Letters to Jessica by Ashleth89

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Letters to Jessica by Ashleth89

Genre: Angst + Friendship

 

Characters: SNSD Members

 

Status: Completed

 

 

Notes From Reviewer

 

I'm extremely sorry for the inconvience and wait regarding this review!

Title (7/10)

The title is not particularry eye-catching but it suits the story extremely well.

Description & Foreword (5/10)

Description is not quite interesting. It's plain and simplistic but in a bland way. I'd recommend trying to improve this area by trying to add more flowery vocabulary or perhaps slightly more details. You could try a more angst and emotional approach in this area.

Plot (17/20)

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FZ_LAY10 #1
Chapter 2: i have requested a poster form krystal15, i look forward to the results, if you have any questions please do ask me :)))))
snowblush #2
i've requested for reviews :)
Krystal_Rose #3
Hello! I've requested a poster from Myungjiyounglo. I look forward to the results!
StarPeace #4
Chapter 2: How much karma we have to pay per chapter?
jaefulfluff #5
Chapter 2: I've requested! This is my first time requesting for my story to get a review. Thank you ^^
ejacyeolation #6
I've requested! :)
hailiangli #7
Chapter 13: Ah thank you I didn't noticed it was done. I understand what you mean and I got a beta reader too XD
chanbob 102 streak #8
Hello I have requested for a review to wonderland however since shes not available (?) I will wait or have another reviewer do it if they are interested! Thank you
randombelle #9
hi! just want to inform you i've submit the hiring form. Thank you!
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