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kwon jin-kyong

Stage Name: Jewel

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missmoknat

Leader, Main Vocalist, Face of The Group

Kim Shin Yeong

Jackson Wang (Got7)

Accepted

missmoknat's Review

She is one of my favorite characters that I've ever created and I've so proud of this character! :)

park micha

Stage Name: Micha

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OSnapitznicole

Vocalist, Lead Dancer, Main Rapper

Baek So Young

Kim Ki-Bum aka Key

Accepted

MissMoknat's Review:

Hi Nikki, thank you for being the first applicant of my first ever apply fic, your application is basically perfect! :) You just need to add two more sub groups fan name you want to be in and you will be accepted! :)

Olivia Nari Jung

Stage Name: Olivia

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Kimaeri

Maknae, Lead Vocalist, Visual

Yeon Ji Hee

Huang ZiTao (Exo)

Accepted

MissMoknat's Review:

Hi Zumi, thanks for applying it means the world to me. Reviewing your application is again is actually really good. I like that your character is half Japanese/Korean that is a huge plus for me because I love half asains characters! Hahaha. :) Reviewing your application and it is almost perfect it's almost there Zumi you just need to fix your age because since Olivia is the maknae of Fantasy she has to be 17 years old. But as your fan name is good but right now you need to use the subunits fan name you want to be in and you can be in three of them since there is six of them. Everything is perfect but those fix those things and you will be accepted! :)

Jung dahee

Stage Name: DJ

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EMNMBoo

Maknae, Lead Vocalist, Visual

Byun Ji Young

Choi YoungJae

Rejected

MissMoknat's Review:

Hi thank you so much for applying emnmboo, but as I am looking through your application you did not add the personality of your character which means the good and the flaws. You also did not add the background of your family and everything else. Looking through your application you did not add the sunbaes you are close to from JYP, YG and SM. It is a big part of the story. Your trivia is about the other things we don't know about your character like does she have an instagram or anything else she likes but your predebut experiences has to be in the part of the pre debut experiences. Your trainee days you need to talk about the bad and good. Also scene requests you need to add some. Over all they were good but you need to add a song that relates to your relationship with your love interset and love rival. Fix this things then you will be accepeted.

Park jaeyeon

Stage Name: Lexa

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lexapark

Vocalist, Lead Dancer, Lead Rapper

Hyeri (Girl's Day)

Oh Sehun (EXO)

Accepted

MissMoknat's Review:

Hi Jae, thank you so much for applying I know I keep saying this but thank you so much for applying and it means the world to me. As I am rewviewing your application all over again you are missing some key parts of it and the fan club name I love it but then you have to check the sub units fan name and pick out the three groups you want to be in since they are six sub groups later in the story hopefully the girls will have a solo. Also, key parts you are missing are the newly added in the forum I pasted in chapter 5 and just add it then you will be accepeted. :)

Lee haneul

Stage Name: Fleur

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mirilemonster

Vocalist, Main Dancer, Rapper

Jin Jae Young

Kim Jongin (EXO)

Accepted

MissMoknat's Review:

Nothing wrong at all. Your application was perfect! :) Welcome being my co author! :)

Lee minjee

Stage Name: MinJee

kpoplover1993

Lead Dancer, Vocalist, Rapper

Lee Geumhee

Yook Sungjae

Accepted

MissMoknat's Review:

Hi! Thank you for applying it means the world to me. I clearly agree with Miri, your personality is to vague but please do add a few things like the bad and good about her. What is her good personality and her bad personality because it makes your character more realistic. But still it's good. I love your background it was very deatailed which is a plus for me. But you need to elborate more how she got in the company. You also need to fill out the relationship parts though because it is really important in the story. You do need to add your family members as well. You do need to add your favorite sunbaes from JYP, SM and YG then also add your favorite sunbaes from different companies. Also add who are your best friends and friends as well. Your rival is a bit unoriginal because I don't want to see Fantasy and Girls' Generation have a rivalry at all because I want them to be close with them and be good friends with them could you possibly change it? Your love interest is pretty out there I have nothing against Jaejoong he will always be my bias from TVXQ but he is 10 years older and it can lead to controversies of them being together. Your interaction part was really short can you add a little more please? You are missing some parts but you can fix that. You forgot your password which is in the foreword as well. Your twins are supposed to be female and not male but you can fix that. Right now you are rejected but you can fix it and you will be accepted. :)

MiriLeMonster's Review:

Hello there, Carebear~~ This is my very first review and I hope you can bear with me! First of all thanks a lot for applying. Just like for Belle (author's nickname, hope you won't mind >..<) it means the world to me. Let's see. There was something off with the source code. It would be nice if you could fix this? It's irritating ^^'' Belle told you to be neat, right? ^^ Then the title for your application is wrong O: It's actually clearly stated in the Cheat Sheet. Your personality is vague. I don't know if Belle is going to agree with me but it would be better if you go and add a few things. Both bad and good traits. Still it's good. Little but you got straight to the point. Like I said, I dunno if it's enough. Your background was written well and very detailed. I liked it! You could've elaborated the way she got in the company like everyone else, tho. You need to fill in the relationship parts though it's important for the story. Make sure you add up your family members, the sunbaes from different companies part and of course the best friends/friends part. Hm, There isn't much trivia. That's actually sad. Well, you have a rival. That's great. I thought I was the only one having one! XD But the reason why you're rivals with Jessica is a little bit unoriginal. But I don't mind, tho. Let's move on to the love interest. You sure it should be Jaejoong? He is like 10 years older? I don't mind but it would lead to controversy. And it would be nice if you could elaborate the 'Interaction' part. I don't think they just text each other, right? Well, You didn't add the new things, Belle added in Chapter 5. Those aren't in the Source Code. Make sure you'll check it and add the things up~ And the song fitting yours and Jaejoong's relationship is missing! O: I'd like to believe that your twins for singing and talking need to be female? And last but not least: The password is missing! I can't say if you're going to be accepted or not. That's the author's decision but you'd be rejected 'till Belle updated her review. I hope it wasn't too long! >--< Thanks again for applying! ~Miri

Kim jungha

Stage Name: Jay

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cryingjpg

Lead Vocalist, Rapper

Jo Eun Hee

Moon Jongup (BAP)

Accepted

MissMoknat's Review:

I loved your application! :) Plus her being a rival with her brother is actually perfect! I have tons planned for this character! You missed a few things but it was perfect! :)

MiriLeMonster's Review:

Hey~~ Well, I really liked this app and the Ulzzang is gorgeous! I like the idea of the brother-sister rivalry. Very Unique. And I'm happy that there are actually people who want a rival! So, there were no problems at all. And you're already accepted so Congrats~ Thaaaanks for applying, dear!

Park Jinae

Stage Name: Jin

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Fayeongsong

Main Vocalist

Kim AhYoung (Yura)

Kim SeokJin (BTS)

Accepted

MissMoknat's Review:

Author-nim! :) I know I should call you by FeiFei but I'm so used to calling you Author-nim already. :) I loved your application as well! You had a few mistakes but I didn't mind at all. It's fine you don't have a love rival or a rival. :) Thank you for applying! :)

MiriLeMonster's Review:

Hello, sorry for my late review and even if Jinae is already accepted and stuff I wanted to give a little feedback. Well, I loved the application too. It was almost perfect to me. And of course mistakes are totally okay. There isn't anything more too add, I guess. Congrats~ And thanks a lot for applying

Shin eunmi

Stage Name: Eunmi

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KimAeri

Manager # 1

So Hyeon

N/A

Accepted

MissMoknat's Review:

I love this character! She's going to play a huge part in this story! I have so many plans for her! :)

MiriLeMonster's Review:

omo! The very first applicant who wants to be a manager! Thanks a lot for that! Well, there were absolutley no problems and I adored Eunmi. And I like that she hasn't got a love interest. I mean that's different and mature? o.ö I like the fact that she wants to look after the girls without distraction! Thanks a lot for applying!

Kwanjai Horvejkul

Stage Name: Princess

OSnapitznicole

Lead Vocalist, Rapper, Dancer

Kim Yonhee (AMET)

BamBam (GOT7)

Status

MissMoknat's Review:

Coming Soon~

MiriLeMonster's Review:

Hey Nikki and thanks for appyling again! First of all: Wow Thai-Chinese! That's cool! I like xD But don't mind me asking: Could you please add a Korean name? It would be a lot easier if you do! I don't see any major mistakes and everything was well written. But I think you could've written more about your personality. Don't worry about the fanclub thingy. We're currently working on it! ^^ You'll have to wait for Belle's review and than you'll now if you're being to be accepted or not!

Kwak So Min

Stage Name: Tiffany

Doubleshinee

Lead Vocalist, Rapper, Dancer

Lael

JR (NU'EST)

Status

Miss Moknat's Review:

Coming Soon~

MiriLeMonster's Review:

Hey, there~ Thanks for applying! Let's start shall we? Well, there is actually nothing wrong with your app and I have to say I like Tiffany! The face claim suits her very well. Lael is so pretty! I have to say that your whole app is kinda short, but that's not a problem! I liked it tho. You always got straight to the point. I don't have anything more to add o: So, like above you'll have to wiat for Belle's review!

Jung wookyung

Stage Name: Wookyung

jotwinz

Manager #2

SUL

Yoon Siyoon (Actor)

Status

MissMoknat's Review:

Coming soon~

MiriLeMonster's Review:

Hey there! Thanks a lot for applying. I'm happy that you applied for the Manager #2 position! ^^ So, I liked Wookyung a lot and her face-claim is drop dead gorgoeus! ^^ Her personality is fine with me as well as the background. I like the idea that she was a trainee before! It's cool that this manager has a love interest. But could you elaborate the part 'Friends with benefits'? I'm not that familiar with it! Yeah. I guess that was all. Good Job! That you have to wait for Belle's review is nothing new I guess ^^

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