Chapter 5 - Together

Always in my heart

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Chapter 5 - Together

Baekhyun POV

I looked up. A tear stricken face , staring down at me.

Chanyeol don't cry. I hate to see you cry. Please don't cry. It's because of me. I know. Sorry chanyeol...

" What are you doing here? " 

So cold. So harsh.. You've never spoken to me like that before. 

" I uh... just came home and.... heard suho hyung shouting.... so I came over to see what's happening.... " 

" You heard everything? "

" um.. no i think... only from when you started shout.. "

" Oh. Pretend you never heard it then. Excuse me. You're blocking my way. "

" Baby- Chanyeol... can we talk? "

" I have nothing to say to you. Now , move "

" Chanyeol please "

He walked forward and shove me aside. Though it wasn't a great force, but it made me almost lost my balance. He successfully pushed me out of his way. I stood there stunned for a few seconds, shocked that chanyeol indeed pushed me. He used to hug me tightly in his arms, and it made me felt so secure. But now , he pushed me. Leaving me a sour feel in my heart. I saw him approaching his room. Somehow, I had a feeling that if I don't stop him now, I'd never get to talk to him again. So I ran. Just when he's about to close his door , I grab onto his arm and hugged it tightly against my chest, as if my life depends on it. And I begged,

" Chanyeol please. Please let me talk to you. Please only for 15minutes. No 10. Just 10 minutes. Please Chanyeol. Please Please Please. "

I thought all my tears would have run out by now but I'm surprised that I still can cry so much. A man crying so much. Great, just great.

" Let go. I said let go baekhyun.......... Byun baekhyun let go of me now ! "

Then, he started pulling his arm from me.

" NO! NO! LET ME TALK TO YOU PLEASE! CHANYEOL I BEG YOU! PLEASE TALK TO ME! "

I'm about to give in. My arms were losing strength. Nononono don't leave chanyeol don't leave. Don't leave me.

" Hyung! Help! Please get him out- "

Then I felt some one pushed me hard from behind. 

"Ahhh!"

"What the! "

I fell forward while chanyeol fell backwards. As a result, both of us crashed onto the floor. And next thing I realized is that I landed on top of him. 

" Oh my god ! Sorry guys! "

Chanyeol used his elbows to support himself and me while I just laid on top of him.

Ohhh my god I'm on top of chanyeol.... Ohmygod. 

"Ouchhhhh"

After that, I heard the sound of his door slammed shut. 

" Park Chanyeol. You won't solve anything by avoiding him. Just listen to him. Give him a chance will you? Or you two will be stuck inside forever. That might be a good thing though. Hah. I'm going to sit here the whole day if I have to.  "

" Haaaaaaa........ So troublesome. Tsk. Oi, are you not going to move? "

" YES. I'M NOT MOVING UNTIL YOU AGREE TO LISTEN TO ME!

I hugged his chest this time with all the strength I have left.

" Aiiiishhhhhh. FINE FINE. You have 15 minutes. Speak. "

" ahhhhhhhhhh..... thank you chanyeol "

I breathe in a sigh of relief and squeeze him tight. The tightest hug I can give right now.

" So will you get off me now and stop hugging me. It's annoying. "

" oh.....okay. "

I moved away from him and we went to sit on his bed.

A voice from outside spoke out,

" Good boy. Now make sure you guys talk everything out. I don't want to hear any " leaving exo " after this okay? "

" TSK " 

Oh crap, I don't know what to say now.

" You.... plan on leaving EXO? "

" Yeah "

"Why? "

Oh my god are you stupid baekhyun? I mentally facepalmed myself.

I looked at chanyeol and he stare at me with a genuinely shocked and "You're unbelievable " face.

" Are you kidding me? Baekhyun. News flash if you didn't already know from my screaming earlier. You broke my dreams together with my heart. Everything was broken all because of you. I love you so much okay byun baekhyun. Even now. I can't help but just want to push you down on my bed and make out with you and do things with you and cuddle with you just like in the past. But now I can't do that. Not with the you now. Not when you belong to someone else. "

" .........................................You can. "

" Huh? "

" I said you can! I belong to you chanyeol! I only belong to you! You're my everything. Still my everything. Our dreams! I remembered it! We still can chase our dreams together! You still can hug me, kiss me, love me! YOU STILL CAN CHANYEOL! I LOVE YOU! "

" What the hell are you talking about byun baekhyun! YOU SAID THE OTHER DAY THAT YOU LOVED TAEYEON NOONA! YOU HAD A WHOLE MOTHERING SPEECH ABOUT HOW YOU TWO ARE GOING TO GO THROUGH EVERYTHING TOGETHER AND WHATEVER! "

" That was about you " I whispered 

" HUH?! "

" I WAS TALKING ABOUT YOU! JUST THAT I CHANGED IT TO TAEYEON NOONA WHEN I TOLD THEM "

" I don't understand you, baekhyun. What the hell are you saying? "

" URGGGHHHH!!!!!!!!! We were fake.. "

" What? "

" I said, we were fake! "

" WHAT? "

The door slammed opened again. Suho hyung standing there with his mouth gaped open. He look like he just had the shock of his life. Uh, I guess he really did. I thought he left already.... Does that mean he was there this entire time? And.....he heard everything? Ohmygod I'm so embarrassed I'm gonna die.

" Byun baekhyun you have some serious explaining to do. "

 

Lovelies~ Another update! How was it? I'm thinking how should I end this fic. I have no idea!!! I just wrote whatever comes to my mind. HOW TO END OHMYGOD!!!! Time to read more fanfics~ By the way, KAISOO IS LIFE kekekeke.

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viyeolent
#1
Chapter 6: DID YOU SERIOUSLY SUDDENLY MAKE A MOOD WHIPLASH? Damn it made sense you know but also at the same time Baek was being an idiot for having ever thought that he could just say yes to a woman (dying or what not) and just bounce back into Chanyeol's arms after the whole affair and the explaining he'd do in the future. Ofc it's a matter of humanity to grant a dying request but is it truly worth it to scar the love of your life for what could wasily be the remainder of his life? Plus they had dreams, man. Putting the group at risk for a woman who shouldn't even be related to it is just..OTL and don't get me started on that last part. It started out so happy and ofc they made up and made out, but my point still stands that the doubt will never go away from PCY's mind now. And that hurts. A hell lot. It's relatively happy, but damn that last paragraph had so many implications.

Moving on. Bro I was confused by the format :( Idk if it's just the mobile thing but the text displayed inconsistently. Different font sizes every other sentence. I found it distracting :( Won't comment on grammar bc I totally know you can edit this to be better and because you ARE better. Dialogues in italics were also distracting? Since typically it's plain text and italics are reserved for thoughts and the like. I found some sentences that could've used a comma somewhere in them (it's hard to process a sentence with lots of ideas).

The monologues were great. Perhaps they should've used the italics instead? Oh and it's a minor thing but do capitalize when necessary, such as the words after a period. Capitalization for emphasis is okay tho.

All in all GOOD JON BRO :D I liked it. I loved angry PCy and I loved his angsty monologues. Surprisingly I liked (in the loosest meaning of the word) Taeyeon too. Peace out.
yifannie
#2
Chapter 6: Okayyyyy let's get to the serious part :)

First off, I'm kinda ugh when I see the name but that's not the point I'm gonna talk abt here. It's sad when someone you love is suddenly reported having a scandal loving someone else AND I FREAKING HATE THAT because I kind of can imagine how Chanyeol would feel like in real life though when this happened. :( And of course, I didn't expect that would be the reason why Baekhyun dated Taeyeon, but again, he should've told Chanyeol the reason and not made him confused bc omg BAEKHYUN YOUR CHANYEOL IS INNOCENT HAVE SOME MERCY. So far, I like this story! It's good since you said it't the only fic you've written and this is actually great for a first time writer like you! :)) I'm gonna wait for Giann to leave some constructive comments before I post another one :''''D
yifannie
#3
Chapter 6: HAHAHAHAHAHAHHQHQ OMGGGG IM LAUGHING AT THE LAST PART OF DIALOGUES BETWEEN YOU AND EXO ORZ BRB LAUGHING FIRST
viyeolent
#4
Chapter 4: So now it's been denial, then anger, and now anger AND self-depreciation. Poor PCY. He has a point with regards to being angry, hell who wouldn't be angry to suddenly discover your boyfriend just replaced you with a woman. No clarifications. No personal talks. Even an excuse would've been better than nothing. At this point Baek is being too much of an to keep going on without expecting his relationship (or what's left of it) with Chanyeol to bleed into that of their group's. But then giving up on everyone just because of an insensitive ex? Hmmm. Debatable. Justifiable, but debatable.
viyeolent
#5
Chapter 2: Okay this chapter tugged my heart because damn PCY was kept in the dark. His mental monologue was hella hot but also sad. I loved especially that he even questioned himself for possibly having done less than what was ideal for Baekhyun. Asking yourself things like that is always sad. And the fact that he can't even remember when they last kissed, and the fact that they haven't officially broken up is ing painful.
deliciousoppars #6
Chapter 6: I love u
marcybacon #7
Chapter 6: Lol awesome ending,loved it
kimhyosun
#8
Chapter 6: Loved this fanfic ! Lol the end XD
kimhyosun
#9
Chapter 5: Cant wait for the next chapter !