, almost sure that he will decline.

 

 

 

“...if you say so, hyung”, was his surprising reply as he sat down next to me.

 

 

 

That nervousness that I had seen in him seemed to have toned down a bit for the time being. He didn't seem like he wanted to run away from me anymore. Like he was ready for the worst and was finally surrendering. He just sat there looking at the water with unfathomable eyes.

 

 

 

I’m still finding it a little difficult to get the situation. If Jonghyun had feelings for me. Then what was that conversation that he and Kibum were having, that I accidentally heard, that night?

 

 

 

Did Kibum know that Jonghyun had feelings for me too? But, then why would he ask Jonghyun if he loved him?

 

 

 

“why didn’t you tell me before?”, I asked him softly.

 

 

 

“I...I was afraid how you might react.”, his voice trailed off.

 

 

 

“I thought you had feelings for Kibum.”

 

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uoosemi
#1
Chapter 16: This sooo nice! The scenes described in here soo beautiful! I lv this story ans thanks for the Sequel! :D
kurniawatinia #2
i like it and eager to read this story, but i hope this story is one of best story i ever had read
fayrenz #3
Chapter 16: This was just amazing!!
The scenes you described were so vivid and beautiful in my mind...and the feelings in your words, so precious ♡
It was a very luxurious read x)
jjongshoe
#4
Chapter 17: Duuuuuude you should make movies <3
cute-little-oppas
#5
Chapter 17: I loved this fic!! <3
Your writing style *O*
Seriously love this!
It had a mysterious charm, a soothing effect!
I'm in awe of you *O*
kalistamaria #6
Annyeong unnie um do you mind if i give you comments? Hope you dont >.< First i'll gladly tell you that I LOVE your writting style so damn much it was sweet and flown smoothly like a river I love it so much but there's one thing that bothering me it's about the point mark (.) that you used so much - too much to be honest i just wondering why cause i didnt think it was nescessary except for giving a longer effect but it could be changed with space tho im sorry for critize your story unnie mianhae

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nomrawr #7
I loved how you had each line for the chapters. Like epic. No one would think so deep.

And Yes. The style u write is so different from the other fanfics you read anywhere else. <3
31lily
#8
oh and PLEASE do criticize my shortcomings!! I want to improve my writing skills!!....and I will welcome negative ones too! I want to become a better author.
nomrawr #9
2Min. Ah! Finally! ^^ I loved the story.
So worth all the time i spent reading it :3
31lily
#10
aww.....it doesn't matter.....now that you know the symbolism behind the whole thing, if you ever read this whole fic the second time over, you'll get to see new things within it, that your mind's eye didn't catch before!! ^^