T E A S E R # 1

Behind Her Lies

Here's a little teaser and OMFG! I JUST got a new idea to my story and I believe it will make this story VERY or maybe interesting. You just got to wait!! So I just wanted to share a NEW character I discovered while reviewing the applications. So I found a troubleMAKER and a troubleFINDER. See the difference?? One is purposely MAKING the troubles and the other one just finds trouble to herself. You'll see once I get started. Okay off to the teaser ;)

APPLY!! APPLY!!

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“Who are you?” He asked her even though he knew who she was and she gave him a face like she didn’t care.

 

“ Who are you?! ” He repeated through his gritted teeth.

 

“I‘m the reason why she is where she is now.” She smirked.

 

“ You? ” He uttered out and she scoffed at his reaction.

 

“ It‘s true, I lied. Didn‘t expect it to be me, right? ” She gave him the most evilest eyes he has ever seen from her.

 

“ But why? WHY?! ” He asked and she looked away.

 

“ You knew I loved her. You knew it even when you weren’t this person who you are now! WHY?! ” He screamed.

 

“ It‘s simple and the answer is just at the tip of your tongue. ” Her smirk widen.

 

“ You---- ” He raised his hand ready to slap and she came forth.

 

“ Do it. ” She dared him in a really cocky way.

 

“ Leave me a mark like the scars and old memories you have captured me in. Promise to hate me forever like the other promises you made me with me. ”

 

“ I don‘t even know you. ” His hand dropped and he gave her a unsure face.

 

“ The day before you were going to get in the car and leave me, you promised that you‘ll come back for me… didn‘t you? ” She tilt her head slightly to the side.

 

“ You‘re crazy. ” He hissed to her which made her evilly chuckled.

 

“ If I‘m crazy, what are you? A lying dumb ? A man with no dignity, a man with no…. love? A man who CHEATED on his so-called girlfriend that he claims to love? That is what YOU are? ” She said with great confidence before he smacked her.

 

“ DON‘T YOU DARE SAY THAT I DON‘T LOVE HER! ” Anger raged in his voice as tears trickled down her face but her expression did not soften one bit as her eyes looked back at him.

 

“ Then have you ever loved HaeBin? ” She asked as if she wanted a answer but at the same time didn’t want one.

 

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UPDATED: NOV 6. 2010

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Beautifulsnowflakes #1
____ this is interesting <3
leedictator #2
Oh gosh, a house full of & drama? It`s not a cathouse now is it? Wow, Sae Young has such a strong persona, and I like her attitude. I like this girl already. Aww, Sae Young works so her dongsaeng doesn`t strave. What a good sister she is. She`d rather strave then let her sibling strave. Good heart. Ah, even Saeyoung`s sister is a good person. I feel sorry for her, like a lot. I hope she finds a good, well-paying job soon. <br />
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Lol. What is this? Arrange marriage? That girl shouldn`t have messed with HyunAe. Though, what was it that made that stranger so scared? Was it that HyunAe`s eyes were so cold & looked as if it could see through you? Like the same type of eyes that Jaejoong has? Aww, her parents passed away in a crash! That would have been a tragic event in HyunAe`s life. It`s sad that she has abandon love. Because I believe that love is extremely important in one`s life. <br />
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The trailer is awesome! I loved it, haha. I also love the teasers. Please, do update soon. I love this story ~!
sakura #3
Sae Young...I hope you can find a proper job soon to support your dongsaeng <br />
I can't help but imagine the hardship you have went through<br />
HyunAe...its sad to know that your parents left you at an early age<br />
But Sister Kim sounds like a mother-figure to HyunAe either way<br />
Hehe i saw the trailer! Very nice and well done! <br />
Thanks for the update<br />
Update soon please
leedictator #4
Ohhhh ~! I see my name. So ... She`s telling me to take over her shifts, and I won`t regret that? Tsk. Aiyooo ~! I`m too soft-hearted towards my friends. I should be more stubborn, that way no one would pick on me, hehe. LOL. Is my friend Jaeeun? She reacted so much towards Yoseob. Yeah, that`s right Mimi. Who cares about that blonde-hair guy xP I don`t know exactly why, but I`ve disliked Yoseob ever since he debuted. Guess it`s because his blonde hair. Don`t get me wrong, I love hot guys with blonde hair. I mean, I fell in love with Jaejoong when he had blonde hair, think that Hongki looked the best when he had blonde hair (in YB) and when GD had blonde hair, I think I was head-over-heels! But Yoseob with blonde hair .. When I first saw him, I thought he was GD, and then it pissed me off that it wasn`t him, and I had loaded a page that I didn`t need to read (was on allkpop). After that, I was mad at Yoseob, and kept saying that he was trying to copy GD`s hair >.>" Oh lol. Why do I like Jaeeun`s character so much? XD OMOMOMO! It`s like one of those scenes in dramas XDD I wanna fall on Jaejoong toooooo ~! *jealous* <br />
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Anywhoo. Once again, sorry for the late comments. I think that from now on, I`m not gonna be able to comment in time, because I`m never on AFF anymore. Anyways, do update soon! Love this <33
leedictator #5
Ahhh ~! She`s painting! I haven`t painted for a while now .. I think that my skills now are quite, not as good, hehe. Wah, how nice. I have never even painted someone special to me, so it must be nice. I`mma gonna try it one day ;D Her friend found him? Is he the one that she is painting? Oh wow. At first when I read this part, I thought that she was listening to someone else play the piano, a boy maybe, but it was her playing, haha. Lol, is she in love with Donghae? By how she is reacting, I have a feeling that she likes him xD Ahhh. He is so easy-going. Haha, he wants her to call him oppa XD Hehehehe! I wonder how it feels, you know, to blush and have a temperature raise around the person you love. I mean, I`ve had boyfriends before, but I don`t think I`ve ever, loved loved him, so I wonder how it feels. <br />
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& what made me apply for this story. Hmm, I use to apply for every single story I saw, that offered either Jaejoong or Jiyong as partner. But now I look for the writing style, or/and the plot. Your story offered both. Your writing style is good and the plot just made me good wow. And now, that`s why I applied for your story ^^
sakura #6
kinda agree with From_With-Love<br />
i'm lost too @.@<br />
the jumping is making me confuse. <br />
but Jaeeun and Yoseob falling on top of each other sure created a scene!<br />
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thanks for the update<br />
update soon
From_With-Love #7
eh? where is my comment I DEF remember commenting O____________________O<br />
and I commented on ur wall too >_< aigoo <br />
I'm loving what I'm reading but I'm so lost with the flow...already LOL
sakura #8
Whose the guy that Sangrae is looking?<br />
She doesn't sound like someone who would lie...<br />
Ju Rin and piano...I didn't think you were going to use her hobby as piano <br />
And I see Donghae already? Quick!<br />
I wonder....are all the girls going to be attending the same school?<br />
Hehe I'll give you an answer to your question when I have time<br />
Im sneaking to use the comp right now when I should do hw...<br />
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Thanks for the update<br />
Update soon please
leedictator #9
Hahhh ~ I feel as if Maya is the opposite of me. Haha, I don`t think we`d get along well ^^" Oh man. I`d never be able to do a speech in front of the school .. Stage fright is a scary thing. Even if I do mess around and so on a lot, not to mention, I`m loud as hell with an "open persona", I still get stage fright! Oh? So Maya is just putting up a front to make everyone happy, ne? Since she wasn`t exactly following her dreams, until now. Omo, what did Saeyoung do? Did she buy drugs and then not pay for them? Hahh, so her brother is suffering from ADD? I`ve got tests ran, and it`s said that I have symptons of ADHD .. But yeah, I can`t help that my attention span is not very long. Wow! Blood? Is she sick? Or is it an OD? Please update soon! This is one of my favourite apply stories so far ~!!
leedictator #10
Omgosh! My sister does that to me ALL THE TIME! When I don`t wake up, she`ll slap me and scream in my ear >.< I swear to the Lord, I`ll get her back one day! Only difference is, she`s younger then me, and I`m not the one to wake her up. Ahh ~! I envy Jaeeun`s relationship with her brother. I always wanted a brother, still do. Too bad my mum gave up on making another baby when her third baby aka my youngest sibling turned out to be a girl >.> LOLOLOL. Minho really knows what to do when a sister doesn`t go to school! Threaten her with her crush XDD Naww, seems like Jaeeun is madly in love with Yoseob xD Kyaaa ~! I see my name xDD Haha, anyways, back to the story ^^" Lol, wth? Stuff my bra? I don`t need to stuff them .. I don`t think you needed to know that ^^;; Hehehe, straight F students are awesome! xD But, if I get lower then a B in real life, mum would take my phone & my laptop which means my internet away from me, so I tend to keep my grades at a B+ to an A .. Hahahaha! I just pissed the Principal off xDD Now I`m off to read the next chapter ^_~
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