Fourth Girl - The Tomboy ^-^

Idols Make Them Good Girls Go Bad (APPLY CLOSED)

Do I even need this part any more?


 "It's our turn!" the girl in front of Jennifer squealed. They had been waiting forever, but Jennifer's row had finally stood up and began to move toward the stage. The girl who had spoken couldn't seem to hold in her excitement and glee as she practically skipped closer and closer to what she was so wound up about. Even though it was getting on her nerves a bit, Jennifer kept her cool, calm attitude and focused on what was to come. She kept counting her money in her head. She had been a little short before, but her uncle had (halleluiah) asked her to clean their house and raised her pay to $100. It had been more pity than anything, but she had worked hard and nothing was going to stop her from going on this trip.

An image of Dongwoon flashed through her head as she thought of the trip to come. "I wonder if I'll see him," she mused under her breath. She had been so deep in thought that she hadn't even realized that the line had reached the stage and certain people had already been called up. 'My name would echo throughout the room next,' she thought as the peppy girl climbed the steps. Then, she slipped. Jennifer had the sudden memory of Mimi falling just about half an hour earlier. 'Wow, she would get along well with Mimi as long as they don't kill themselves first.'

Jennifer stepped up one stair and stretched out her arms. The girl who was falling backward landed heavily in Jennifer's grasp and she helped the terrified girl back onto her feet. A sigh of relief went through the crowd for a second time that night, but this time is was accompanied with a slight "Awww" as Jennifer told the girl to be more careful and winked at her. 'Well that isn't going to help my reputation as a normal, straight teenager, but she could've gotten really hurt,' Jennifer consoled herself.

The girl thanked Jennifer kindly and walked toward the podium like nothing had happened. 'Yup, nothing like Mimi,' Jennifer remarked sarcastically.

"And the hero of the evening, Jennifer Xayavongsy!" the principal boomed with almost as much emphasis as when he had said Ru Na's name.

Jennifer stood up proud and tall and began to make her way toward the smiling assembly on stage. She was aware that her chunky sneakers clunked noisily as she walked, but it didn't matter. The diploma was hers and so was the money she needed to make it to Korea.


Sorry for the short update, but I really want to get a move on and get the story started!

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AyooGullWassap
#1
oohhh forgot to say, this is no0nespeciaL_xD, i applied as elle - the ____. xD
i moved to this account~ :3
--sakura
#2
I don't think this chapter ! It was really interesting to read ^^ Wow, I didn't know that Runa was born on the same day as her grandma death. Shame on her family for hating her because of that reason. And Jennifer with 7 siblings?!?! Dang! I don't think I can last a day like that if I had 7 other siblings xD

Author-nim: Don't worry if you don't have any inspiration to write!! That happens to me all the time. Just write when ever you feel like it ^^ That's what I do or you could listen to some music. I do that too xD Anyways, I hope you find your inspiration when you're writing :] Hwaiting~!!!!
CaramelBee
#3
This chapter doesn't ____ at all! You portrayed Runa's family soooo perfectly! Her sisters, her mother, and the sandsack XD And Jennifer, 7 siblings, seriously? Her mother is so strong, hahaha *kidding* Jennifer has such a warm and happy family! Sometimes I wish to have lots of siblings too, hehe :D
@author-nim, it's okay! I don't mind at all, really. If that makes you happy then do it XD I mean, if it's for the story's good, then why not? Oh, and if you often feel uninspired, you can read comics or watch some movies, I always get inspiration by doing that, haha :) update soon, author-nim! Hwaiting~
thelucifer #4
lol i don't think this chapter at all, author-nim!:) you actually portrayed Jennifer's family very well - Nina's actually based on my 2nd oldest sister, who's also my favorite;P but man - runa.. that family sounds a lot like my favorite cousin's family.. and they really are jerks like them... runa hwaiting! author-nim hwaiting!!
CaramelBee
#5
GAAAH LUCKY MIMI! She's sure a wealthy kid :3 hehehehe. And, Jason's such a naughty boy :p but Ally is ready to scold him, kekeke :D Ally is such a good sister, she cares a lot about her siblings :') waiting for next chapter! Update soon author-nim, fighting! >u<
thelucifer #6
lol i love this chapter - i think it's a great idea to write about everyone's background^^ gives us an insight as to how everyone is who they are today. and don't get me started on super junior's y free & single!! oh my gah - yesung is totally ruining my bias list!! i swear it's the year of the guy-liner.. and i'm so glad that kangin oppa is back:D it was really cool to see him back. sungmin - you work that blonde hair like it's nothing! donghae - you are just so umph! kyuhyun oppa - always and forever will i love your voice:D and yours too, ryeowook.. i can go on all day about the video but i'll probably take too much space lol i can't wait for the rest of the girls' chapters!!!
sujuloverx15
#7
OMG I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!! I love how you wrote the interaction between Ally and her siblings! And Mim is so cute! She's like a princess~ Can't wait for the next update! ^_^

Oh, and about Suju's y, Free & Single MV... AIUFGAHSFBVOASLFNWEIROUYVBFJSAKCOAUFVBOAIUSGFBUAGFBCHJB AOGVFRSBDKJVACGKJVHBACKNFHSVOASDBVCGOVISHADSBDGVAILJSHDLISB
*dead*

I hope that explains how I feel ;)
--sakura
#8
ahhhhhhhhh the chapter was so cute!!!!
ally was so funny xD
i can't wait for the other chapters >.<
and OMJ!!!!
i did!!!!!!!!!!!!
the mv was so... kjshfuaseyhfeyaiuvbyweuiyveiropawervwevr (a new word i invented. meaning: totally awesome that a fan girl can not resist but watch it over and over again while spazzing out occasionally)