Genesis

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The Moon fell from the sky and soon the Sun followed it. When the two bodies abandoned them and the Earth began to revolt against them mankind climbed high into the sky, they reached for what little stars were left. In doing so, man forgot what little lay beneath him. What happens when the forgotten fragment makes its way back up?

Foreword

The wail of a siren signaled the five minute warning for curfew, and everyone scrambled to not be caught outside. The rapid footsteps of those still out could be heard from every angle. No one wanted to chance being out after curfew and being swallowed by the darkness that surrounded the halls that during the day were lit bright as they were told the sun once was.

 

It had been a long time since the sun had left and even longer since the moon fell from the sky. The people of the planet were so accustomed to there being neither a sun nor a moon that more often than not they forgot that either ever existed. To the adults they were things saved for children’s tales. As for the children, the sun and moon were simply the greatest dreams.

 

While a world that had no sun was sad  a world that had no moon was a world drowned. The moment the moon fell from the sky the oceans rose to the mountains. The people of the planet were forced to climb high, higher than they thought possible. They built floor upon floor, layer upon layer until they had built so high they had no memory of what was below.

A civilization in the dark company of clouds with no need for the ground. What would happen to such a place if one day someone came up from the long forgotten lowest level?

 


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


 

(A/N)I already have a few stories going, but I also already have this one halfway finished so I figured why not, I hope everyone reads this well! Also, the boys' positions in society do NOT reflect how I view them, it is all for the story!

LynnseeRae
Chapter 11 should be up by September 19th at the very latest and September 15th at the earliest!

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oddlittleromeo
#1
Chapter 12: The silent reader in me was debating commenting but I just have to. I can't be silent. I'm too hook!

First off; I really, really love the whole environment/concept of this story. From the brief history of the levels and the ranking system is so unique. I don't think I've ever read something with these ideas before. Though I do admit I'm hoping for a little bit more history on the lower levels then what is known thus far (but I feel like it'll all come together with how things are going).
Second; the characters - mostly M - are just so lovely to read. Like there's something about Nia that I like so much but I just can't pin-point as to what (maybe because I'm horrible with words lul). And I like the development that's coming with her (and the others). Kyungsoo and Soojung tho, they tickle my heart!
But if I were to say which character "has" me right now, it'd be Minseok. I honestly really love his character. Tao is a close second; you just can't say no to him. But I feel like all of them will grow once we get deeper into the story, you know..?

To the current chapter: Wow. I knew there was something about Jongin and I was right! Well, not really right but I was close enough. It was almost like a smack in the face once Jongin appeared. I was enjoying Yixing and Nia's night out; he finally got to shine outside.
But what's gunna happen? Because how would it be possible... if they can't and had tried? (trying to word it without spoilers in case someone is reading this comment orz) Wait. Is this where some more history/secrets are gunna come in? I bet the Council has a way...

There's more I want to say, but then that'd be leaving spoilers in the comments and yeah. So I'll just shh and patiently await for the next chapter.
Violeena #2
Chapter 11: This is so interesting. I first read the summary and I couldn't stop reading. Everyone has such clear characterization and the concept keeps drawing me in. I'm not sure where you're going to go with it, but to me it seems like you're slowing down a bit with action so but if I could recommend maybe focus on the background characters a bit more and develop them because for some I haven't read any really deep interactions like with Yixing... well mostly just Yixing. But maybe just build up the relationships between them all.
Anyway I really like this fic it has a really creative concept, and it's just really really good. Keep it up.
SehunxVitta #3
I'm loving it already!!! :)
shesamytheu
#4
I love this story a lot! I think that the idea of using Levels is clever and I seriously love how Kyungsoo is friends with Nia. Though, I feel somewhat bothered by Nia's personality. Like I feel like she's opening up a little too quick and too much to the M boys ><
lovely_dreamer
#5
Chapter 7: OK, this story has officially intrigued me~^^ Keep up the great work :)
Pplane
#6
Chapter 2: I'm in love with the story so far! *-* your writing is really good!