The water’s edge

What is this life if, full of care.....
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Jonghyun’s POV :

 

 

 

 

 

“Jonghyun-ah--”

 

 

 

I almost jumped out of my skin when I heard his voice behind me. This was NOT the voice I wanted to hear right now even though I loved it so much. Not when I’m hopelessly confused over what to do. I turned my head and as I looked up, I found myself facing him.

 

 

 

“Oh, I’m so sorry. Did I surprise you?”, he said in that smooth, mellow voice of his.

 

 

 

Oh no. This is it. I’m dead. No escape anywhere. I found myself afraid of what was coming.

 

 

 

“Hyung! I...uh...what are you doing here?” I don’t even know WHAT I was saying, but I’m too scared right now to notice.

 

 

 

“what do you think I am doing?”, he replied, smiling at me.

 

 

 

“Why did you run away?”, he asked. But this time, there was no smile accompanying that question. It almost felt like he was screening me with those sharp eyes of his. I’ve rarely ever seen him without that smile that reached his eyes and made them seem so kind. And I just realized how intimidating those very eyes looked if he didn’t smile. They made

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uoosemi
#1
Chapter 16: This sooo nice! The scenes described in here soo beautiful! I lv this story ans thanks for the Sequel! :D
kurniawatinia #2
i like it and eager to read this story, but i hope this story is one of best story i ever had read
fayrenz #3
Chapter 16: This was just amazing!!
The scenes you described were so vivid and beautiful in my mind...and the feelings in your words, so precious ♡
It was a very luxurious read x)
jjongshoe
#4
Chapter 17: Duuuuuude you should make movies <3
cute-little-oppas
#5
Chapter 17: I loved this fic!! <3
Your writing style *O*
Seriously love this!
It had a mysterious charm, a soothing effect!
I'm in awe of you *O*
kalistamaria #6
Annyeong unnie um do you mind if i give you comments? Hope you dont >.< First i'll gladly tell you that I LOVE your writting style so damn much it was sweet and flown smoothly like a river I love it so much but there's one thing that bothering me it's about the point mark (.) that you used so much - too much to be honest i just wondering why cause i didnt think it was nescessary except for giving a longer effect but it could be changed with space tho im sorry for critize your story unnie mianhae

anyway please check my fic too and give comments so i could be as good as you http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/219980/noisless-scar-2min-jongkey-shinee-slice--jongkey2minonew
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/221490
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nomrawr #7
I loved how you had each line for the chapters. Like epic. No one would think so deep.

And Yes. The style u write is so different from the other fanfics you read anywhere else. <3
31lily
#8
oh and PLEASE do criticize my shortcomings!! I want to improve my writing skills!!....and I will welcome negative ones too! I want to become a better author.
nomrawr #9
2Min. Ah! Finally! ^^ I loved the story.
So worth all the time i spent reading it :3
31lily
#10
aww.....it doesn't matter.....now that you know the symbolism behind the whole thing, if you ever read this whole fic the second time over, you'll get to see new things within it, that your mind's eye didn't catch before!! ^^