Hi guys,

I just want to warn you that there will be one or two more M rated chapters in this story. Not many more chapters left, hopefully it will end soon. I am in the middle of writing another story. This next one will be different. In fact I have a notepad with a small list of the next few stories and I hope to start uploading the chapters for my next story soon (let's hope, but I am a lazy creature so that "soon" might not be so soon) 

I want to get your opinions on this story however. What can I do to improve my writing (because, hey, my writing is NOT that great)? Whatever you think I can do to improve not just this story but my future stories please put down in the comment section.

Thanks guys.