Onew

Remember Me Forever

I wake up on Jonghyun's shoulder, his head on mine. Out of confusion i shove him away from me and jump up, looking all around. How did i get here? where am i?

Jonghyun struggles to his knees, wiping his eyes with his hands.

"What's wrong?" he shouts, standing up.

"Where are we?" I ask him, narrowing my eyes.

"You got tired so we just stayed here. What's the matter? you're acting crazy." He runs a hand through his hair fixing it from his rest.

"Ca jah," I order, motioning with my head to leave out to the car. 

"He wasnt here. do you think he went back to the hotel?"

I blink, stopping next to the car. "WHo?"

"Who do you think?" Jonghyun says, hitting my shoulder. 

"If Minho is not back yet than we have to tell someone. I am the leader. I will tell the managers."

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lia2001 #1
Chapter 22: More
lia2001 #2
Chapter 22: More
AjSummer #3
Chapter 22: I hope that TaeMin will start to get better now but he won't be 100% better until his hyungs are better too.
FlamingMe
#4
Chapter 22: you're not updating this anymore? :(
mai994
#5
it's been so long since you have updated :)
kayeblaise #6
So. . .I totally just found this story hidden in my bookmarks (with like 15 more chapters than when I saved it)and I just read through the whole thing so. . . I figured I should probably subscribe. XD XD <3

This is great. I love your style, it's very detached in a way, like we're getting the real thoughts inside someone's head. That kind of zoning out feeling and self reflection that I love. I like how there's this constantly moving pace and developing drama and I really love how you're writing the relationships between the members. They're not too cutesy and overly lovey, they're all flawed but they're all working to make things better even as they're falling apart. <3 I love how everyone has a role (like, people always forget Onew XD ) and the tension is building so nicely. I can't wait to see where you go with this :) <3
Flaming_oppa
#7
update soooooon
kibumLuv
#8
oh god... can't wait. >_<'
mai994
#9
taemin is kinda good now *thank god* :D
what happened to minho?
onew is the best leaser :) :D
Kindeldunya #10
oooh tension! can't wait to read the next chap! I'm glad taemin is more stable now and onew is such a cute leader. i feel bad for minho though.