Never Losing You

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Description

When he’d left, you thought that was the end.

When he’d left, you thought you’ll never have to see him again.

When he’d left, you tried to move on.

And you did.

So why was life so cruel now, playing tricks with your heart 10 years later? He had not crossed your mind once since 10 years ago but seeing his photo again, sparked off thousands of memories within you.

As they say, you’d never ever forget your first love and he was the first for many things for you.

Foreword

Hello! 

lyricalwritings is back with a 8th fanfic! Any feedback is loved and appreciated! ^^ 

This plot is purely mine. Please do not plagarise. Any similarities are purely coincidental. 

Cover image and background credit: CAIM Graphic Shop 

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Kuro_Wol
#1
Chapter 4: I'm skim reading through this again cos I was like wait are there any or your more "recent" writings I haven't read and I'm tearing up again oof I still love this as much as I did the first time I read it
FlareJayna #2
Once again, i have been touched by your story and i would be lying if chapter 4 didnt broke my heart. I was anticipating for that happy ending in which the both leads will live happily ever after however that twist really got me. The first story that i have read from you author nim was smudges and to be honest i did not know that this story was also written by you. Unknowingly, i have also read other stories of yours and always have high praises for your writing skills. I absolutely love the fact that the ending was unexpected. Thank you for all these great stories.
Folknoir97
#3
Chapter 5: Oh my God
I really like the twist in your story^^
You also have a good choice of words that you use.
The suspense is there. I am really shocked when I know the truth.
You also did a good job in the dialogue part
There is always a problem for me to write a dialogue.
I never be that condition that's why I think the dialogue that I wrote is a bit awkward but when I read yours, I didn't feel awkward at all...
You have your own way to grab reader attention by dialogue^^
Good job author nim^^
Hope we can read your next story soon^^
And I hope you can enjoy reading mine too^^ My story is from Day6 too^^
But it is not as perfect as yours especially in grammar and vocabulary since my mother language is not English
If you can leave your thought about my story, I will be really grateful
Once again, I want to say I really love your story^^
Good job author-nim^^
MinYewon
#4
Chapter 5: Darling,
Okay but can we stop right here a bit? It was such an emotional story I really, truly broke my heart (in a good way, of course since it showed that things couldn't work out all the time yet we're able to find our happiness more than once). I believe that first love indeed has a huge impact on people but I also believe that it doesn't last forever. With time, after our first broke our heart, we're going to move on. Always. And gosh, that baby girl in the end is the proof that love is amazing. She lost Jae but found someone who loves her and give her a baby girl full of joy. And Jae's thoughts damn, they were deep. They hit me hard!
Have an amazing day xx
imstillfly92
#5
Chapter 5: I just wanna let you know that you have successfully broke my heart at 1am. ??
EveryJae6
#6
Chapter 5: OH MY GOSH THIS IS THE END??
BOIIII THE FEELS
I love this though!!! I like that the ending isn't happy, like some things in life. Great job!! I really enjoyed this!
Kuro_Wol
#7
Chapter 5: Awwwwwwwwwww i love this a lot tbh it's the tyoe of story i could see myself writing so maybe that's why u have a soft spot for it hahahaha. It was kinda sad cos all the while i was under the impression she was still single but i still loved this a lot because of the realism. We don't always end up with our first loves, but if we can live with the memory of them as a part of ourselves and find happiness, then he time spent with each other will always be valuable to both parties.
Kpopidolspa #8
Chapter 5: I KEPT SAYING 'WHHYYYY' AND 'NOOOO' IN THE LAST CHAPTER. LIKE WHYYYYYY? I'M SO HURT FOR JAE. I WAS ALSO HEARTBROKEN OMG. THIS IS AMZING. I LOVE YOU,. WAITING FOR ANOTHER STORY!
Kuro_Wol
#9
Chapter 3: Jdnsbcjsbcbd I'm loving this so much! Great job on this chapter and jiayou for the next!
MyMee8 #10
Chapter 2: I already like it!