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What is this life if, full of care.....
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Onew’s POV :

 

 

 

 

“you know?! you know...about my feelings for you? But, how?”, he literally whispered in that husky voice of his.

 

 

 

It was my turn to gasp.

 

 

 

“What? I...WHAT?!!”, I almost shouted out the question in disbelief.

 

 

 

“Jonghyun-ah...are you feeling okay? I’m not Kibum, I’m Onew...”, I told him, still half disbelievingly

 

 

 

“I...huh? why is Key coming into this?” Jonghyun sounded confused too.

 

 

 

 

We spent some time looking at each other’s face confusedly.

 

 

 

 

And then...

 

 

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uoosemi #1
Chapter 16: This sooo nice! The scenes described in here soo beautiful! I lv this story ans thanks for the Sequel! :D
kurniawatinia #2
i like it and eager to read this story, but i hope this story is one of best story i ever had read
fayrenz #3
Chapter 16: This was just amazing!!
The scenes you described were so vivid and beautiful in my mind...and the feelings in your words, so precious ♡
It was a very luxurious read x)
jjongshoe #4
Chapter 17: Duuuuuude you should make movies <3
cute-little-oppas #5
Chapter 17: I loved this fic!! <3
Your writing style *O*
Seriously love this!
It had a mysterious charm, a soothing effect!
I'm in awe of you *O*
kalistamaria #6
Annyeong unnie um do you mind if i give you comments? Hope you dont >.< First i'll gladly tell you that I LOVE your writting style so damn much it was sweet and flown smoothly like a river I love it so much but there's one thing that bothering me it's about the point mark (.) that you used so much - too much to be honest i just wondering why cause i didnt think it was nescessary except for giving a longer effect but it could be changed with space tho im sorry for critize your story unnie mianhae

anyway please check my fic too and give comments so i could be as good as you http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/219980/noisless-scar-2min-jongkey-shinee-slice--jongkey2minonew
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/221490
kamsahamnida ^^
nomrawr #7
I loved how you had each line for the chapters. Like epic. No one would think so deep.

And Yes. The style u write is so different from the other fanfics you read anywhere else. <3
31lily #8
oh and PLEASE do criticize my shortcomings!! I want to improve my writing skills!!....and I will welcome negative ones too! I want to become a better author.
nomrawr #9
2Min. Ah! Finally! ^^ I loved the story.
So worth all the time i spent reading it :3
31lily #10
aww.....it doesn't matter.....now that you know the symbolism behind the whole thing, if you ever read this whole fic the second time over, you'll get to see new things within it, that your mind's eye didn't catch before!! ^^
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