ONTAENG--- 1 1.2

Hello Baby! (NEW GROUP COED YELLOW, WITH SNSD, T-ARA AND SHINEE COUPLES)
Onew looked at Taeyeon. He was not so exited. He had only taken care of Yoogeun, and he was four. Taeyeon looked calm. Onew needed to calm down. These girls were different. He could talk to them, and it would be easy to understand them. First, was the test. The couple came inside the hotel room. It was the biggest room that they had, and it was the same size as his dorm. A woman was waiting inside.•••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••• Onew and Taeyeon sat on the floor. "First question" she said. "Since the children you are taking care of moved away from their family two weeks ago, they will miss their home. It this happens, what should you do?" Taeyeon jumped but Onew pulled her down. They talked, and then Taeyeon said, "Try to make them think of something else and forget home!" The woman nodded, and she clapped her hand once. "Question two. If a child is not listening, what do you do?" Onew answered. " If they will not listen, then leave them" The lady made am x with her hands. "Now, we are going to pretend that Onew is the child and taeyeon is the parent. Taeyeon is asking Onew to do study English. Onew says no. How will Taeyeon react?" Taeyeon answered. " Take something away that he likes and tell him he must study, or it will belong to me" The woman clapped. "Here is a paper with what you need to know. After you read it, give the children will be here" Onew and Taeyeon bowed. "Thank you" She left.
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Tagongluv #1
@ kraYcel: Just wait and see!
kraYcel
#2
haha..Taeyeon took the children..?<br />
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Tagongluv #3
@ kraYcel: Yes more Ontaeng is coming. I am sorry if I do not reach it fast but I will try. I have a surprise for you soon after all of the children and parents meet. It has ONTAENG!!!!! <3<3<3<3<3<3<3
Tagongluv #4
@ kraYcel: hahaha ok ^_~
kraYcel
#5
i think it will be better if you try that one..<br />
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but as along as your story has ontaeng, everything will be fine for me..
Tagongluv #6
@kraYcel: Thank you for subscribing and commenting. I want to know, will it be easier to read if the story is in paragraphs?
Tagongluv #7
@anniekhun: I am not very sure how to fix the space, but for the story will it be easy if I write in paragraphs?
kraYcel
#8
ontaeng~~
anniekhun #9
Hi, I'm just reading your foreword and I think it's pretty good. Please don't get offended but I thought it was a bit hard to read (the foreword). Maybe space it out a bit so people could read it easier :DDD<br />
Just a suggestion :)