Reality

Heart Strings
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CHAPTER 6: Reality

 

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As the other restaurants started to be busy, Ha Signature restaurant already put a "Close" sign on the main door. The owner deliberately chose the consumer market in the morning until afternoon. Not because the results of market research show so, but because the owner doesn't like to work at night. For her, at night should be used to relax.

Although not open until evening, Ha Signature restaurant always looks crowded by customers. Not even at general meals time, there are customers who stop by and order food at the restaurant. Of course it's because the deliciousness of the dishes and it tastes like home cooking. The taste that is missed by many nomads in the capital city like Seoul.

The restaurant's open schedule which only until late afternoon also benefited its employees. They can do other activities in the evening according to their hobbies, such as Jaehwan who often join a music performance in cafe, Jihoon with practice boxing, or Woojin by practicing dance with his group. Daniel also has an agenda after the restaurant closed. He quite often went to visit Dongho, the owner of a motorbike service station near the restaurant.

 

 

"Oi, Niel!" Dongho greeted Daniel as soon as he saw Niel getting into the garage.

"You're alone, hyung? The others have gone home?" Daniel asked the built man who was busy fiddling with the bike.

"Yeah. That's why I ask you to come here often. To keep me company while others are busy with their own agenda. "

Dongho's answer made Daniel chuckle. Perhaps if it's only a glimpse, the grim-faced man with tattoos all over his body would look like a mafia gang member who could crush an enemy in one punch. But that doesn't apply to Daniel. He had known Dongho for a long time, and understood that he really isn't scary as he looks like. Daniel even once, saw Dongho shedding tears when finding his fish dead.

"You should also start looking for your own agenda, Hyung. Find a lover! Don't just busy dating Tiger." Daniel replied, commenting Dongho who was busy modifying Tiger, his favorite motorbike.

"Hey, don't tease me, you punk! Isn't there a mirror in your house?" Dongho teased back Daniel who actually also didn't have a lover.

Ignoring Dongho, Daniel's eyes were then focused on large-bodied motorbike parked at the end of the garage. "Woah, is there a new bike, Hyung?"

Dongho glanced briefly, making sure which bike Daniel meant. "Ah, yeah. It belongs to Seokhoon hyung."

Daniel was surprised. "It's Seokhoon hyung's too?? Crazy! How many bikes does he have? "

"Many. I'm sure he can open the showroom with his collection." Dongho replied a little joking.

Daniel was seeing the bike with admiration. "The body is smooth. Stickers are still good. It looks perfect, hyung! Why it is sent here? "He asked Dongho.

"That's old bike, Niel. First generation of 250CC motorbike. Seokhoon hyung said, its sound isn't cool anymore. I haven't checked it yet. Just try to check it! Take the black key with a skull keychain, it's in the usual cabinet." Dongho replied without taking his eyes off of Tiger.

Daniel went straight to where the key was stored and took the key that Dongho had described. In a flash, he was back to the bike he admired. Carefully, he started the engine and the bike started roaring. "Hyung, can I take it for a walk?"

Dongho looked up to see Daniel from a distance. "Yeah, just go out. Don't forget to bring girl home." Dongho replied, teasing Daniel.

"Hish." Daniel only laughed for a moment before he started running the bike and took it around Seoul.

 

 

 

Daniel's lips couldn't stop smiling. He thought this bike is the closest to his ideal type. Big body wrapped with smooth blue stickers, his favorite color. The engine power is strong but easy to control. The sound of the engine is somewhat smoother than the other motor sport in general, as the owner complained. But for Daniel, it doesn't reduce the elegance of the bike.

"Seokhoon hyung, I fall in love with your bike. Can this be mine?" Daniel ruffled behind his helmet while continuing to smile.

 

 

 

It wasn't only Daniel who can't stop smiling, there is other people who also can't help himself not to smile.

Seongwoo just finished working on his first day. There is actually a tradition of welcoming new employees by going for a drink and karaoke applied in the office where Seongwoo works. But they couldn’t do it in the first day of Seongwoo working beca

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Edit Seungwoo to Seongwoo after finding out that the proper spelling of his name is Seongwoo not Seungwoo ^^

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Love_ongniel #1
Chapter 14: HI AUTHOR-NIM..HEHE I CAN CALL YOU THAT RIGHT..I DIDN'T KNOW WHETHER YOU WILL CAME ACROSS MY COMMENTS OR NOT..BUT I WANT TO SAID, I LOVE THIS SO MUCH..I REALLY LOVE WHEN THE STORY INVOLVE ALL MEMBERS AND THANKS NOT MAKING ME CRY TILL END? I'M SCARE THAT YOU WILL MAKE ONE OF THEM DIE OR WHAT LIKE IN MV THAT I ALMOST THROW MY PHONE BECAUSE IM SO SCARE ? AND THANKS FOR THIS AMAZING PIECE ?
-escaping
#2
Chapter 14: i rarely comment on fanfics, let alone read on this website!! i just visited this site for a long time to read some random fics and this is very touching. great story! :>
hisnoona #3
Chapter 15: HUWOOOOOW NEW STORY
ChanBaekNunna #4
Chapter 14: Disini boleh gak yah komen pake bahasa Indonesia? Soalnya bahasa Inggris saya pas2an Thor...author orang Indonesia kan? Gapapa ya kalo saya pake bahasa Indonesia? Huftt...masih nyesek nie. Mau ngungkapin segala sesak didada(?) selama baca ff ini tapi bingung mau ketik apa? Hehe. Yg jelas makasih Author uda buat saya mewek n mata bengkak dihampir tiap chapter-nya. Bener2 jago deh bikin nyesek pembaca, dua jempol buat plot-nya. Kurangnya cuma di typo aja sih yg paling ketara, banyak kata yg seharusnya HE tapi diketik SHE ato sebaliknya SHE jadi HE, Brother jadi Sister (chapter 5). Sayang bgt jadi rada keganggu bacanya tapi overall KEREN ff-nya. Jujur saya ngarepnya jadi Romance OngNiel-nya ( #OngNielShipper hehe) tapi gapapa, bromance juga bagus ceritanya. Ahh saya kebanyakan ngoceh...sekali lg makasih Author uda sedikit 'bantu' saya mikir ttg hidup saya ;)
sarahban #5
Chapter 14: YEAYY FINALLY THEY MEET...IT THE BEST ENDING WHEN EVERYBODY DINNER TOGETHER AT THE ROOFTOP
FunnyKen #6
You actually made me Cry ..I cried like I found my own long lost brother..u r too good at making people cry ????..I loved this fic..I completed this in 3days.. anyways Happy New Year Author-nim
Eungi_
32 streak #7
Chapter 14: Ahh, I love the fluffy ending —although I expected a full blast angst based from the MV since I'm a pathetic masochist who will then bugs with "why" all the time but okay whatever forget it— I honestly thought the story would be longer. Daniel will wait for Seongwoo and the latter letting him go with his heart but this ending is good too. I was as shocked as Seongwoo when Daniel appeared in front of him.

I like Kuanlin's introduction here. He's the same as the 'sweet guy' in real life (and I love the joke Seongwoo made regarding his heart is as handsome as his face lmao) Although, the other characters —the Wanna One members I mean— are mentioned very brief and I would likely be bitter about it, I think it's fine since it's like that too in the MV. Nu'est appearance are also as acceptable. They're older so they fit well as employees at the company. Frankly, I don't understand the need of Giae, an OC in this fic since it already has numerous of characters. If she is created for advising Daniel, I think any of Daniel's close friends can do that —preferably Jisung or Jaehwan since they know Daniel's backstory and would suit very well for said dialogues— but she never interrupted any scenes or spoil the plot or a turnoff or whatsoever so yeah. She's all right.

The plot overall is great. The way you express the characters' emotions & describe each scenes are good. I'm satisfied with the story & the ending.

Grammatical errors can still be spotted but your vocabulary is good. Misspelling is also visible here and there (I assume they're mistyped words instead of misspelled) but as I said, it doesn't ruin the story at all. So don't worry too much (but it's better if you take a look at them once you have the time and do some tweaks to the typo words) Also, I suggest you change the title from "HEARTSTRING" to "Heart Strings" nothing drastic actually, just the change of the capital letters and a space sot would look decent (not that the caps lock isn't, it just doesn't look right or captivating much)

You're very potential to be an excellent author. Don't give up & keep going on, okay? You've done a great job for this. I apologize if my comment offends you (some say I'm too blunt on criticizing/reviewing/commenting on fanfics) and taking a large space at the comment section. I'm always like this when it comes to fics I approve lmao. I like your poster too. Little Daniel & Seongwoo are very cute (did you watch the kids' audition on Wanna One Go? It was very impressive)

Okay, so I gotta stop talking now. Thank you for sharing this with all of us. We appreciate it very much. Keep on going forward :)
ephemeral_sm #8
Chapter 14: The ending is real great!! Double thumbs up for you! I wish i can give more thou.... Really good job you've done there authornimmm. Thank you for this touching story ^^
hisnoona #9
Chapter 14: YEAYYY COMPLETED!!!!!!!! thanks for completing this story and updated reguraly and thank you for writing about wanna one. Its really hard to find story about wanna one that have a good story and or not . I know maybe its only about preference and out there maybe there are a lot story bout wannaone. But actually its hard to find a story that fit my style. So i'm glad you make it. Thank you!!! Cheers!