In the Blink of an Eye
Description
When you meet someone who changes your life just like that, it leaves a mark. If someone gave you back your will to live would you ever be able to let that person go? What if that person has no clue what they did for you? If it meant you would have to keep a big secret from not only that person but everyone else?
In the Blink of an Eye the world will be turned upside down when they don’t expect it, when they don’t see it coming, when they don’t want it but some things are out of their hands and they just have to make the best of it.
It is a story where a foreigner gets pulled into the idol world. A walking devil some would say, a guardian angel to others but in the end this person is undeniably troubled beyond most peoples understanding. Will this person ever find peace? Or is death the only end for the one with two lives?
"When you feel lonely, I will make you smile, you're not alone, you're not alone, cuz I am here for you, I'm afraid you're gone for good"
Soon this story will be reposted under a new name soon. It will have been undergone a review for grammatic mistakes and a few other things. When the new comes up I wil update here to let you know.
Here is the reupload of this story. Fast updates.
Genre: Angst, comedy, romance, action. Life have all sides so why shouldn't my story
Rated: Should probably be, contains some
Hallo you who just wanted to see what this is. Welcome to my story. This story is my baby and I have put a lot of time and effort into it. In this writing moment I have one Chapter left to update so I'm am a bit melancholic. Writing this story and hearing what people thought of it has been amazing. I'm told it is original and that my characters have depth.
Thank you for taking the time to get to this line. I hope you will give it a chance because I think it will take ou by surprise. The beginning is... heavy I guess. Well not the beginning but the first rated chapters. For some they might be hard to get past but this story has a lot of humor and sweet moments so don't think it is all like that.
Let me know what you think of my story. I'm allways happy to hear any sort of respons.
This story has some and some cursing but not a whole lot.
Foreword
This is short take outs from different chapters. Just to give you an idea of how I write
1.
Inside Dari is watching Zico picking on Eli who lashes out at him “Why oh WHY do we have to bring have that guy with us?”
“Because I’m that good” Zico smirks and takes a seat with a content sigh.
“You forgetting I can kick your ?” Eli grins and shows him his fist.
“I think just about anyone here can kick his ” Dari grins. Yong Guk and JunHyung nods in agreement. Zico looks from one to another with a slightly nervous look “Right right” He laughs nervously and frowns a bit leaning back in the couch. The other four chuckles and takes their seats as well.
2.
Seungho sighs. Typical Alex not really giving him any useful answer and he is too tired to try harder.
“Come out and say hi”
He frowns “What?”
“You said I was talking too loud”
He sits up rubbing his eyes “I know. I heard it I just don’t understands it”
“I thought your Japanese was better than that”
“Alex!! It’s 3 in the morning and I’m not really awake. What do you mean come out and say hi?” He looks at ByungHee hearing the guy snore. “Lucky bastard” He mumbles and sighs.
“I’m outside your door”
Seungho frowns. Did he hear that right? He gets up and slowly walks towards the door “My door? Outside the hotel?”
“No outside your room”
“I gotta be dreaming” He mumbles again “How can you be outside my door?” He is stops looking at the door moving a hand to the knob.
“That’s a stupid question”
3.
She pushes away from the wall “Thanks for helping” She bows for them formally and then straigtens up and walks over to YongGuk hitting him over the head “Now what the were you thinking getting involved in a fight!” She yells pushing his chest looking quite scary. YongGuk frowns and steps back.
She moves on to Eli and smacks him as well before pointing a finger at his face “You are ing idols!” She moves over to SooHyun flicking his forehead again “Use your heads!” She scowls at the last two “When people come at you with a bat you RUN!”
4.
They get to the roof and Seungho and Sang Hyun walks away from Alex and YongGuk who scratches his neck and looks after them.
“It’s really cute” Alex grins pulling one of the ears of the bunny costume
“You wear it then” He mumbles
“No thanks pink isn’t really my color” Alex smirks
YongGuk widens his eyes “Not really mine either but did that stop them? They forced me into it!”
Alex just chuckles.
5.
They both freeze when they hear the door open. YongGuk is ready to run out but Seungho stops him by placing a hand on his arm and holds a finger to his own lips signaling for them to be quite. The time she said Mei’s ex had broken into her place lingering in the back of his head.
“Are you sure you’ll be fine?” a male voice “Something like that can be very traumatic”
Seungho and YongGuk feel the blood in their veins turn cold. They can hear people moving around
“I’m good”
They both breathe a little easier by the sound of Alex’s voice
“Alright, well we will have a man outside your apartment. Just a repercussion…” another man voice
“In case I try and run” Alex adds
6.
“Wrong answer” She presses his throat harder “You really wanna make an enemy in me?”
The guy shakes his head. She lets go of him and he gasps for air falling to the ground.
“You are mental” He sends her a cruel look and she kicks him in the side, hard “I’m the ing devil” She mumbles and readies for another kick.
“FINE!” He yells in pain and tells her about these guys he heard about, who talked about kidnapping an idol. “I didn’t believe them. Who would be stupid enough to go for an idol with you around” the guy says holding on to his side.
7.
“I see” HimChan looks down “YongGuk already knows this doesn’t he?”
“Knows what?” YongGuk comes in. No one had heard the door. He freezes when he sees Alex and shoots a quick look to DaeHyun and YoungJae before frowning. He looks back at Alex realizing what state she is in “What happened to you?” he drops the bag and walks over looking closer at her face, running a finger over the bruised cheekbone before realizing he is doing it.
“She got beat up” HimChan says. Daehyun and YoungJae looks at each other and smirks
Alex waves a hand “It’s not as bad as it seems”
“Don’t lie” Zelo frowns “When Thunder hugged you it caused you a lot of pain and…” Alex cuts him off with a glare.
“I’m saying it’s nothing so it’s nothing alright” Alex says calmly
“Bull” YongGuk huffs and crosses his arms “ing bull and you know it”
Alex looks at him and chuckles “Don’t use my words against me kid”
YongGuk frowns hard “I’m not a kid!” He growls and shakes his head walking back to his bag picking it up and walking to his room.
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