Almost Died and Revealing My Secret

The Kiss That Changed My Feelings
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Chapter 33

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~~~'s POV

2nd Day in America

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          I opened my eyes, all I can see is white--skies. There are no people around also. I wonder where I am. I saw a figure coming closer and closer. I looked back and there's also one more figure coming closer to me. At first, I didn't see the faces. But when they are beside me, I realized it's abeoji and eomoni.

``Abeoji! Eomoni!`` I hugged them tightly while crying between them.

``We're so happy to see you dear ~~~`` I wiped the tears from my eyes and pulled back.

``I'm happier ~~~. You don't know how much I cried when the two of you died.`` I smiled.

``Actually, we know. We're watching you down there.`` eomoni pointed.

``Down......there?`` they nodded. ``Does that mean`` tears started forming again. ``I'm dead?!``

They lowered their heads as my knees started to drag me down. ``No...it can't be. It can't be eomoni!`` I cried hard.

``Arasso ~~~. But you have much time you know that? We just don't know how will you come back down.`` she patted my back.

``~~~! ~~~!`` I heard mother screaming. 

I looked down, there she is. Crying beside my body. ``~~~, I know you're in Heaven. Please pray ~~~! ~~~! Close your eyes.``

          I heard her murmur that night. I looked at eomoni and abeoji who are crying for mom. They looked at me as they just nodded. I did what mother said. I closed my eyes and prayed. But before that, I hugged eomoni and abeojo, like i don't want to let them go. They just chuckled and said to me I have to go. Then, I patiently closed my eyes as all I can see is black again.

 

Mrs. Jo's POV

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          I was crying hard beside my daughter while tightly holding her hands. After a minute, I suddenly calmed down until the hands started moving. My eyes widened, while looking at my lost child. I leaned in closer to her and prayed.

``~~~, please wake up.`` a tear escaped my eye.

``Umm.....umma....umma?`` she said sl

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Riddikilus
#1
One of the very long fics that I read lol! But I"m willing to read this again because I miss it hehehe
scyairyne97
#2
Chapter 116: nice ending : )
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Chapter 116: woowww... that's sooo sweet..
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francheskayoonakey #4
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francheskayoonakey #6
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Riddikilus
#7
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#10
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