Different

Heart Strings
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CHAPTER 11: Different

 

Saturday evening, as Daniel was closing the restaurant with the others, suddenly came a man with a leather jacket riding a big bike and then parked it in front of the restaurant.

Niel glanced briefly. He recognized the bike in one look.

"Niel!" Greeted the man after opening his helmet, making Daniel immediately stopped his activities and immediately met him.

"Yes, Seokhoon hyung." greeted Daniel back with a little worry on his face. That man is a loyal customer of Dongho's shop that he really respected. He worried that Seokhoon might be disappointed with the results of his modifications on the bike that he just rode.

"I hear you helped Dongho take care of Babyblade?" he asked flatly.

When Seokhoon mentioned it, Daniel immediately felt weak. Am I making a mistake?

"I checked, its sound is okay, but I'm still not satisfied with his power. Maybe you can add more power.” He said coldly.

Daniel nodded. "Ah, well Hyung, I'll try to fix it."

"Yeah, you just handle Babyblade.. Let Dongho focus on taking care of my other bike .." he said casually, but enough to surprise Daniel.

"Oh I-I handle it?"

Seokhoon nodded. "Yeah, if you want to use it to hook a girl, just use it. Though it’s old series, but she's still pretty right?" He said with a little laughing. Dongho must have been told him a strange story.

Daniel was still bewildered. "Ah .. y-yes, hyung .."

Seokhoon then threw something at Daniel. "This is the key. You can use the bike directly in this Saturday night."

Daniel caught the key still with a look of disbelief. "Oh Hyung, t-this?"

"I sent her to you, Niel." Said Seokhoon while entering into a luxury black sports car driven by his friend.

When Seokhoon's car was gone from view, the other children immediately approached Daniel.

"Woaaah .. Hyung, Daebak!"

"The new bike! New motorbike! New motorbike! "

"Hyung, take me for a ride!"

Daniel could only smile holding the key while staring at the motorbike parked in front of the restaurant. Is this a dream?

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Daniel immediately took his dream blue motorbike to get around Seoul. He felt very happy his wish came true.

Did God deliver my request to Seokhoon hyung?

Aaaah I’m really happy ..

Somehow he remembered Seongwoo. Actually he wanted to meet him, showing off the blue motor and then taking him around Seoul. For Daniel, using a motorcycle to get around Seoul is another definition of going around the world that Seongwoo used to talk about a long time ago. He wanted to take him flying without being in an airplane.

But then Daniel realized, he couldn’t have done that. He still remembered that he had to keep the distance between them.

 

Daniel deliberately passed the New East Tour & Travel building and saw from a distance that there was no activity in the building. I think he is having a good weekend with his friends right now. He thought with a smile.

 

After feeling enough with going around Seoul, Daniel then chose to return the bike to the garage. "Enough for today Baby, tomorrow we’ll ride again." Said Daniel on the bike before leaving the garage.

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He walked into the restaurant cheerfully, still in the euphoria of getting the motorbike earlier. He didn’t think that someone would welcome him in the rooftop house, ready to take steps to cut the distance.

 

Daniel fell silent as he set foot on the rooftop where he lived.

"Woah, hyung, you're on time!"

"Hyung, come here quick!"

Not because of the loud noise of Woojin or Jihoon who called him, but because there was someone with his typical smile, greeted him warmly.

 

The man obscured everything around him, took Daniel's focus and made his heart pound. What is he doing here?

"Niel, don’t only stand there, come over here!” Jisung's call interrupted his mind for a moment.

Daniel walked over to those who gathered in the wide wooden seats that are often used as a gathering place. Jisung gave him space to sit, opposite to Seongwoo.

"Hi, we meet again .." Seongwoo greeted him kindly, hoping the person whom he greeted will greet him back. But Daniel only responded with a quick nod. He looked awkward.

"What’s wrong with you? Just take the pizza, before Jaehwan eat it all, "Jisung said to Daniel like a mother.

"Ah, yes .. just later, Hyung .."

Daniel's answer made Jisung and the others startled. "Eh ???"

"Don’t you like pizza?" Seongwoo's question made him more nervous.

"Daniel loves pizza, Mister! He could have spent a box of the pizza by himself if he didn’t remember his brother. He has a huge appetite!." Jaehwan answered Seongwoo’s question while chewing his pizza hungrily.

"Yeah, usually these two fools will fight each other barbarously." Add Sungwoon while pointing at Daniel and Jaehwan.

"As you got the motorbike, now the pizza is not interesting anymore, Niel?" Minhyun asked, teasing Daniel. At that time, Daniel just realized his presence. Aaah, so Minhyun hyung who invited him here.

Jinyoung who sat next to Minhyun said to Daniel. "Hyung, later take me ride with that bike .."

Haven’t had time to respond, Daniel must be shocked again with Seongwoo’s respond.

"I want it to! I want it to!" Said Seongwoo suddenly, raising his hand like a little kid. "I don’t think I've ever been riding a motorbike in my entire life." Seongwoo said that innocently while laughing, making Daniel's heart feel warm. If he is really Seongwoo hyung, his laughter doesn’t change.

"Why, Niel, why don’t you say anything?" Minhyun broke his mind.

"Yeah, why are you so quiet like this? Usually you’re always smiling, laughing even over a little thing. Today you're really different, Niel." Added Jisung while watching Daniel.

Daniel could only give them a forced smile, he was still confused about how to behave in the presence of the man named Sean Ong.

Fortunately, the focus of the conversation is distracted by Jaehwan. "Mister, please continue your story about America earlier .."

Seongwoo replied while holding back laughter to hear Jaehwan calling him Mister. "Just call me Sean.."

"Ok, ok." Jaehwan replied briefly while showing gesture to permit Seongwoo to continue his story.

"Yeah, America is just like that .. not much different from Seoul. High buildings, bustling streets. The only difference is the faces of the people. " Seongwoo explained in relax.

But Jaehwan responded with enthusiasm, "Wow the women must be pretty, right?"

Jaehwan's question made everyone laugh.

Minhyun even tapped his forehead. "Why are you asking things like that? You should ask if there's a scholarship there, or what. Sean is a New York University alumnus, one of the top universities in America."

Now Jinyoung was the one who responding, "Woah! Just like Seoul National University?"

Seongwoo immediately moved his hands crossed. "Ah .. no .. no .. I guess it might be harder to get SNU than NYU .. The education system in Korea is difficult, right?"

"Yeah, that's right, Hyung!" Woojin and Jihoon responded quickly.

Although the topic has changed to the educational system, a man named Kim Jaehwan still can relate it with women. "It must be lots of pretty girls on your campus, too, Mister?"

"Yaah, Kim Jaehwan!" Madame Jisung shouted in dismay, making everyone laugh, except for Daniel.

Daniel was still preoccupied with his thoughts about Seongwoo living happily in America, being able to study at a prestigious college campus. Very much different from him.

"Are you a mix blood? Your face isn’t very oriental." Sungwoon's question managed to restore Daniel's focus.

"I’m not, but my dad is." Seongwoo replied casually, but powerful enough to cause great shock in Daniel's heart.

Dad? He has a dad?

"Do you have a sister?" Now Woojin asked.<

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Edit Seungwoo to Seongwoo after finding out that the proper spelling of his name is Seongwoo not Seungwoo ^^

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Love_ongniel #1
Chapter 14: HI AUTHOR-NIM..HEHE I CAN CALL YOU THAT RIGHT..I DIDN'T KNOW WHETHER YOU WILL CAME ACROSS MY COMMENTS OR NOT..BUT I WANT TO SAID, I LOVE THIS SO MUCH..I REALLY LOVE WHEN THE STORY INVOLVE ALL MEMBERS AND THANKS NOT MAKING ME CRY TILL END? I'M SCARE THAT YOU WILL MAKE ONE OF THEM DIE OR WHAT LIKE IN MV THAT I ALMOST THROW MY PHONE BECAUSE IM SO SCARE ? AND THANKS FOR THIS AMAZING PIECE ?
-escaping
#2
Chapter 14: i rarely comment on fanfics, let alone read on this website!! i just visited this site for a long time to read some random fics and this is very touching. great story! :>
hisnoona #3
Chapter 15: HUWOOOOOW NEW STORY
ChanBaekNunna #4
Chapter 14: Disini boleh gak yah komen pake bahasa Indonesia? Soalnya bahasa Inggris saya pas2an Thor...author orang Indonesia kan? Gapapa ya kalo saya pake bahasa Indonesia? Huftt...masih nyesek nie. Mau ngungkapin segala sesak didada(?) selama baca ff ini tapi bingung mau ketik apa? Hehe. Yg jelas makasih Author uda buat saya mewek n mata bengkak dihampir tiap chapter-nya. Bener2 jago deh bikin nyesek pembaca, dua jempol buat plot-nya. Kurangnya cuma di typo aja sih yg paling ketara, banyak kata yg seharusnya HE tapi diketik SHE ato sebaliknya SHE jadi HE, Brother jadi Sister (chapter 5). Sayang bgt jadi rada keganggu bacanya tapi overall KEREN ff-nya. Jujur saya ngarepnya jadi Romance OngNiel-nya ( #OngNielShipper hehe) tapi gapapa, bromance juga bagus ceritanya. Ahh saya kebanyakan ngoceh...sekali lg makasih Author uda sedikit 'bantu' saya mikir ttg hidup saya ;)
sarahban #5
Chapter 14: YEAYY FINALLY THEY MEET...IT THE BEST ENDING WHEN EVERYBODY DINNER TOGETHER AT THE ROOFTOP
FunnyKen #6
You actually made me Cry ..I cried like I found my own long lost brother..u r too good at making people cry ????..I loved this fic..I completed this in 3days.. anyways Happy New Year Author-nim
Eungi_
32 streak #7
Chapter 14: Ahh, I love the fluffy ending —although I expected a full blast angst based from the MV since I'm a pathetic masochist who will then bugs with "why" all the time but okay whatever forget it— I honestly thought the story would be longer. Daniel will wait for Seongwoo and the latter letting him go with his heart but this ending is good too. I was as shocked as Seongwoo when Daniel appeared in front of him.

I like Kuanlin's introduction here. He's the same as the 'sweet guy' in real life (and I love the joke Seongwoo made regarding his heart is as handsome as his face lmao) Although, the other characters —the Wanna One members I mean— are mentioned very brief and I would likely be bitter about it, I think it's fine since it's like that too in the MV. Nu'est appearance are also as acceptable. They're older so they fit well as employees at the company. Frankly, I don't understand the need of Giae, an OC in this fic since it already has numerous of characters. If she is created for advising Daniel, I think any of Daniel's close friends can do that —preferably Jisung or Jaehwan since they know Daniel's backstory and would suit very well for said dialogues— but she never interrupted any scenes or spoil the plot or a turnoff or whatsoever so yeah. She's all right.

The plot overall is great. The way you express the characters' emotions & describe each scenes are good. I'm satisfied with the story & the ending.

Grammatical errors can still be spotted but your vocabulary is good. Misspelling is also visible here and there (I assume they're mistyped words instead of misspelled) but as I said, it doesn't ruin the story at all. So don't worry too much (but it's better if you take a look at them once you have the time and do some tweaks to the typo words) Also, I suggest you change the title from "HEARTSTRING" to "Heart Strings" nothing drastic actually, just the change of the capital letters and a space sot would look decent (not that the caps lock isn't, it just doesn't look right or captivating much)

You're very potential to be an excellent author. Don't give up & keep going on, okay? You've done a great job for this. I apologize if my comment offends you (some say I'm too blunt on criticizing/reviewing/commenting on fanfics) and taking a large space at the comment section. I'm always like this when it comes to fics I approve lmao. I like your poster too. Little Daniel & Seongwoo are very cute (did you watch the kids' audition on Wanna One Go? It was very impressive)

Okay, so I gotta stop talking now. Thank you for sharing this with all of us. We appreciate it very much. Keep on going forward :)
ephemeral_sm #8
Chapter 14: The ending is real great!! Double thumbs up for you! I wish i can give more thou.... Really good job you've done there authornimmm. Thank you for this touching story ^^
hisnoona #9
Chapter 14: YEAYYY COMPLETED!!!!!!!! thanks for completing this story and updated reguraly and thank you for writing about wanna one. Its really hard to find story about wanna one that have a good story and or not . I know maybe its only about preference and out there maybe there are a lot story bout wannaone. But actually its hard to find a story that fit my style. So i'm glad you make it. Thank you!!! Cheers!