Unbearable

Miss Pariah

Since the day he saw Jieun blushing at him, Jiyong couldn't take off the scene from his mind. He was deeply troubled to the point where he temporarily stopped smoking and drinking. Instead, he was in daze, often staring at the ceiling or rolling himself with a blanket at home. When he went to work, he managed to act like how he would every day, except his movements were more stiff and robotic than usual. It didn't take long for people around him to figure that something was wrong. The manager was especially worried about him, but he didn't say anything since he thought that Jiyong should willingly open up the topic.

It was after a week when Jiyong decided to talk about his problems. However, he didn't talk it over with the manager. Instead, he (kind of) talked it over with Minah, who was happily spending her last day at the store. He didn't want her mood to drop, but he knew that if he talked about Jieun, it would drop anyway. Besides, it was her last day. It wasn't like she was going to meet up with him or anything, right?

It was late at night, and Minah had an hour left until she was free from her service. A wide grin appeared on her face, as she anxiously tapped her foot against the floor. Her eyes kept glancing at the clock, wondering when time would speed up just for her sake. Jiyong, standing next to Minah behind the cash register, glanced towards her delighted expression.

"So…" he started, "how's school?"

"Absolutely perfect!" Minah responded enthusiastically.

"Your friends?"

"Always the best!" Minah exclaimed. 

"Did you talk with Jiho? You guys did fight last week at my place—"

"Nope! He's a jerk, as always. I have nothing to be apologetic for," Minah declared. Her smile became smaller as she remembered her fight with the delinquent. "Besides, lately he's been hanging around Jieun and stuff…"

Jiyong flinched when he heard Jieun's name. "Speaking of Jieun, is she doing well? Are you still bullying her?"

Minah frowned. "Doing well? Her? Do you really expect her to be doing well? Chanyeol's going crazy over her!"

"Why? What happened?"

"Lately she's been giggling to herself, and Chanyeol has no freaking idea why. He's been asking her why she was so happy, but she just keeps pushing him away. Honestly, it's really annoying. She's acting like a girl in lo—"

Jiyong quickly put his hand over . "Don't say it! Don't say it!"

Minah, eyes wide, gave Jiyong a surprised look. She pushed away his hand, throwing it to his side. She uncomfortably scooted away from Jiyong, lowering her head as if she was warning him not to take a step closer. She continued to study him, but stopped when she realized a strange look on his face. With a deeper frown, she began to glare at him.

"Do you know anything about Jieun's situation?" Her face paled and she stopped frowning. "Did you do something to her?"

"No, no! It's just that I don't like that word, that's all," Jiyong lied, looking down at his hands.

Minah continued to stare. "Lately, it seems like you're avoiding her. You leave early and she comes late. I know this because I have to take over your night shifts sometimes, and I see her. She's always asking for you, too."

"She left her scarf at my house," Jiyong lied again. "That's why she's asking for me."

"Chanyeol's been talking about you, too. Other kids don't know who you are, but he's been talking about what a jerk you are. He makes you seem so bad, people are wondering if Jieun met you and if she was influenced by you. Rumors are going around that she's two-timing with Chanyeol and Jiho. Others are convinced that she's dating Chanyeol, Jiho, and an older fat man," Minah explained. She smiled to herself. "The girls are waiting for Jieun to break up with Chanyeol. Honestly, the only reason why she's in the center of attention is because she is Chanyeol's girlfriend. If it wasn't for that, then she would've been a total—"

"I think that Chanyeol and Jieun should continue dating," Jiyong said quickly. He wasn't sure if he meant it, but he knew that if the two continued dating, then he wouldn't have to worry about Jieun having a crush on him. 

The two heard a loud thud! on the counter. They looked up and saw Jiho holding out his empty hand. They looked down at his feet, where there was a bottle of water and a few snacks. Minah, seeing him, cringed as she tried to avoid eye contact. Jiho, snapping out of his thoughts, bent down to quickly gather items. He slowly walked over to the counter, putting down the items while glowering at Jiyong.

Oh boy, Jiyong thought, forcing a tight smile. He swiftly placed the items in a bag and calculated the price. Before he could even say another word, Jiho decided to open his mouth.

"I thought you were on Jieun's side," Jiho said.

"I am," Jiyong replied awkwardly. "I mean, she really wants to be with Chanyeol. I remember her telling me that she wanted to marry him, too."

"But he's not good for her. She's way too good for him," Jiho argued.

"But he makes her happy—"

"He makes her cry more."

"Tears of joys! Have you heard of that?"

Jiho balled up his fingers into a fist. "There is no love when violence takes part in romance!"

Those words snapped Jiyong out of his simple-minded thoughts. He stared at Jiho with a blank face, almost puzzled at first. His mouth opened to say something, but the words refused to slip out. He couldn't think of a reply, and when Jiho knew that he was stumped, he grew even more furious. Angrily swiping the bag Minah had put his stuff in, he slammed down some cash on the counter.

"Keep the damn change," Jiho muttered. He stormed out of the store, disappearing into the streets. 

The manager walked over, scratching his head. He looked at the direction Jiho left with a frown. Clicking his tongue, he shook his head and placed his hands on his hips.

"Teenagers. What did you say to him to make him that mad? Honestly, I thought he was a decent kid, but after what I just saw today? Nope, that guy just got knocked off from my list," the manager said, slightly disappointed.

"Did you hear what we said?" Jiyong asked softly. The manager shook his head. "Then I ask for you not to judge the boy. This was my fault. I said the wrong things."

"Wrong things?" The manager faced Jiyong. "I can never imagine you saying something bad. Are you tired?"

"No, no! I'm not tired. Something just happened, that's all," Jiyong replied quickly. 

His manager continued to stare at him for a few minutes. "You know, Jiyong, if you need to talk to someone, I can always lend you an ear. If you don't want to discuss it with me, I know someone who's a very good listener and will never tell your secret."

Jiyong laughed. "Is that so? There's always some way to spill out a secret, though. I don't really trust those types of people."

The manager gave him a weak smile and turned away. "Oh, there is someone like that. Just say something, and I can arrange a quick appointment between the two of you."

"Thank you for the offer, sir. I'll take it into consideration," Jiyong replied. 

"Manager, can I leave early?" Minah asked eagerly. "I'm only a few minutes until my last shift ends!"

"You're working until that last second of that clock. Don't try to get off early. I'm not going easy on you, even though it's your last time stepping in here," the manager said.

Minah groaned, slumping back on the stool as her eyes followed the clock: Tick, tock, tick, tock…

* * *

"Yes! Freedom at last!" Minah cried out, stretching her arms when she stepped outside.

Jiyong fixed up his coat, then closed the door behind him. Through the clear windows, he bowed politely to the manager, who remained in the store with another employee. Rather than bowing, Minah turned around and stuck her tongue at the manager, earning a glare from the old man. She laughed loudly and scurried off. Jiyong sighed, and quickened his pace in order to catch up with her.

His task was simple: Walk Minah to the bus station, then walk straight back home to sleep. 

The two walked slowly, inhaling the frosty air and complaining about the thin layer of snow below them. They kept walking, exchanging a few words here and there whenever they thought that they should start a topic. The topic would die a second later, though, since the responses were mainly "yes" or "no."

After a curious look, Minah decided to blurt out a question. "Do you have a girlfriend, Jiyong?"

Jiyong choked on his own spit. "W-What?"

"Valentine's Day is coming soon. I was just wondering if you had a girlfriend. Are you getting any chocolates from someone special?" Minah asked. She grinned. "Guess who I'm giving my chocolates to?"

"Do I have to guess?" Jiyong asked, knowing that she was talking about Chanyeol. "Besides, doesn't Chanyeol already have a girlfriend? Wouldn't Jieun give him some chocolate?"

"Yeah, but the girls still give their chocolates to him, anyway. We can't beat Jieun's chocolates, though. Her chocolates are amazing. Last year, she made this chocolate cake and it was so moist and rich! Everyone else had given him a chocolate bar or some truffles, but nothing could beat her cake. Gosh, the girls were so annoyed at her. We basically melted a whole lot of chocolate and poured it over her textbooks." A smirk formed on her lips. "Now that I think about it, I wonder how much that cost her…"

"Do you not feel guilty?" Jiyong asked. "I mean, you've hung out with her for a little bit. Don't you feel weird hanging out with her while doing all this?"

"For your information, I wasn't 'hanging around' with her. No, I would never do that in a million years! I'd only do that if I was desperate," Minah said.

"Really? Then what do you consider going to a movie with us, hanging over at my house, and having lunch with everyone?" Jiyong questioned her, raising his brow.

Minah shrugged her shoulders. "I don't know. It's not hanging out, though."

Jiyong sighed, knowing that it was pointless to continue the conversation. He decided to move on, hoping that Minah would be more responsive if we went back to the previous topic.

"So, Valentine's Day, huh? I don't have a girlfriend. Besides, I'm not getting any chocolates," Jiyong told her. 

"That must be a joke. Don't you get some chocolates from some stranger?" She stopped for a second. "Have you ever gotten chocolates on Valentine's Day before?"

"I got some from my mom—"

"Besides your family members or any relatives," Minah said sharply.

Jiyong frowned and covered his mouth and nose with his scarf. "I had a ton of chocolates from my classmates when I was in middle school and high school. In college, I got some chocolates from stranger, but there was only one box of chocolate that I would eat because…" He paled. "I…I just ate that one box. No big reason behind it."

Minah scowled. "Ugh, you seem like those popular guys who gets everything without caring about it. Kind of like Chanyeol, except he's an exception because he already has a girlfriend."

"Are you only going to give chocolates to Chanyeol?" Jiyong asked.

"I'm giving some love chocolates to Chanyeol. I can make you some pity chocolates, though. I'm planning to make a prank chocolate for the manager. Wait until he tastes wasabi filing when he bites into my truffles!" Minah snickered, and rubbed her hands together. "Oh, and don't worry. You were pretty good to me, so I'll make you normal chocolates."

Jiyong faked a laugh. "Yeah, I'm good without chocolates." He paused. "How about Jiho?"

Minah flinched at his name. "W-Who?"

"Jiho. He hung out with us, remember? You guys fought a couple of times, too. Maybe you can make some apology chocolates or something," Jiyong pointed out.

She faked a laugh. "Chocolates? For him? No, no, no. I can never."

"Why not?"

"Because it's him."

"So?"

"I can't make chocolates for him! He'd probably throw it away or something. Besides, he never accepts chocolates." Minah's eyes softened. "He only eats one person's chocolate and that's it…"

Jiyong could hear a tone of envy. She seemed upset, but she seemed more jealous over that particular person she didn't dare to name. 

"I'm sure he'll take it. Jiho's not that type of a guy."

"How would you know that? You hardly know him. Plus, I just saw you get into a fight with him."

Jiyong gave her a small smile. "That was my fault. I need to apologize to him for that."

"Okay, but that doesn't explain that you're speaking for his action without knowing his true personality."

"That kid… Jiho's kind of like me. Whenever I see him, he reminds me of how I was like before," Jiyong tried to explain. "That's why I'm sure that he'll forgive you if you apologize. Givin him some chocolates would be like a bonus."

Minah scoffed. "That's just adult talk. You guys know nothing! Sometimes, I wonder if you guys were really kids in the first place."

Jiyong chuckled. "That's okay. Sometimes, I wonder if I was a kid, too."

"What's that supposed to mean?"

"Nothing, nothing. Oh look, we're here."

The two looked up and saw the bus stop. As if on cue, the bus slowly came rolling in, eventually stopping right in front of them. Minah was just about to get on until she stopped climbing the stairs. She bit her bottom lip, then turned around.

"Do you really think he'll take my chocolate?" Minah asked Jiyong.

Jiyong widend his eyes in surprise. "Well, that's what I assume—"

"Yes, or no?"

Jiyong kept quiet. Then, taking a deep breath, he held up his chin and looked at her with firm eyes.

"Yes." It wasn't right for him to answer for Jiho, but the girl seemed desperate. 

Minah gave him an awkward smile, then nodded her head. "I think you're too optimistic. You just gave a little girl some false hope."

She bowed at him, continued climbing the steps, paid for her ride, and disappeared into the deeper parts of the bus.

Jiyong stood still, watching the door close and the bus drive away. When he saw the bus disappear at the corner of the street, he sighed and began to walk to the direction he came from. As he heart his boots crunch the snow beneath him, his mind wandered off the the snowy weather and the starry sky.

Maybe I should make some chocolates, too, he wondered. Silence overlapped his thoughts, and worries drifted from his shoulders. He gently closed his eyes, inhaling and exhaling the night's refreshing air.

Alone and in the dark, Jiyong found himself at peace.

* * *

"Damn it, you're so annoying! Stop giggling to yourself! You sound like a freaking idiot!" Chanyeol hollered. He tried to throw his textbook at Jieun, who was in the kitchen. He stopped himself when he saw Jieun flipping through some pages from her kitchen book. He glared at her. "You better not be making me chocolate cake. I told you, you can't make the same thing twice and you have to be better than the other girls! Gosh, just telling you this makes my head hurt…"

"Sorry," Jieun said, biting her bottom lip. "I'll be more careful."

Chanyeol glared at her. He wanted to wipe away the smug look she had on her lips. She was happy—way too happy.

"Chanyeol, what do you think of cupcakes?" Jieun asked, her eyes still glued on the pages.

"I just said that I don't want anything that has to do with cakes—"

"Oh, this isn't for you. It's for someone else," Jieun said. "Don't worry, I have something else for you already. Hm… How about a fudge cake? No, that won't do…"

Happy. She just looked so, so happy. Why was she so happy? Why? What made her smile all the time? Even he couldn't make her smile like that. Happy? Why was she grinning? What was so funny? What was going on in that little bird brain of hers?

Chanyeol dragged his body away from the couch. The veins in his fist boiled, and he couldn't keep his fist from shaking. He stormed over to Jieun, then grabbed a handful of her hair with his other free hand. She attempted to scream until Chanyeol slapped her cheeks.

"Didn't—" A hit. "—I—" A punch. "—Say—" She fell. "—To Stop—" He released her hair. "—Smiling?"

Without mercy, he kicked her arm, causing her to yelp in pain. He lunged forward, grabbing her wrist and twisting it just enough for her to feel pain without sereverely harming her. Jieun looked up at him with fear, her eyes wide and her whole body trembling at the thought of another long, painful night that she would have to bear with.

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11/14/15: I'm just letting you guys know that the sequel to "Miss Pariah" has been posted. Check the foreword if you want to check out the sequel!

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UaenaExoticInspirit
#1
Chapter 35: This story is amazing! I read the last chapter with tears in my eyes. This is definitely one of the best fanfics I have ever read. I kinda regret not reading this earlier lol
GreenFlash #2
Chapter 35: While i read this story i thought i was reading a plot for a drama or something. And i really hoped till the end that GD and IU would finally end up as a couple •_•
But i really liked the story. It was really well written and emotional:)
BangMind
#3
Chapter 35: Omg I thought Minah and Jiho would end up together (they had some romantic scenes too ;(
The saddest part was IU and GD :((( the last chapters were kind of rush and I hate how GD depends on other's health condition :/
I hate that last line, too T-T
BangMind
#4
Chapter 24: OMG. this fiction needs more subscribers.
It's so freaking awesome how you painted a beautiful picture with all four beautiful people (but they have flaws, too. which even makes it better and realistic).
I think people tend to read only about their idols, so when you try to tell a lot about Jiho and Minah I think that's why the story doesn't get the population it deserves. (I'm really glad to read though because I'm a fan of all four haha)
This story is going really well. I really love your writing! I love GD's character so much :) and of course the rest three as well.
And get well soon, author-nim? (I saw your status just now ^^)