CRUSHED

Behind Her Lies

“Come on, Mimi. I‘m sure you won‘t regret this time. For real.” SunBae convinced as she kept her pace close behind Mimi as they walk down the school’s hallway.

“Won‘t regret what? Regret the fact that I took over your shifts more than ten times and always get yelled at by the boss?!” Mimi was a bit irritated by so much that her best friend has asked from her since they have became friends.

“Gosh, Mimi~ Just this once, okay? It‘s my anniversary with my boyfriend tonight.” She pleaded with her unconvincing puppy eyes.

Mimi didn’t give up and still kept her hard look on her face.

“Is every night your anniversary or what? Argh.” Mimi grunted then kept walking.

“No but… Aish, come on~” She started tugging on Mimi’s sleeve.

“Mi Mi Mi Mi Mi Mi M----”

“Fine! Ugh!” Mimi finally got annoyed enough and surrendered.

“For sure this isn‘t going to be the last time you asked me to take over your shifts BUT make sure I DON‘T regret this. Araso?!” Mimi requested and her friend happily nod her head.

“No worries. You WON‘T.” Her friend proudly smiled.

“Ugh. Gosh do something with your hair. It looks worse than a thorn bush.” Mimi said then walked into their classroom with other classmates talking louder than a stadium filled with crazy fans.

“Omo look at Yoseob~!” Her friend quietly squealed behind Mimi.

“Yo what?” Mimi didn’t quite catch the name.

“Yang Yoseob? Blond guy, awesome eyes, hot as hell, sweet voice-----”

“Blah blah yea yea whatever.” Mimi interrupted her friend then they sat down at their regular table.

SunBae pulled out a bag of chips and started munching on them as Mimi looked into her little pocket mirror.

“Yah, want some?” SunBae offered but Mimi shook her head.

“Are you….” Her friend zoomed into her like she was hiding something.

“YAH, better stop playing around with that pregnancy . It‘s so annoying.” She warned her friend then looked straight towards the blondie that was standing at their classroom door.

“MINHO!” Someone loudly called a guy’s name and attention went out into the hall then within seconds, everyone raced to the doorway.

“Pfft.” Mimi uttered then lazily laid her head down upon her desk.

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Meanwhile, Jaeeun have been running around the school trying to find her dumb oppa who moves around like a freakin ghost, having girls screaming each time he past by a classroom even the girl’s bathroom.

“J-JAEEUN! W-WAIT UP!” Her exhausted friend followed close behind her tail.

There was no time to waste but only to get this very answer. She skipped from the first floor to the tenth floor and couldn’t locate him until she reached the second floor again.

“MINHO!” Jaeeun breathlessly hollered to her oppa and raced to him.

Minho turned to her direction and wondered what the rush was. Jaeeun’s sweat flew back like a strong fan was going to blow her away. Like a animated cartoon would do when they try to stop themselves from running, Jaeeun assumed she could be successful with it then…

“JAEEUN!” Her friend gasped and Minho only looked down with giant eyes to the two bodies that were sandwiching each other.

Jaeeun grunted and felt pain everywhere. She forgot for a second why she was feeling pain but not only was she in pain but the pressure on top of her was awkward. She flashed her eyes open to see a blond head. She tried breathing but her breath stopped her from uttering another sound. Suddenly, a long squeak came out of then Yoseob stood up. The audience looked at the two as the scene grew less tense or maybe getting interesting. Eyes stared at Jaeeun then at Yoseob. Jaeeun’s mouth was preparing to say something but was pulled away by her friend. Everyone else kept quiet and no one said a word but the only noises came from students getting back to class before the bell ring for the start of the next class. Minho looked at Yoseob who was still brushing dirt off his uniform shirt.

“Yo, what the hell was that?” Minho said, not sounding angry but somewhat puzzled.

“What?”

“How did you and my dongsaeng ended up on the floor?” He asked again.

“Um… she was running and TRIED to stop her self but tripped and I tried to help…?” He attempt to reason but didn’t try enough because obviously he wasn’t the one who was having a problem about what just happened.

“Whatever. Let‘s get to class.” Minho said and they started walking.

Meanwhile, Jaeeun suddenly walked faster than her friend.

“Yah~~” Mi Young ran up to Jaeeun until they were walking side by side.

“Nice move.” Mi Young commented and Jaeeun roughly pushed her which made her stumbled to the side but Mi Young laughed it off.

“Come on, man~ You can’t get mad at me because you ran into HIM.” Mi Young kept talking.

“Yah! Did it look like I purposely did it so we can feel some kind of connection?” Jaeeun irritably responded back.

“No but there had to be some kind of body heat connection.” Her friend was still joking around.

“Keep on making fun of me and I swear Minho is going to know EVERYTHING about you.” Jaeeun stopped and warned Mi Young.

“Oh no~ You wouldn‘t.” Her friend said as if she knew Jaeeun was going to do it with no doubt.

“Watch me.” Jaeeun smirked then continued her walk back to class with Mi Young begging down to her knees after each step.

 

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A/N: Long wait?? lol Sorry~~ I've been EXTRA EXTRA lazy and didn't do any updates but anyways as ALL should know today is CHRISTMAS  !!!
 

   So MERRY CHRISTMAS!!

I surely will do at least TWO more updates today/tonight as a christmas gift from me. hehe. So thanks to those who "answer" my questions and I forgot... If you haven't notice the poster changed and it is.... *drums rolling*

 

SANGRAE!!!

YAY! \^o^/

If you have realized that this chapter is different from the teasers I had in my last chapter, it is because I have asked the selected girls to update me that they are still readers and my time limit was a week which turned out to be like forever. LOL Anyways, so so sad to say this but they're eliminated. Plus Winglin is blocked from my computer so I can't update on there :\ Hopefully I can or else I'll be leaving my Winglin readers behind. Argh. Stupid computer. So anyways, I have nothing more to say but only that I'll try to update as much as I can ;)

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TEASERS:

Glass cups and plates flew from one side to another in the small room. Hair pulling and scratching injured both girls.

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She slowly made her entrance with kids running places to places. Even though the faces were bright and happy, she couldn’t put a smile on her pure face.

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“No, unni. Don‘t cry. The noodles will get even more salty.” Sae In said but still didn’t take the noodles.

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UPDATED: DEC 25. 2010

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Beautifulsnowflakes
#1
____ this is interesting <3
leedictator #2
Oh gosh, a house full of & drama? It`s not a cathouse now is it? Wow, Sae Young has such a strong persona, and I like her attitude. I like this girl already. Aww, Sae Young works so her dongsaeng doesn`t strave. What a good sister she is. She`d rather strave then let her sibling strave. Good heart. Ah, even Saeyoung`s sister is a good person. I feel sorry for her, like a lot. I hope she finds a good, well-paying job soon. <br />
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Lol. What is this? Arrange marriage? That girl shouldn`t have messed with HyunAe. Though, what was it that made that stranger so scared? Was it that HyunAe`s eyes were so cold & looked as if it could see through you? Like the same type of eyes that Jaejoong has? Aww, her parents passed away in a crash! That would have been a tragic event in HyunAe`s life. It`s sad that she has abandon love. Because I believe that love is extremely important in one`s life. <br />
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The trailer is awesome! I loved it, haha. I also love the teasers. Please, do update soon. I love this story ~!
sakura #3
Sae Young...I hope you can find a proper job soon to support your dongsaeng <br />
I can't help but imagine the hardship you have went through<br />
HyunAe...its sad to know that your parents left you at an early age<br />
But Sister Kim sounds like a mother-figure to HyunAe either way<br />
Hehe i saw the trailer! Very nice and well done! <br />
Thanks for the update<br />
Update soon please
leedictator #4
Ohhhh ~! I see my name. So ... She`s telling me to take over her shifts, and I won`t regret that? Tsk. Aiyooo ~! I`m too soft-hearted towards my friends. I should be more stubborn, that way no one would pick on me, hehe. LOL. Is my friend Jaeeun? She reacted so much towards Yoseob. Yeah, that`s right Mimi. Who cares about that blonde-hair guy xP I don`t know exactly why, but I`ve disliked Yoseob ever since he debuted. Guess it`s because his blonde hair. Don`t get me wrong, I love hot guys with blonde hair. I mean, I fell in love with Jaejoong when he had blonde hair, think that Hongki looked the best when he had blonde hair (in YB) and when GD had blonde hair, I think I was head-over-heels! But Yoseob with blonde hair .. When I first saw him, I thought he was GD, and then it pissed me off that it wasn`t him, and I had loaded a page that I didn`t need to read (was on allkpop). After that, I was mad at Yoseob, and kept saying that he was trying to copy GD`s hair >.>" Oh lol. Why do I like Jaeeun`s character so much? XD OMOMOMO! It`s like one of those scenes in dramas XDD I wanna fall on Jaejoong toooooo ~! *jealous* <br />
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Anywhoo. Once again, sorry for the late comments. I think that from now on, I`m not gonna be able to comment in time, because I`m never on AFF anymore. Anyways, do update soon! Love this <33
leedictator #5
Ahhh ~! She`s painting! I haven`t painted for a while now .. I think that my skills now are quite, not as good, hehe. Wah, how nice. I have never even painted someone special to me, so it must be nice. I`mma gonna try it one day ;D Her friend found him? Is he the one that she is painting? Oh wow. At first when I read this part, I thought that she was listening to someone else play the piano, a boy maybe, but it was her playing, haha. Lol, is she in love with Donghae? By how she is reacting, I have a feeling that she likes him xD Ahhh. He is so easy-going. Haha, he wants her to call him oppa XD Hehehehe! I wonder how it feels, you know, to blush and have a temperature raise around the person you love. I mean, I`ve had boyfriends before, but I don`t think I`ve ever, loved loved him, so I wonder how it feels. <br />
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& what made me apply for this story. Hmm, I use to apply for every single story I saw, that offered either Jaejoong or Jiyong as partner. But now I look for the writing style, or/and the plot. Your story offered both. Your writing style is good and the plot just made me good wow. And now, that`s why I applied for your story ^^
sakura #6
kinda agree with From_With-Love<br />
i'm lost too @.@<br />
the jumping is making me confuse. <br />
but Jaeeun and Yoseob falling on top of each other sure created a scene!<br />
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thanks for the update<br />
update soon
From_With-Love
#7
eh? where is my comment I DEF remember commenting O____________________O<br />
and I commented on ur wall too >_< aigoo <br />
I'm loving what I'm reading but I'm so lost with the flow...already LOL
sakura #8
Whose the guy that Sangrae is looking?<br />
She doesn't sound like someone who would lie...<br />
Ju Rin and piano...I didn't think you were going to use her hobby as piano <br />
And I see Donghae already? Quick!<br />
I wonder....are all the girls going to be attending the same school?<br />
Hehe I'll give you an answer to your question when I have time<br />
Im sneaking to use the comp right now when I should do hw...<br />
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Thanks for the update<br />
Update soon please
leedictator #9
Hahhh ~ I feel as if Maya is the opposite of me. Haha, I don`t think we`d get along well ^^" Oh man. I`d never be able to do a speech in front of the school .. Stage fright is a scary thing. Even if I do mess around and so on a lot, not to mention, I`m loud as hell with an "open persona", I still get stage fright! Oh? So Maya is just putting up a front to make everyone happy, ne? Since she wasn`t exactly following her dreams, until now. Omo, what did Saeyoung do? Did she buy drugs and then not pay for them? Hahh, so her brother is suffering from ADD? I`ve got tests ran, and it`s said that I have symptons of ADHD .. But yeah, I can`t help that my attention span is not very long. Wow! Blood? Is she sick? Or is it an OD? Please update soon! This is one of my favourite apply stories so far ~!!
leedictator #10
Omgosh! My sister does that to me ALL THE TIME! When I don`t wake up, she`ll slap me and scream in my ear >.< I swear to the Lord, I`ll get her back one day! Only difference is, she`s younger then me, and I`m not the one to wake her up. Ahh ~! I envy Jaeeun`s relationship with her brother. I always wanted a brother, still do. Too bad my mum gave up on making another baby when her third baby aka my youngest sibling turned out to be a girl >.> LOLOLOL. Minho really knows what to do when a sister doesn`t go to school! Threaten her with her crush XDD Naww, seems like Jaeeun is madly in love with Yoseob xD Kyaaa ~! I see my name xDD Haha, anyways, back to the story ^^" Lol, wth? Stuff my bra? I don`t need to stuff them .. I don`t think you needed to know that ^^;; Hehehe, straight F students are awesome! xD But, if I get lower then a B in real life, mum would take my phone & my laptop which means my internet away from me, so I tend to keep my grades at a B+ to an A .. Hahahaha! I just pissed the Principal off xDD Now I`m off to read the next chapter ^_~