Separation

Heart Strings
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CHAPTER 2: Separation

 

Seongwoo is a smart and energetic boy. He always showed enthusiasm in every lesson and also playing around with passion. Not only the teachers who love him but also his peers. Seongwoo is known as a happy virus who always makes others laugh. He is also known to be very affectionate with his younger brother. All of his friends at his school knew Euigeon from Seongwoo's stories. He even asked for permission from the teacher to bring Euigeon to school with him, even though the request was rejected because Euigeon has not old enough to go to school with Seongwoo.

Teachers at his school saw Seongwoo as a more mature boy than his peers. Though often joking and teasing his friends, Seongwoo never forgot to apologize afterwards and even showed guilty by giving his toys or asking the teacher to add his friend's lunch portion as another form of apology. Once upon a time, Doyeon, Seongwoo's friend, fell off the swing and Seongwoo immediately ran up to her then asked if Doyeon was doing fine. The crying Doyeon was soothed by Seongwoo who keeps saying "Don’t cry. Strong girl doesn’t cry. Teacher is coming soon. If you stop crying, the teacher will give you star."

Seongwoo can do so because he's used to being a figure of older brother. Although only a half-year older than Euigeon, but Seongwoo is really taking care of his brother. For Seongwoo, if he is happy, then Euigeon is also worth to get the same amount of happiness. For Seongwoo, it was one of the forms of compensation he could give Euigeon because his mother loved him more. Often Seongwoo sees her mother being unfair to Euigeon, as Euigeon is not allowed to ask for more food, or Euigeon doesn’t get new clothes on his birthday like Seongwoo, or Euigeon who never gets a kiss on the forehead every night they're about to sleep. His mother who often praises that Seongwoo is a smart boy makes Seongwoo think his mother loves him more because he is smarter than Euigeon or because Euigeon cannot read like him yet. Therefore, he insisted on bringing Euigeon to school or bringing books to read with Euigeon at home.

Seongwoo didn’t know if Euigeon realizes that he's getting a different treatment from his mother because Euigeon is rarely complaining. Once, one day, her mother scolded Euigeon because that innocent boy bringing home the kittens he found on the street. Seongwoo didn’t understand the reason his mother scolded Euigeon, isn't it as fellow beings should love each other? That's what his teacher taught at school. But his mother continued to scold Euigeon by shouting, "Not enough I have to feed you, do you ask me to feed them too? Stop giving me hard times!"

While accompanying Euigeon who was locked up in the room, Seongwoo asked, "Does Geon ah hate mom after being scolded like that?" But Euigeon's answer was beyond his expectations. Euigeon shook his head and said, "I guess that's because mom doesn’t like cats.."

The boy is very innocent. He always smiled. If Seongwoo is a kid who likes to make other people laugh, Euigeon is a kid who loves to laugh. Although Seongwoo only does a simple joke, Euigeon can laugh out loud and Seongwoo really likes it. That's why, Seongwoo doesn’t want to lose Euigeon's laughter if he finds out about his parents' quarrel.

Yes. Their parents often quarreled, especially since two years ago when their father got an accident. Mr. Kang used to work as a foreman in one of the construction service providers, but he had to suffer a work accident that caused his legs to be paralyzed. From that time on, he only worked odd jobs and his income dropped sharply. It made his wife have to go the extra job. Having the skill, Mrs. Kang started working in one of the most prominent publishing companies. And the problem after issue then came.

Often after his mother came home from work, the fight began. Weekend which is generally a day to be relax with the family became frightening day for Seongwoo,

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Edit Seungwoo to Seongwoo after finding out that the proper spelling of his name is Seongwoo not Seungwoo ^^

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Love_ongniel #1
Chapter 14: HI AUTHOR-NIM..HEHE I CAN CALL YOU THAT RIGHT..I DIDN'T KNOW WHETHER YOU WILL CAME ACROSS MY COMMENTS OR NOT..BUT I WANT TO SAID, I LOVE THIS SO MUCH..I REALLY LOVE WHEN THE STORY INVOLVE ALL MEMBERS AND THANKS NOT MAKING ME CRY TILL END? I'M SCARE THAT YOU WILL MAKE ONE OF THEM DIE OR WHAT LIKE IN MV THAT I ALMOST THROW MY PHONE BECAUSE IM SO SCARE ? AND THANKS FOR THIS AMAZING PIECE ?
-escaping
#2
Chapter 14: i rarely comment on fanfics, let alone read on this website!! i just visited this site for a long time to read some random fics and this is very touching. great story! :>
hisnoona #3
Chapter 15: HUWOOOOOW NEW STORY
ChanBaekNunna #4
Chapter 14: Disini boleh gak yah komen pake bahasa Indonesia? Soalnya bahasa Inggris saya pas2an Thor...author orang Indonesia kan? Gapapa ya kalo saya pake bahasa Indonesia? Huftt...masih nyesek nie. Mau ngungkapin segala sesak didada(?) selama baca ff ini tapi bingung mau ketik apa? Hehe. Yg jelas makasih Author uda buat saya mewek n mata bengkak dihampir tiap chapter-nya. Bener2 jago deh bikin nyesek pembaca, dua jempol buat plot-nya. Kurangnya cuma di typo aja sih yg paling ketara, banyak kata yg seharusnya HE tapi diketik SHE ato sebaliknya SHE jadi HE, Brother jadi Sister (chapter 5). Sayang bgt jadi rada keganggu bacanya tapi overall KEREN ff-nya. Jujur saya ngarepnya jadi Romance OngNiel-nya ( #OngNielShipper hehe) tapi gapapa, bromance juga bagus ceritanya. Ahh saya kebanyakan ngoceh...sekali lg makasih Author uda sedikit 'bantu' saya mikir ttg hidup saya ;)
sarahban #5
Chapter 14: YEAYY FINALLY THEY MEET...IT THE BEST ENDING WHEN EVERYBODY DINNER TOGETHER AT THE ROOFTOP
FunnyKen #6
You actually made me Cry ..I cried like I found my own long lost brother..u r too good at making people cry ????..I loved this fic..I completed this in 3days.. anyways Happy New Year Author-nim
Eungi_
32 streak #7
Chapter 14: Ahh, I love the fluffy ending —although I expected a full blast angst based from the MV since I'm a pathetic masochist who will then bugs with "why" all the time but okay whatever forget it— I honestly thought the story would be longer. Daniel will wait for Seongwoo and the latter letting him go with his heart but this ending is good too. I was as shocked as Seongwoo when Daniel appeared in front of him.

I like Kuanlin's introduction here. He's the same as the 'sweet guy' in real life (and I love the joke Seongwoo made regarding his heart is as handsome as his face lmao) Although, the other characters —the Wanna One members I mean— are mentioned very brief and I would likely be bitter about it, I think it's fine since it's like that too in the MV. Nu'est appearance are also as acceptable. They're older so they fit well as employees at the company. Frankly, I don't understand the need of Giae, an OC in this fic since it already has numerous of characters. If she is created for advising Daniel, I think any of Daniel's close friends can do that —preferably Jisung or Jaehwan since they know Daniel's backstory and would suit very well for said dialogues— but she never interrupted any scenes or spoil the plot or a turnoff or whatsoever so yeah. She's all right.

The plot overall is great. The way you express the characters' emotions & describe each scenes are good. I'm satisfied with the story & the ending.

Grammatical errors can still be spotted but your vocabulary is good. Misspelling is also visible here and there (I assume they're mistyped words instead of misspelled) but as I said, it doesn't ruin the story at all. So don't worry too much (but it's better if you take a look at them once you have the time and do some tweaks to the typo words) Also, I suggest you change the title from "HEARTSTRING" to "Heart Strings" nothing drastic actually, just the change of the capital letters and a space sot would look decent (not that the caps lock isn't, it just doesn't look right or captivating much)

You're very potential to be an excellent author. Don't give up & keep going on, okay? You've done a great job for this. I apologize if my comment offends you (some say I'm too blunt on criticizing/reviewing/commenting on fanfics) and taking a large space at the comment section. I'm always like this when it comes to fics I approve lmao. I like your poster too. Little Daniel & Seongwoo are very cute (did you watch the kids' audition on Wanna One Go? It was very impressive)

Okay, so I gotta stop talking now. Thank you for sharing this with all of us. We appreciate it very much. Keep on going forward :)
ephemeral_sm #8
Chapter 14: The ending is real great!! Double thumbs up for you! I wish i can give more thou.... Really good job you've done there authornimmm. Thank you for this touching story ^^
hisnoona #9
Chapter 14: YEAYYY COMPLETED!!!!!!!! thanks for completing this story and updated reguraly and thank you for writing about wanna one. Its really hard to find story about wanna one that have a good story and or not . I know maybe its only about preference and out there maybe there are a lot story bout wannaone. But actually its hard to find a story that fit my style. So i'm glad you make it. Thank you!!! Cheers!