The Emerald Surprise

Loveable Nightmare (Cover Updated)
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Air Tahiti Nui

First Class Passenger Cabin

7:30 a.m. (UTC/GMT -10)

 

“Oh God, we’re finally here?!” Hyunwoo excitedly screamed as soon as he spot the emerald island surrounded by turquoise lagoons.

He glued himself on the window with mouth opened wide, feeling satisfied by the beautiful view.

 

“Jieun-ah, come on, wake up, we’re here!” Hyunwoo shook the sleeping girl, gently.

Jieun who was sleeping beside him, quickly opened her eyes and straighten her back. She leaned towards Hyunwoo to see what he was seeing. She quickly smiled widely at the sight. She hugged his shoulders from behind as they enjoyed the view.

And then they started over-reacting together.

 

Seunghyun who was peacefully asleep, got awaken by their noisy sounds.

He quickly glanced to the girl beside him and sighed in relieve when he found Bom still sleeeping with her sleeping mask on.

He then glared at Hyunwoo and Jieun, whom were still babbling loudly across him. He gestured them to lower their voices, since Bom wasn’t suppose to wake up, or his plans will be ruined.

Hyunwoo and Jieun looked at each other before quickly silencing their laughters, eventhough they’re still smiling like idiots.

Seunghyun couldn’t help but smile and shook his head at their excitements. He palmed his head and stared at Bom sleeping. He brushed her hair gently, afraid of waking her up.

--- -- ---

 

Seunghyun planned a surprise event for Bom, eventhough the plan is also quite a surprise for him since it was made on the last minutes.

He was on his way home from his parents when suddenly he saw an advertisement of Jeju Island while waiting for the traffic light. An amazing idea striked at him, so he---without a slight bit of hesitate---made an u-turn to buy plane tickets.

But the flights to Jeju Island for that day were all sold out. The available ones are weeks and months away.

Seunghyun cursed at himself.

Even tomorrow won’t do. But now, weeks? Months?

He closed his eyes and clenched his teeth. He felt the urge to do it today.

Today should be the day.

 

Seunghyun suddenly popped his eyes. A smile appeared in his face.

Forget Jeju Island, we’re going to Bora Bora.

 

Bora Bora Airport

Mute Island

French Polynesia, South Pacific

8:00 a.m. (UTC/GMT -10)

 

Seunghyun never kept his eyes off Bom. He forced her to not remove her sleeping mask, but she kept sneaking for chances to do so.

He caught her stubborn action once again and knocked her head, “Ya! Will you just follow what I asked, for once?”

She crossed her hands in front and pouted, “Ya! This is not fair! If you're not going to tell me where we're going, at least tell me where we are right now!”

“Try to grab me and I will tell!” he pouted back at her, with childish tone.

“Ya!” Bom yelled, also childishly, while waving her hands every direction to grab on Seunghyun.

He dodged her and laughed. They started acting like 5 years old lovers.

Hyunwoo and Jieun giggled behind them, secretly recording them on the camera.

 

The 4 of them got on their taxi, which in this case, is a private luxury yacht.

Hyunwoo and Jieun, once again, opened their mouths in amaze and Seunghyun was again entertained by their unnecessary expressions. Whilst Bom, well, she’s still blindfolded and all she ever did was pouting and crossing her hands, enviying them 3 while wondering when she could ever remove those stupid mask.

 

They finally arrived at the lands and got off the yacht.

Hyunwoo and Jieun excitedly---also screaming and they almost lost their minds laughing crazily---landed their feets on the pristine white sands, whilst Seunghyun and Bom were few steps behind.

Hyunwoo started singing happily on top of his lungs and instantly followed by Jieun. They ran around the beach together and started chasing each other. They laughed and splashed waters like 5 years olds

Seunghyun laughed at their behaviours.

 

Bom suddenly wrapped her arms around Seunghyun’s arms.

“When can I remove this annoying thing?” her voice sounded pleading.

Seunghyun pecked her lips and she looked a bit startled.

He removed her mask slowly and smiled, “Now.”

The light hit Bom’s eyes as she squinted them, adapting to the brightness.

She then gasped in disbelief of what she was seeing.

A palm-covered island which circled the illuminated lagoon like a delicate necklace. A perfect, white, sandy beach which give ways to the emerald waters where colored fish animated the coral gardens.

 

Bom turned her head slowly to him, whilst opened in awe, “Choi Seunghyun....”

Seunghyun smiled at her, the wind swiped his hair gorgeously, “Do you like it, Park Bom-ssi?”

She bit her lips and nodded excitedly, feeling tears flooding her eyes in joy, “I love it! Thankyou, Seung-ah,” her voice was the sweetest ever.

He got chills looking at her smile and smiled even wider. He wrapped his left arm on her shoulders and kissed her forehead.

“Let’s have some fun, Bom-ah!” Seunghyun shouted happily.

Bom laughed and then they started running happily bare-footed on the white sand, aiming to splash water towards Hyunwoo and Jieun.

 

The Royal Estate

St. Regis Bora Bora Resort

Ome'e Island

French Polynesia, South Pacific

8:50 a.m. (UTC/GMT -10)

 

“Eonni? Please come out the bathroom fast or we’ll be missing the boat!” Jieun knocked.

 

Bom opened the door and found Jieun was filming her.

“Ya, why recording me?” Bom shily smiled as she tried to sway the camera away.

Jieun insisted on filming her, she diverted, “Whoa, what a beauty! Eonni, you look perfect in that swimsuit!”

 

Bom shook her head smiling, then soon realized that Jieun was in a sundress.

She changed her expression, “Ya, Jieun-ah, why do you ask me to accompany you to wear bikinis if you’re wearing that?”

Jieun laughed, “I am wearing my bikini underneath, this is only a wear-over, Eonni. I’ll take it off when we go swimming,”

Bom pouted, ”Ya, still, isn’t this thing you bought me too revealing?”

Jieun shook her head innocently, “Oh come on Eonni, you have such a perfect body, what to be ashamed of?”

Bom sighed again as she put on a white throw-over shirt, “What perfect? I’ve gained lots of fat since Seunghyun always feeds me at least 5 times a day,”

“Ya, come on, you’re looking really gorgeous right now. Let’s go!” Jieun grabbed Bom’s arms and excitedly dragged her out.

---- -- ----

 

“Hyung, this is beyond perfect. I can't thank you enough that you actually thought of me and Jieun to bring us with you all the way here, to this paradise. You're such a well thought person and that is why I love you. Please, can I hug you for once to show my gratitude?” Hyunwoo opened his arms to hug him, but Seunghyun quickly pushed him away.

“Ya, It's nothing big and you deserve it. Don’t act anything odd that will make us looked gay, you know yourself that we're at a different country with different cultures. People here won't be the same as people in Seoul.” Seunghyun protested while half-smiling.

 

But Hyunwoo leaned closer and wiggled his shoulder towards Seunghyun’s chest, while blinking his round eyes like a puppy.

“Uuuuu, please just let me hug you once in a lifetime,” Hyunwoo made a childish voice whilst playfully pouted.

Seunghyun laughed and palmed his head, “Ya, get off, you kiddo,”

“Uuuuu Hyoong, or at least say you love me too. Hyong, please, Hyoooong,” Hyunwoo kept wiggling and blinking, acting all cute and child-like.

“Aish, fine. I love you t

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crabbybatty #1
Chapter 21: So beautiful. I have no words for this.
crabbybatty #2
Chapter 1: This is painful..
Unnie_vip #3
Chapter 21: Youre amazing .... So beautifull story ...
lovelyparkbom
#4
Wow...nice cover story. I like both the old one and this new one. Good job there
melodyofinterludes
#5
Hi guys, this is melodyofinterludes speaking.

Today I just updated Loveable Nightmare's cover and I would like to know your opinions of it. Whether you like this one or the previous one better, please leave a comment below or message me in my wall.

I will def appreciate every single thoughts given:)

And if you guys don't mind, please upvote 2 of my TOPBOM's stories since I want to make more people aware of the fact that TOPBOM is the best pairing/couple ever.

Let me repeat, EVER.

Haha thanks in advance!

With love,
melodyofinterludes.

Loveable Nightmare : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1094104/loveable-nightmare-cover-updated-parkbom-romance-top-topbom-aliencouple-topbigbang-bigbang2ne1

Lovestruck : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1103832/lovestruck-parkbom-romance-top-topbom-aliencouple-topbigbang-bigbang2ne1
blackjackfoureva #6
Chapter 21: I looooveeeeee thiiiissss stooorrryyyy! Thank you author-nim
blackjackfoureva #7
Chapter 20: This is so beautiful omg
blackjackfoureva #8
Chapter 9: Awwwww finally
haneul024 #9
Chapter 21: loooooovvveeeee it thank you ♥
lejeuparfait
#10
Chapter 21: Hello! Well done finishing your story :)
Some word choices were wrong...Either you had them translated incorrectly or you misspelled them? For example, for "noisy" (which means loud, inconvenient sounds) I think you meant "nosy" (as in constantly asking questions and butting into other people's business). The plot was also a little rushed. I liked the beginning a lot, but then the middle and end was very sudden.