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Faded Stars

100% Tangible or 100% Invisible? by MinnieCrafts

Genre: Angst + Romance

Characters: BTS

Status: Ongoing

But what happens when Jungkook falls for a complete stranger in the library, as well as the person behind the fake boyfriend app?

Notes From Reviewer

I'm extremely sorry for the slight delay! Good work on your story.

Title ( 8.5/10)

The title was sort of a mouthful but it was spot on. If I was just randomly scrolling through AFF for stories, I would have automatically assumed by the title that this story was going to be rom-com. This sort of perplexed me when I saw that one of your tags was angst, I think it leans more towards the rom-com side.

Description & Foreword (8/10)

Your description was spot on and explained the story in a very captivating. However, it sort of leaned towards the cliche side but it had a nice ending question at the end. 

Plot (17/20)

It was a somewhat cliche yet different story, it was quite simple to understand. Your story did not seem like the typical love-triangle