A Promise

Behind Her Lies

The raindrops beat the window pane and soft lighting struck across the dark blue sky. A warm cup of fresh hot chocolate was in her favorite mug between her grips as she stared out the glass window. Her head was blank and nothing could ever change her mind after what he said to her. He said it clear, clear enough that it haunted her like a ghost after its killer.

DON‘T YOU DARE SAY THAT I DON‘T LOVE HER!’

She could still hear the tone he used to say this phrase and it was like being killed. Tears rolled down her pale cheeks as the raindrops hit the window. She looked up to the sky and it was like seeing her own face across the whole sky. It was so painful that she wanted to leave the world the moment she realized what pain was but she knew death wouldn’t set her free. She felt the metal jewelry over her marriage finger and took a deep sigh.

A promise? A lie?

She finally focused at the ring and forced a smile as she saw the beautiful diamond shine. She left the unfinished cup of chocolate by the window pane then went over to her huge fish tank filled with rainbow fishes. She didn’t hesitate to pull off the ring and plopped it in to the water then watched as it sank down to the bottom. She slowly let her body fall to the floor and laid there like a lifeless body.

‘Why…?’ She began to wander.

‘You used to be there. Used to make me smile and now… you’re with the replacement of me.’

-FLASHBACK-

“Hae Bin~ah, oppa promise to come back.” The little boy told the crying little girl.

“A-Aniyo~ What if I leave too? When will we find each other again?” She asked and sadness filled both of the children faces.

“Hae Bin….” He stuck his hand into his pocket then pulled out a ring.

“I was told that my umma left this for me. I made a wish on it to see if I can find her one day. Here.” He took the little girl’s hand and put the ring through her thumb.

“You must keep it very good so I know who you are when you grow up, araso?” He smiled even when he truly knew it was sad to leave her.

“Araso, oppa. Then promise Hae Bin that you won‘t ever love anyone besides her, araso?” She sniffed her tears as she told him this.

“Oppa promise.” He flashed another smile to her as she did the same back to him.

-END-

“You promise, didn‘t you?” Her voice trembled as she was seconds away from sobbing.

“But… but why are you with her?” Her voice trailed away then she closed her eyes preparing for her break down.

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A/N: Eh whatever. I never got the chance to update my stsuas list but okay.... so been waiting forever for an update?? Well I meant on the selected girls?? LOL. Okay *drums rolling*

Maya Rai -- Key [Shinee]
* The Hard-Worker

Choi Jaeeun --- Yoseob [B2ST]
* Daredevil

Mimi Kim -- Jaejoong [TVXQ/DBSK]
* Drama Queen

Park Sangrae -- Kiseop [U-Kiss]
* The Painter

Lee Ju Rin --- Donghae [Super Junior]
* The Innocent Girl

Mary Anne Lee -- Junsu [2PM]
* Troublemaker

Oh Sae Young --- Ok Taecyeon [2PM]
*Drug dealer

CONGRATS~~! So hope everyone is at least happy with their partners. A big note: I might change the way how some of the characters’ personalities. Anyways I was successful with my last story, A Marriage’s Happy Ending, so for this story I would be looking for MORE readers and support. Those who have applied but didn’t get pick, I apologize sincerely to you if you took a long time to do your application but hopefully you will still support or just put your place in one of the girl’s position. It was a hard decision battle but I finally shorten it up to six girls. It might get interesting, you never know. Please continue to read. ^^

Was the first chapter is good enough??

Don't worry, I'm introducing the girls in the next few chapters. First off would be Jaeeun and Mimi. So for every update, I will always have teasers for the next chapter. There will be times when I do double updates when I post TWO chapters or maybe more, depends. For the selected girls, I would like you to comment once you have read this note so I know that you are still here with me ;) If you don't reply, you will have a slight chance that you will be off my styory so don't want to lose that, right? Sorry for the evilness but I have done a lot of thinking on all girls so please understand. Anything else, I will let you know. Thanks again for all applicants!!!

Bye now ;) ~

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Teasers:

“Araso. Just so you know, Yoseob doesn‘t like girls who skip their classes.” Minho rubbed it in Jaeeun’s face.

“What?!” She unbelievably said.

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“YAH! PABO! YOU BETTER GET YOUR BACK HERE!”

“ARE YOU LOOKING FOR YOUR DEATH?! YAH!”

“CHOI MINHO, YOU BASTARD!”

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“Sorry, Principal Kim but would you mind letting me pass by since you are wasting my time to learn?” She sarcastically said.

“What?” He sounded assaulted with a slight jump back.

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Start thinking, who is the liar? -_^??

THANK YOU FOR READING,COMMENTING & SUPPORTING!

UPDATED: NOV.24.2010

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Beautifulsnowflakes
#1
____ this is interesting <3
leedictator #2
Oh gosh, a house full of & drama? It`s not a cathouse now is it? Wow, Sae Young has such a strong persona, and I like her attitude. I like this girl already. Aww, Sae Young works so her dongsaeng doesn`t strave. What a good sister she is. She`d rather strave then let her sibling strave. Good heart. Ah, even Saeyoung`s sister is a good person. I feel sorry for her, like a lot. I hope she finds a good, well-paying job soon. <br />
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Lol. What is this? Arrange marriage? That girl shouldn`t have messed with HyunAe. Though, what was it that made that stranger so scared? Was it that HyunAe`s eyes were so cold & looked as if it could see through you? Like the same type of eyes that Jaejoong has? Aww, her parents passed away in a crash! That would have been a tragic event in HyunAe`s life. It`s sad that she has abandon love. Because I believe that love is extremely important in one`s life. <br />
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The trailer is awesome! I loved it, haha. I also love the teasers. Please, do update soon. I love this story ~!
sakura #3
Sae Young...I hope you can find a proper job soon to support your dongsaeng <br />
I can't help but imagine the hardship you have went through<br />
HyunAe...its sad to know that your parents left you at an early age<br />
But Sister Kim sounds like a mother-figure to HyunAe either way<br />
Hehe i saw the trailer! Very nice and well done! <br />
Thanks for the update<br />
Update soon please
leedictator #4
Ohhhh ~! I see my name. So ... She`s telling me to take over her shifts, and I won`t regret that? Tsk. Aiyooo ~! I`m too soft-hearted towards my friends. I should be more stubborn, that way no one would pick on me, hehe. LOL. Is my friend Jaeeun? She reacted so much towards Yoseob. Yeah, that`s right Mimi. Who cares about that blonde-hair guy xP I don`t know exactly why, but I`ve disliked Yoseob ever since he debuted. Guess it`s because his blonde hair. Don`t get me wrong, I love hot guys with blonde hair. I mean, I fell in love with Jaejoong when he had blonde hair, think that Hongki looked the best when he had blonde hair (in YB) and when GD had blonde hair, I think I was head-over-heels! But Yoseob with blonde hair .. When I first saw him, I thought he was GD, and then it pissed me off that it wasn`t him, and I had loaded a page that I didn`t need to read (was on allkpop). After that, I was mad at Yoseob, and kept saying that he was trying to copy GD`s hair >.>" Oh lol. Why do I like Jaeeun`s character so much? XD OMOMOMO! It`s like one of those scenes in dramas XDD I wanna fall on Jaejoong toooooo ~! *jealous* <br />
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Anywhoo. Once again, sorry for the late comments. I think that from now on, I`m not gonna be able to comment in time, because I`m never on AFF anymore. Anyways, do update soon! Love this <33
leedictator #5
Ahhh ~! She`s painting! I haven`t painted for a while now .. I think that my skills now are quite, not as good, hehe. Wah, how nice. I have never even painted someone special to me, so it must be nice. I`mma gonna try it one day ;D Her friend found him? Is he the one that she is painting? Oh wow. At first when I read this part, I thought that she was listening to someone else play the piano, a boy maybe, but it was her playing, haha. Lol, is she in love with Donghae? By how she is reacting, I have a feeling that she likes him xD Ahhh. He is so easy-going. Haha, he wants her to call him oppa XD Hehehehe! I wonder how it feels, you know, to blush and have a temperature raise around the person you love. I mean, I`ve had boyfriends before, but I don`t think I`ve ever, loved loved him, so I wonder how it feels. <br />
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& what made me apply for this story. Hmm, I use to apply for every single story I saw, that offered either Jaejoong or Jiyong as partner. But now I look for the writing style, or/and the plot. Your story offered both. Your writing style is good and the plot just made me good wow. And now, that`s why I applied for your story ^^
sakura #6
kinda agree with From_With-Love<br />
i'm lost too @.@<br />
the jumping is making me confuse. <br />
but Jaeeun and Yoseob falling on top of each other sure created a scene!<br />
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thanks for the update<br />
update soon
From_With-Love
#7
eh? where is my comment I DEF remember commenting O____________________O<br />
and I commented on ur wall too >_< aigoo <br />
I'm loving what I'm reading but I'm so lost with the flow...already LOL
sakura #8
Whose the guy that Sangrae is looking?<br />
She doesn't sound like someone who would lie...<br />
Ju Rin and piano...I didn't think you were going to use her hobby as piano <br />
And I see Donghae already? Quick!<br />
I wonder....are all the girls going to be attending the same school?<br />
Hehe I'll give you an answer to your question when I have time<br />
Im sneaking to use the comp right now when I should do hw...<br />
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Thanks for the update<br />
Update soon please
leedictator #9
Hahhh ~ I feel as if Maya is the opposite of me. Haha, I don`t think we`d get along well ^^" Oh man. I`d never be able to do a speech in front of the school .. Stage fright is a scary thing. Even if I do mess around and so on a lot, not to mention, I`m loud as hell with an "open persona", I still get stage fright! Oh? So Maya is just putting up a front to make everyone happy, ne? Since she wasn`t exactly following her dreams, until now. Omo, what did Saeyoung do? Did she buy drugs and then not pay for them? Hahh, so her brother is suffering from ADD? I`ve got tests ran, and it`s said that I have symptons of ADHD .. But yeah, I can`t help that my attention span is not very long. Wow! Blood? Is she sick? Or is it an OD? Please update soon! This is one of my favourite apply stories so far ~!!
leedictator #10
Omgosh! My sister does that to me ALL THE TIME! When I don`t wake up, she`ll slap me and scream in my ear >.< I swear to the Lord, I`ll get her back one day! Only difference is, she`s younger then me, and I`m not the one to wake her up. Ahh ~! I envy Jaeeun`s relationship with her brother. I always wanted a brother, still do. Too bad my mum gave up on making another baby when her third baby aka my youngest sibling turned out to be a girl >.> LOLOLOL. Minho really knows what to do when a sister doesn`t go to school! Threaten her with her crush XDD Naww, seems like Jaeeun is madly in love with Yoseob xD Kyaaa ~! I see my name xDD Haha, anyways, back to the story ^^" Lol, wth? Stuff my bra? I don`t need to stuff them .. I don`t think you needed to know that ^^;; Hehehe, straight F students are awesome! xD But, if I get lower then a B in real life, mum would take my phone & my laptop which means my internet away from me, so I tend to keep my grades at a B+ to an A .. Hahahaha! I just pissed the Principal off xDD Now I`m off to read the next chapter ^_~