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Faking it & Loving it by TixaFofi

Genre: Rom-com + light angst

Characters: Baekhyun + Chanyeol

Status: Completed

Notes From Reviewer

I AM SO SORRY FOR THE WAIT! I have learned my lesson with time management now hehe.

Title (6/10)

It described the story perfectly but it did not quite stand out. It was sort of a mouthful as well, I'd recommend perhaps making it shorter. If I was randomly scrolling through stories on AFF, I don't think it would catch my eye enough to make me want to read it.

Description & Foreword (7/10)

I have to say, I love the way you have those cool text in the forwards to introduce the characters. It looks absolutely beautiful. Although, your description was super simple and in a way bland. The way it was written did not strike me as interesting or an angst story. However, it did give me some ideas that the story would be rom-com.

Plot (12/20)

Your plot had a cliche feel to it regarding best friends falling in love. The