First Day

Heart Strings
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CHAPTER 5: First Day

 

Incheon International Airport.

Korean Air from JFK airport has just landed. Seongwoo got off the plane with a smile. The tip of his lips couldn’t stop to make a curve, showing that he was really happy to return to his homeland.

Seongwoo immediately settled the immigration process and picked up his suitcase. He walked happily past the arrival hall. And from a distance he had seen the man waiting for him.

He speeded up his pace and once the door automatically opens, he shouted very loudly. "AAAAROOOON!"

 

The man who picked him up immediately covered his face, feeling the second embarrassment by his friend's behavior.

"Well, you never change, Sean! Really love to embarrass yourself in public places and it got me embarrassed too." Aaron greeted Seongwoo with a complaint.

Seongwoo ignored Aaron's complaint and hugged him. Then in the next few seconds he commented. "Yes, I never changed, but you changed. Why did your body shrink like this? It feels like I’m hugging kindergarten children."

Aaron instantly hit Seongwoo's . "You rascal!!"

Seongwoo could only grin. And then they both laughed.

 

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Aaron helped Seongwoo put his suitcase in the car. After that, he took the driver seat and Seongwoo was in the passenger seat beside him.

Aaron Kwak. He is Seongwoo’s senior in America. New York University alumni just like Seongwoo but in different major which is journalism. Aaron has been 2 years back to Korea and working in a TV station as a reporter. From Aaron, Seongwoo got an offer to work in a tour & travel company where his acquaintance works.

 

"Woah, daebak! Heol! Jinjja! Wanjeon! Real!!" Seongwoo constantly commented all the way to Seoul. He found Seoul having developed rapidly into a city that is no less metropolis than New York.

Aaron chuckled at his friend's behavior. "You're like a hick I'm carrying from the middle of nowhere. You really don’t look like a New Yorker." Aaron commented as he shook his head.

"Hey, I haven’t been back for 14 years. FOURTEEN YEARS. Can you imagine, Aaron Kwak??!" Seongwoo replied passionately.

Aaron laughed again before speaking firmly, "Well, since you're back in Korea, can you stop calling me by name and replace it with hyung? Don’t forget, in Korea there's that hierarchy, man! Call me Youngmin hyung."

But his friend just laughed. "Okay, I'll try ..." Seongwoo said seriously after stopping his laughter.

Aaron seemed surprised to see Seongwoo willing to comply with his request easily.

But in the next minute, Seongwoo just called him with aegyo, "KAKARONG oppaaa ~~"

Aaron rolled his eyes, feeling regret for putting a little hope on his friend.

He was surprised again when Seongwoo rolled down the window and leaned his head slightly out of the window. "Yah, what are you doing? It's in autumn, aren’t you cold?" Aaron asked anxiously.

Seongwoo shook his head with a smile. "For me, Seoul will always feel warmer than New York."

Aaron chuckled. "You crazy boy."

 

Though hearing Aaron's outburst, Seongwoo ignored him. For him the view of Seoul city was more interesting. He inhaled Seoul's air as he closed his eyes, trying to feel and collect the remaining scent of Seoul he remembered. He exhaled it out as he opened his eyes and said in his heart, Seoul, are you glad that I’m back?

And suddenly he got the idea. "Aaron, can you take me somewhere?"

"Where are you going? Do you want to pee?"

"Hish, no! Get me to my dad's house." Answered Seongwoo sure.

Though that answer actually made Aaron not sure if what he was hearing was true.

 

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"Are you really going to visit your dad now?? It's in 4:00 am, man!" Asked Aaron the umpteenth time even though his car is now parked in the field near Seongwoo's old house. "Your dad and brother may be still asleep now."

"I'm not going to visit them now, I just want to see the house."

Seongwoo's answer made Aaron shaking his head.

"You wait here, I'll walk to the house." Said Seongwoo as he got out of the car.

"Okay, but don’t be long! I have to do coverage at 7."

"Uhm. Don’t worry." Seongwoo replied briefly before he closed the car door and walked to his house.

 

He remembered clearly this alley, where he and Euigeon often chasing around.

He tried to remember which electric pole he had scratched with Euigeon when they were kids. Unfortunately as soon as he found it, their scribbles had disappeared,because that electric pole seemed to have been repainted.

Seongwoo couldn’t stop smiling. Even though the temperatures of Seoul in autumn morning is able to make other people cold, he felt really warm. He was beyond happy to be back to his real home.

And the house he called his real home is now in front of his eyes. That simple and small house was able to warm him extraordinarily.

Seongwoo saw the headlamps of his house light up but the inner lights still not lit up, signing that the owner of yhe house hasn't started their activity.

"Maybe Aaron's right, they're still asleep." Said Seongwoo while still smiling.

Now he even ran a little while put his hands up high. He didn't believe his father and brother he missed so much over the years was now just a few feet away. It's all like a dream for Seongwoo.

If he could, he wanted to yell out loud calling his brother, asking him to come out and hug him immediately. But he remembered what Aaron said before allowing him to leave, "Don’t make a fuss in this early morning, or the police will arrest you and send you back to America."

Seongwoo chuckled. "Yes, I'll be back here later after work."

 

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"I live downstairs, if there's anything you need just go to my room." Said Aaron while dropping Seongwoo into his new

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Edit Seungwoo to Seongwoo after finding out that the proper spelling of his name is Seongwoo not Seungwoo ^^

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Love_ongniel #1
Chapter 14: HI AUTHOR-NIM..HEHE I CAN CALL YOU THAT RIGHT..I DIDN'T KNOW WHETHER YOU WILL CAME ACROSS MY COMMENTS OR NOT..BUT I WANT TO SAID, I LOVE THIS SO MUCH..I REALLY LOVE WHEN THE STORY INVOLVE ALL MEMBERS AND THANKS NOT MAKING ME CRY TILL END? I'M SCARE THAT YOU WILL MAKE ONE OF THEM DIE OR WHAT LIKE IN MV THAT I ALMOST THROW MY PHONE BECAUSE IM SO SCARE ? AND THANKS FOR THIS AMAZING PIECE ?
-escaping
#2
Chapter 14: i rarely comment on fanfics, let alone read on this website!! i just visited this site for a long time to read some random fics and this is very touching. great story! :>
hisnoona #3
Chapter 15: HUWOOOOOW NEW STORY
ChanBaekNunna #4
Chapter 14: Disini boleh gak yah komen pake bahasa Indonesia? Soalnya bahasa Inggris saya pas2an Thor...author orang Indonesia kan? Gapapa ya kalo saya pake bahasa Indonesia? Huftt...masih nyesek nie. Mau ngungkapin segala sesak didada(?) selama baca ff ini tapi bingung mau ketik apa? Hehe. Yg jelas makasih Author uda buat saya mewek n mata bengkak dihampir tiap chapter-nya. Bener2 jago deh bikin nyesek pembaca, dua jempol buat plot-nya. Kurangnya cuma di typo aja sih yg paling ketara, banyak kata yg seharusnya HE tapi diketik SHE ato sebaliknya SHE jadi HE, Brother jadi Sister (chapter 5). Sayang bgt jadi rada keganggu bacanya tapi overall KEREN ff-nya. Jujur saya ngarepnya jadi Romance OngNiel-nya ( #OngNielShipper hehe) tapi gapapa, bromance juga bagus ceritanya. Ahh saya kebanyakan ngoceh...sekali lg makasih Author uda sedikit 'bantu' saya mikir ttg hidup saya ;)
sarahban #5
Chapter 14: YEAYY FINALLY THEY MEET...IT THE BEST ENDING WHEN EVERYBODY DINNER TOGETHER AT THE ROOFTOP
FunnyKen #6
You actually made me Cry ..I cried like I found my own long lost brother..u r too good at making people cry ????..I loved this fic..I completed this in 3days.. anyways Happy New Year Author-nim
Eungi_
32 streak #7
Chapter 14: Ahh, I love the fluffy ending —although I expected a full blast angst based from the MV since I'm a pathetic masochist who will then bugs with "why" all the time but okay whatever forget it— I honestly thought the story would be longer. Daniel will wait for Seongwoo and the latter letting him go with his heart but this ending is good too. I was as shocked as Seongwoo when Daniel appeared in front of him.

I like Kuanlin's introduction here. He's the same as the 'sweet guy' in real life (and I love the joke Seongwoo made regarding his heart is as handsome as his face lmao) Although, the other characters —the Wanna One members I mean— are mentioned very brief and I would likely be bitter about it, I think it's fine since it's like that too in the MV. Nu'est appearance are also as acceptable. They're older so they fit well as employees at the company. Frankly, I don't understand the need of Giae, an OC in this fic since it already has numerous of characters. If she is created for advising Daniel, I think any of Daniel's close friends can do that —preferably Jisung or Jaehwan since they know Daniel's backstory and would suit very well for said dialogues— but she never interrupted any scenes or spoil the plot or a turnoff or whatsoever so yeah. She's all right.

The plot overall is great. The way you express the characters' emotions & describe each scenes are good. I'm satisfied with the story & the ending.

Grammatical errors can still be spotted but your vocabulary is good. Misspelling is also visible here and there (I assume they're mistyped words instead of misspelled) but as I said, it doesn't ruin the story at all. So don't worry too much (but it's better if you take a look at them once you have the time and do some tweaks to the typo words) Also, I suggest you change the title from "HEARTSTRING" to "Heart Strings" nothing drastic actually, just the change of the capital letters and a space sot would look decent (not that the caps lock isn't, it just doesn't look right or captivating much)

You're very potential to be an excellent author. Don't give up & keep going on, okay? You've done a great job for this. I apologize if my comment offends you (some say I'm too blunt on criticizing/reviewing/commenting on fanfics) and taking a large space at the comment section. I'm always like this when it comes to fics I approve lmao. I like your poster too. Little Daniel & Seongwoo are very cute (did you watch the kids' audition on Wanna One Go? It was very impressive)

Okay, so I gotta stop talking now. Thank you for sharing this with all of us. We appreciate it very much. Keep on going forward :)
ephemeral_sm #8
Chapter 14: The ending is real great!! Double thumbs up for you! I wish i can give more thou.... Really good job you've done there authornimmm. Thank you for this touching story ^^
hisnoona #9
Chapter 14: YEAYYY COMPLETED!!!!!!!! thanks for completing this story and updated reguraly and thank you for writing about wanna one. Its really hard to find story about wanna one that have a good story and or not . I know maybe its only about preference and out there maybe there are a lot story bout wannaone. But actually its hard to find a story that fit my style. So i'm glad you make it. Thank you!!! Cheers!