Distance

Heart Strings
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CHAPTER 10: Distance

 

Is this you, Seongwoo Hyung?

Seongwoo paused in confusion to see Daniel watching him deeply. Fortunately Minhyun was aware of Daniel's arrival and approached them.

"Oh, you're here, Niel?" Greeted Minhyun woke Daniel up from his thought.

"Ah .. y-yes, hyung .. this is.. the order." Daniel answered while giving a big box of food to Minhyun.

Minhyun received it and then immediately took out his wallet. At that time, Seongwoo immediately prevented it. "My treat, Manager Hwang .."

"Eh, no, just use this, it's our team’s money." Minhyun wanted to pay for it but it was preceded by Seongwoo who already gave some money to Daniel.

Daniel, who was still trying to calm himself, could only accept the money, his hands trembling.

"That's a token of gratitude for you all, for wanting to help me at the meeting earlier .." said Seongwoo at Minhyun full of smile.

Daniel fell silent again at Seongwoo's smile. A smile that resembled a smile that made him feel calm all those years ago.

"Okay, thanks then." Replied Minhyun before he realized something. "Oh, I haven’t introduced you both.. Sean, this is Daniel. Daniel, this is Sean Ong, a new employee here .."

"Just call me Sean, happy to meet you." Said Seongwoo kindly while offering handshakes.

Daniel stared at the waiting hand for a moment, disappointed.

Sean?

Ong?

So it isn’t...... Kang Seongwoo?

Daniel reached for Seongwoo's hand and shook it slowly. "D-daniel .."

"Your name is cool!" Seongwoo replied friendly.

"Yes, his friends say he's a foreigner." Minhyun said for the silent Daniel.

"Really? Then, should we talk in English?" Seongwoo's joke made Daniel forcing himself to laugh.

Wanting to end the confusion he felt, Daniel chose to leave. "H-hyung, I'll excuse myself .." He bowed making a greeting before finally walking out of the office.

Somehow, Seongwoo felt sad that his encounter with Daniel should be that short.

While Minhyun brought food into the conference room, Seongwoo chose to remain standing watching Daniel's back disappear from his gaze.

Does he know me?

Why did he look so shocked?

"Come over Sean, let's eat!" Called Chief Kim to break his mind.

"Oh yes, Chief!" Seongwoo replied, then decided to stop thinking about the delivery man.

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While outside the building, Daniel stood silent, still trying to calm himself.

He's not Seongwoo hyung, Niel! Stop thinking everyone is him! He shouted to himself.

Daniel thought he was acting really stupid. He hadn’t even counted the money the man had given and immediately accepted it.

He opened his right fist containing the money, the money the man gave him was excessive, but Daniel didn’t dare to go back inside and meet him again.

I’ll just give this to Woojin. Let him return it. Said Daniel silently as he walked away.

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It wasn’t only Daniel who was thinking about that brief encounter. Even though didn’t know the reason, Seongwoo also kept thinking about the man who delivered the food, how his shocked face looks very awkward.

Why should he be surprised to see me?

Or maybe he's ....

Not wanting curiosity to continue to haunt him, Seongwoo asked Minhyun. "Manager Hwang, the man earlier .. I mean who delivered the food earlier .."

"Daniel?"

"Yes, Daniel .." Seongwoo replied quickly. "How old is he, Manager Hwang?"

Minhyun looks surprised by Seongwoo's question. "Why suddenly asked his age?"

Seongwoo wondered how to explain it. "Mmm .. no, it's just .."

Minhyun who is quite observant was immediately asked, "Does he look like your brother?"

Seongwoo was overwhelmed with Minhyun's question. "Ah .. no.. It was just.. he saw me with a different look .. So it made me .."

Minhyun stopped tidying up the file and then looked at Seongwoo while saying, "Daniel is an orphan, Sean."

"Oh?" Seongwoo was shocked to find out.

"He lives with his friends at the roof house above the restaurant building where they work," said Minhyun, "If you asked how old he is, I think Daniel's age is about a year or two below you."

Seeing Seongwoo shocked again, Minhyun added the question, "Is your brother’s age around that?"

Seongwoo who was still bewildered nodded slowly. "Y-yes .. He's a year and a half below my age.."

Minhyun smiled a little. "Woah, it’s really coincident.. No wonder you immediately remember your brother when you saw Daniel .."

"Ah .. yes, coincidentally .." Seongwoo felt himself doing something stupid, how he suddenly thought the stranger was Euigeon.

"Someday I will bring you to visit them. Even they are living a life of deprivation, but they support each other, and spending time with them is fun, I even have a foster brother there, Jinyoung."

Minhyun's words just shocked Seongwoo. "Foster brother?"

Minhyun nodded. "Yeah, I'm determined to help to pay Jinyoung's tuition fees go to college. The kids are actually really smart and talented. I dislike it if they don’t get a decent education just because of the cost problem." said Minhyun with a sad face.

He added, "Daniel is good at fiddling with automotive engines. Actually I advised him to go to take a major in mechanical engineering. But he refused, he said it rather be used for his younger brothers to go to college. But in fact, Jihoon and Woojin also refused to go to college. So I wish Jinyoung, their youngest brother will obey me. " Minhyun finished his story with a smile like a father.

Seongwoo's heart was warm, he was amazed at Minhyun. The man is not only handsome, but also has an angelic heart.

"Yes, next time take me there, Manager Hwang, I want to get to know them better." Said Seongwoo with a smile.

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Edit Seungwoo to Seongwoo after finding out that the proper spelling of his name is Seongwoo not Seungwoo ^^

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Love_ongniel #1
Chapter 14: HI AUTHOR-NIM..HEHE I CAN CALL YOU THAT RIGHT..I DIDN'T KNOW WHETHER YOU WILL CAME ACROSS MY COMMENTS OR NOT..BUT I WANT TO SAID, I LOVE THIS SO MUCH..I REALLY LOVE WHEN THE STORY INVOLVE ALL MEMBERS AND THANKS NOT MAKING ME CRY TILL END? I'M SCARE THAT YOU WILL MAKE ONE OF THEM DIE OR WHAT LIKE IN MV THAT I ALMOST THROW MY PHONE BECAUSE IM SO SCARE ? AND THANKS FOR THIS AMAZING PIECE ?
-escaping
#2
Chapter 14: i rarely comment on fanfics, let alone read on this website!! i just visited this site for a long time to read some random fics and this is very touching. great story! :>
hisnoona #3
Chapter 15: HUWOOOOOW NEW STORY
ChanBaekNunna #4
Chapter 14: Disini boleh gak yah komen pake bahasa Indonesia? Soalnya bahasa Inggris saya pas2an Thor...author orang Indonesia kan? Gapapa ya kalo saya pake bahasa Indonesia? Huftt...masih nyesek nie. Mau ngungkapin segala sesak didada(?) selama baca ff ini tapi bingung mau ketik apa? Hehe. Yg jelas makasih Author uda buat saya mewek n mata bengkak dihampir tiap chapter-nya. Bener2 jago deh bikin nyesek pembaca, dua jempol buat plot-nya. Kurangnya cuma di typo aja sih yg paling ketara, banyak kata yg seharusnya HE tapi diketik SHE ato sebaliknya SHE jadi HE, Brother jadi Sister (chapter 5). Sayang bgt jadi rada keganggu bacanya tapi overall KEREN ff-nya. Jujur saya ngarepnya jadi Romance OngNiel-nya ( #OngNielShipper hehe) tapi gapapa, bromance juga bagus ceritanya. Ahh saya kebanyakan ngoceh...sekali lg makasih Author uda sedikit 'bantu' saya mikir ttg hidup saya ;)
sarahban #5
Chapter 14: YEAYY FINALLY THEY MEET...IT THE BEST ENDING WHEN EVERYBODY DINNER TOGETHER AT THE ROOFTOP
FunnyKen #6
You actually made me Cry ..I cried like I found my own long lost brother..u r too good at making people cry ????..I loved this fic..I completed this in 3days.. anyways Happy New Year Author-nim
Eungi_
32 streak #7
Chapter 14: Ahh, I love the fluffy ending —although I expected a full blast angst based from the MV since I'm a pathetic masochist who will then bugs with "why" all the time but okay whatever forget it— I honestly thought the story would be longer. Daniel will wait for Seongwoo and the latter letting him go with his heart but this ending is good too. I was as shocked as Seongwoo when Daniel appeared in front of him.

I like Kuanlin's introduction here. He's the same as the 'sweet guy' in real life (and I love the joke Seongwoo made regarding his heart is as handsome as his face lmao) Although, the other characters —the Wanna One members I mean— are mentioned very brief and I would likely be bitter about it, I think it's fine since it's like that too in the MV. Nu'est appearance are also as acceptable. They're older so they fit well as employees at the company. Frankly, I don't understand the need of Giae, an OC in this fic since it already has numerous of characters. If she is created for advising Daniel, I think any of Daniel's close friends can do that —preferably Jisung or Jaehwan since they know Daniel's backstory and would suit very well for said dialogues— but she never interrupted any scenes or spoil the plot or a turnoff or whatsoever so yeah. She's all right.

The plot overall is great. The way you express the characters' emotions & describe each scenes are good. I'm satisfied with the story & the ending.

Grammatical errors can still be spotted but your vocabulary is good. Misspelling is also visible here and there (I assume they're mistyped words instead of misspelled) but as I said, it doesn't ruin the story at all. So don't worry too much (but it's better if you take a look at them once you have the time and do some tweaks to the typo words) Also, I suggest you change the title from "HEARTSTRING" to "Heart Strings" nothing drastic actually, just the change of the capital letters and a space sot would look decent (not that the caps lock isn't, it just doesn't look right or captivating much)

You're very potential to be an excellent author. Don't give up & keep going on, okay? You've done a great job for this. I apologize if my comment offends you (some say I'm too blunt on criticizing/reviewing/commenting on fanfics) and taking a large space at the comment section. I'm always like this when it comes to fics I approve lmao. I like your poster too. Little Daniel & Seongwoo are very cute (did you watch the kids' audition on Wanna One Go? It was very impressive)

Okay, so I gotta stop talking now. Thank you for sharing this with all of us. We appreciate it very much. Keep on going forward :)
ephemeral_sm #8
Chapter 14: The ending is real great!! Double thumbs up for you! I wish i can give more thou.... Really good job you've done there authornimmm. Thank you for this touching story ^^
hisnoona #9
Chapter 14: YEAYYY COMPLETED!!!!!!!! thanks for completing this story and updated reguraly and thank you for writing about wanna one. Its really hard to find story about wanna one that have a good story and or not . I know maybe its only about preference and out there maybe there are a lot story bout wannaone. But actually its hard to find a story that fit my style. So i'm glad you make it. Thank you!!! Cheers!