Without Feathers, I Still Have My Wings. (Edited Ver.)

Forget Me Not: Journey Of Memories
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3RD POV:   Her fingers twitched. Will she wake up from her state?   After seeing the movements from , Jinyoung exclaimed with a tone full of relief, "She just twitched her fingers! They moved!" As soon as the others heard it, everyone came over to and watched her intently. "She really moved." Gikwang said silently as he faced his hyungs. His two brothers nodded, relief evident within their eyes. "She's trying her best. I really look forward to getting to know this dongsaeng." Yuri and Taeyeon agreed as they watched .   "Girls, watch . The rest of the men, we'll go on with the research." Donghae announced as he started to walk away from and everyone else did as they were told. It went on until everyone felt he streams of light protruding from the venetian blinds on the window - They did pull an all-nighter.   The guys saw that the girls were all sleep beside . Donghae then stood up from his seat and silently came over to the girls, carrying  away. "Guys, we should call this a day and take some rest." He said, while carrying safely within his arms. "Jun, we'll be taking some files out. Can we?" He asked the bad- looking police. "Sure bro, as long as you can return it in a whole - There'll be no problems." The police replied. "Go on and have some rest pal. You and the rest need it. Tae, Yul and I will also go on with the research in here." He continued, his face an obviously tired one. "Drop by if you guys have something already, or if you just wanna hang around." He offered coolly.   Joon volunteered in casting the portal. "Yeon, Hongki, Jin, Kwang, Hyung and . All set now, are we?" he did a last minute check before they all bade their new friends goodbye. The portal was short since they were justtravelling within a short distance, they arrived quickly inside their room. Donghae carried to the girls' room and placed her gently onto her bed. 'Princess...You'll pass this soon, right? Better get back up and help us since we're feeling a bit lost without you.' He thought while shoving the stray hair that covered some parts of her face. 'I hope you'll recover sooner than we expect Princess. Everyone misses you so.' He sadly took a last glance at  before he left her, sleeping soundly.   Just when the door clicked, 's eyelids trembled - A sign that she is waking up. And after a few seconds, she opened her eyes. Seeing how she was tucked into bed, she concluded, 'I guess it's always gonna be you Hae-oppa.' She thought with a smile. But as she slowly started to recall the recent events that happened before she out, her smile curled into a frown. 'I hope he won't try to gurt anyone anymore. He seemed like a really good person.' She thought about the man she saw, which was Khun.   Getting up from the bed, she tried to steady her steps and walked to her bag. 'I guess I should take bath and change.' She thought while sniffing herself. 'Ugh, I smell like a catastrophe.' While she took her bath, others were still unaware that already woke up. Back in the common room, everyone ate the breakfast which was cooked by Gikw
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Vampirexy192
#1
Chapter 11: Oh yeah, I know I comment too much on this but I just wanna add, no need to emphasize too much on every word that seems unnecessary like you give in a bold font or capital letter and reduce the 3 period symbol. It just dragging your sentence. Probably it was a habit to put three dots at the end of sentence. xD Maybe, I assumed. It's okay, everyone make a mistake that they unconsciously did. Even me, myself ^_^ But if you still keep it, it's fine. Everyone has their own styles to write. :D
Vampirexy192
#2
Chapter 11: First of all, I want to say that the colors actually distract me. I don't mind, it was colorful indeed but I would suggest you do not use yellow color because I couldn't see the word clearly. >.> And I preferred if you name the female main character so you wouldn't have to keep it blank in all you story. Also, the thoughts of a person and the person conversation should be distinguished. Like we can tell that it was her thoughts or she was talking. People's point of view is already considered as expressing their inner minds or thoughts. Unless that person voiced out her opinion in her head loudly as if she was talking to herself. That is different. Like you use this for the "conversation" and thoughts, you can use 'this' or in italic words. Oh! Btw in Chapter 11, the protagonist brother had changed from Baro to Jinyoung? o.o What just happened? That actually confused me, I don't know if you had mistakenly written that. Moreover, it was difficult to you know telling their perspectives especially the Lee's brothers. I was rather puzzled because it seems jumbled up to me. Therefore, the flow of the story is a bit disrupted. I'm just giving my comment not because of I hate it, I just want to point out the mistakes so you can improve and become better. :D I hope you don't take any offence from this. However, the plot story was interesting like I can feel European or Victorian kind of style. Classic and vintage. Hahaha. As well as the mystery behind her amnesia and the history of their descendants. :)
exolovechick
#3
yea i was surprised to see exolovechick i would recommend to name the main character but other than that, i am looking forward in reading this fic :)
rukehna #4
scared the crap out of me when i see my username lol
yoonaaegyo
#5
Its realy funny because my username is also yoonaaegyo but otherwise I am looking forward to reading this fanfics :)
ILoveKitCats
#6
Chapter 19: this story is so mysterious . i must keep reading to know the ans .. jinjja daebak !!
chimaniecricket
#7
always sj15forever!!!!
x3Yoongiex3
#8
Chapter 125: i just finished your story & really liked it (:
jonginies #9
okay! ^^
Little-Red
#10
@kpopaholic121: SEE YOU AT THE OTHER STORIES CHINGGU~ :D