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Paradise

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Here's where I'm going to be dumping all my reviews and other fics that are related to Paradise. So uh, be sure to check it every now and then :)

 

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Diamondworld Reviews

 

Mini Review by lilitenshi (Thank you! <3)

Plot: Definitely an original concept if I ever saw one, and I appreciate the direction you took this story. I'll admit, the forward kind of turned me off since it gave the feel of a tragedy/noir fic, but this story pleasantly surprised me in the end. There was a small amount of romance that contrasted with the friendship/humanity vibe I got, but it was justifiable if a little cheesy. 4.5/5!

Characters: True to form with the right adjustments made for their roles. The relationships you crafted between the boys were real tear-jerkers for me. I definitely admire how you wrote Hyeri as an independent bystander, but still managed to create her own relationships with everyone. 5/5!

Grammar: What can I say? You know your English. xD 5/5!

Overall, this was such a pleasure to read, and I can't wait to see what else you turn out. This was creative, heartwarming, and really gets you where it counts, so be happy with what you made. I certainly am. :)

 

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Seeking Paradise

After Paradise

 

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rockUrbody #1
great job !
yooamie #2
Chapter 13: waaaah~ this story is actually T H E B E S T! such a great story that had me in tears at the end T^T
it was well written, and really great! (but I hate you for making me cry T^T haha, just kidding xD)
Author-nom JJANG! c:
Harmonia #3
Wow, is it angst, since it seems like one

I'll make sure to read it
kibumsandyeolies #4
Chapter 14: I balled my eyes out reading the ending, this is just so beautiful ㅠㅠ
ladybee #5
Chapter 15: I absolutely loved this story, it had me tearing up at the end. ^^
makeupyourmind #6
i read this all in one sitting! yep its that good :) story is very different from the usual stories on AFF but i enjoyed it alot. i was a bit confused about the ending but your explanation cleared that up. i will be keeping an eye out for your other stories now! :D
stellar #7
This story is sooo good~ T_T The ending was great. I'm so glad she didn't take Myungsoo's ticket. I wondered what the Foreward was about, lol. It didn't seem like it went with the story to me haha! I was fooled~ XD But, gah, I love this fic. It's one of the best I've read! <3
igotsanokcat #8
Omg you scared me with the ticket there i would be sad if they disappeared ;n; good job with the story I loved it <3
HaoTaro #9
This was probably the best fanfic I ever read!! I really loved it and I read it all the way to the end. I actually cried towards the end. And in the beginning, I sensed a special relationship between Myungsoo and Hyeri. It ended just as I thought it would <3 Good job!
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