Song. Key. and Melody. {Hiatus}

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So you think you know Key? Think again.

He maybe a diva, but he’s just like everyone else…completely UN-lucky.

All he wants is to keep up with work, sleep and not get embarrassed in public.

Too bad a girl just fell from the sky causing even more troubles for him.

Who is she?

Where did she come from?

And why-oh-WHY does her personality keep changing?

He’ll learn her secrets…as soon as she remembers them.

 

 

Quote on the poster:

"I remember everything, but now I must forget you."

Foreword

It was just my luck that I was late to work.

Just my luck that my car died before I got even a meter.

...and just my luck that a girl would call me out in the middle of a busy street.

I don't care who she is...but once she wakes up, I sure as hell am sending her away with a piece of my mind.

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I'm re-writing my first fic ever... I hope this doesn't kill me.

Since I'm re-writing it, it's going to have the same plot idea and such but some of the characters have changed quite a bit. A few names will be changed and over all the story will be more mature. As of right now this story is rated H for cursing and future violence. I've never writen actual before, so I'm not sure whether I'll try or not. I guess it depends more so on how my readers comment.

-much love Meng-

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cjjaelin #1
Hmmms... Is Jjong up to something bad? But he seems like a good person, so I think he's only up to something mischievous. Haha. <br />
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XuanLu's so adorable. I love how she bickers with Key. But I wonder why she can't speak Korean even though she understands it; is it because of she lost part of her memory? It just doesn't make too much sense to me. I'd think that she would either know how to speak and listen to Korean like before, or not know the Korean language at all.
cjjaelin #2
Ah, the Chinese fits perfectly. I'm glad. However, the last bit sounds a little awkward. You might want to change it to 该死的家伙 (gai si de jia huo), which roughly translates to 'he should die/he should go to hell'.<br />
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该死 (gai si) is usually said to someone in his/her face, but since XuanLu seemed to be muttering to herself, I thought that you should add in something to make it sound that way. Though the word for word translation of 该死的家伙 (gai si de jia huo) is 'he should die/he should go to hell', but it actually can be interpreted as 'go die/go to hell' like 该死 (gai si).<br />
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Hope the Chinese don't confuse you. xD<br />
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As for the story, the first part made me wonder - what exactly did XuanLu not remember from the previous night? Why does Key seem to be so close with her all of a sudden? And of course, I'm still a little confuse over the poor girl's condition. Lols.
cjjaelin #3
I see my name! Thank you! -bows-<br />
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This chapter is so cute. You definitely made loads of changes, and I can see more maturity in your writing as compared to the previous one. Good job!<br />
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Once again, you made me question the nickname you made for XuanLu. It had looked and sounded weird to me at first, yet, after repeating it again and again in my head, Lulu started sounding extremely adorable to the ears. You really did change my mind about having unusual names/nicknames. xD<br />
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Oh, and just a little something I thought you might want to know: XuanLu's Chinese family name would be Cui (崔), since her Korean family name is Choi. I searched Minho's name and came up with the correct translation of the family name. Thought you might find it useful. ^^<br />
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Love your poster, btw. The colour combination is pretty. (:
cjjaelin #4
I personally like the previous Chinese name better, but since you're the author, it's your choice. Just wondering though, are you a Chinese?<br />
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Oh, and I'm liking the first chapter even more now! ^^
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