Reflection

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Stumbling over the rock, you cursed under your breath as your noticed the nice, long scratch over your leather boots.

You had just landed in Londan, UK and you were busy searching for your apartment which had entire mysteriously disappeared or Google Maps was steering you in the wrong direction. Dragging your suitcase behind you, you could feel little vibrations in your hand as your suitcase bounced up and down against the uneven cobblestone pavement. You walked along the street back and forth multiple times but you were still nowhere near finding your apartment. If you didn’t find it soon, you’ll be sleeping on the streets tonight.

Just when you thought all hope was lost, a soft voice travelled from behind you.

“Do you need help? You seem a little lost.”

Turning around, you were met with your saviour whom turned out to be a teenage boy with a head of artificially blond curly hair and round glasses to match. He was wearing a green bomber jacket and black jeans, chewing on some gum. He looked about 18 years of age, and struck you as a spirited, care free boy.

In your polished English, you replied him.

“Yes I’m terribly lost. Do you know this place?”

The boy came closer, took one look at your phone screen and immediately broke out in a grin.

“Ayo man! We gonna be neighbours! Sure I’ll show you the way.”

He held out a hand to high five you and you returned the gesture, laughing a little at his spontaneous little outburst. Following him closely, he led you through a set of winding streets before the pair of you arrived at a brick red building whose entrance faced the back of a street and hence, your inability to find it. He was so kind as to bring you right to your doorstep before the pair of you parted ways.

“I’m sorry for the trouble, and thank you so much… erm…”

“Oh right I haven’t introduced myself to you yet! I’m Lee Minhyung, but call me Mark instead.”

He slapped his forehead rather loudly and he laughed out loud, causing you to widen your eyes a little. You thought he had a really interesting character but of course you didn’t say that out loud.

“Thank you Mark, I appreciate your help a lot.”

“No problem. And you aren’t from around here are you? You don’t sound native.”

“You’re most certainly right, I’m not from the UK, I’m from Korea.”

“Oh damn that’s cool! What’s your name and how old are you?”

“It’s not polite to ask a lady for her age…” Mark’s eyes immediately enlarged and he got ready to apologise but instead you flashed him a nice smile.

“But… not for me. I’m 23 this year and my name is Lydia. Nice to meet you Mark.”

“Ahhh so you’re a noona! Nice to meet you too Noona! I’m 18 by the way.”

“I can tell; you look really young. It’s late and you should get home Mark.”

“Right! See you around Noona!” He waved at you before bounding down the steps to his apartment right below.

Entering your threadbare apartment, you immediately fell asleep on the thin mattress as you awaited the arrival of your furniture the next day.

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LiebeBlue #1
Finally someone made a story with happy ending mean that the protagonists are not always to be together. I love your work, the way you write and your idea. Thank you for making this story.
Kuro_Wol
#2
Chapter 31: I BINGED. Oh damn wow. This was really good, I can see why you're proud of it. You know how much I love slice of life and the message you're putting across in this could not be more true - our past wounds may heal over time but the scars never fade away. And sometimes we have to come to terms with that, even if it's a painful reality to accept. Really enjoyed this one, Del! Hit me in the feelz
FlareJayna #3
Chapter 31: I absolutely love this story and this is definitely one of the most well written fanfic i have ever read. I do really like the plot twist and the ending. At first i do hope that they would end up together but i guess it just isnt right for lydia to live on with the fear and the doubt she felt. This fanfic really get me thinking about life and i hope you will continue writing such beautiful fanfics.
superdupper
#4
Chapter 31: This is such a beautiful story. Huhuhu I know that Lydia will be happy if she didnt end up with johnny because johnny had hurt her in the past. It's a bit sad to she didnt end up with Johnny but that's their fate . but really this story is written very well author nim. Really love it
Love_jennie
#5
Chapter 31: Absolutely the best fanfic ive ever read! I love the plot twist
marry_kim
#6
Chapter 31: This is amazing
stacy_lu #7
*ill continue here :))
At first, I didn't like the fact that she decided to leave him after the precious time they had in HK. But slowly a thought came to my mind saying it's not right as well for her to be in a relationship where she doesn't feel right. And partially, it's really not fair for him as well to be in a relationship where his love is doubted, when he's obviously giving his all to her. Its funny how my thoughts immediately went to reality, wondering if someone, somewhere out there living a life exactly like this, did they choose to leave like she did? Or stay and break herself more and his heart along the away? I'll never know. But if I was to be her, I'd do the exact same. Because if two souls are meant to be together, they will always find their way back to each other no matter what. If not, you just have to learn to let go. No matter how hard it gets. If not for the other person, do it for yourself. The void in your soul doesn't always has to be filled with someone else's presence. Sometimes the void can only be filled with your own self. Someone wise once said, you can only love someone else fully, if you learn to love yourself first. Thank you for sticking to your original storyline. If it wasn't for the fact that you went along with this ending, I would've sworn, I'd forget that our feelings- what feels right to the heart and soul- matters the most if happiness is what you seek for in this often mistaken world.
stacy_lu #8
Hai author-nim.
First of all I want to applaud your awesome writing. The way you write your story was really different from the fanfics that are available these days. It almost felt like I was back in my teenage days where I was awake in the middle of the night in my bedroom reading fics that would make me feel like someone was gripping my heart so tight, almost breaking it to pieces. And i didn't mind it at all. These type of fics were always my fav. It's was really an eyeopener and to be honest, just what this tired soul of mine longs for. I'm really glad I found Smudge. I haven't read something that made me look back in life for quite awhile now. Your story made me think alot.
prism7ths #9
Chapter 31: thank you for writing such a great rollercoaster ride of emotions story >< i really love it, all the sweet angsty vibes in the story. hopefully there are more amazing stories to come in the future ^^ have a great year ahead author nim, may God bless you. xo
babychanwoo
#10
Chapter 31: OMG THIS STORY IS SO GOOD AND U BROKE MY HEART BUT IT'S OKEY,I LOVE U i mean i love how u make my kokoro break HEHEHE<3.i hope u planning for a new jhonny story:)