MINYUL-- 2.2

Hello Baby! (NEW GROUP COED YELLOW, WITH SNSD, T-ARA AND SHINEE COUPLES)
Minho and Yuri ran up the stairs to Ontaeng hotel room. The door was open and Yuri could hear screams but they did not know what they were. Yuri held Minho. "What is happening?" The screams were becoming louder. Yuri was crying again. When they came to the floor, there was a loud scream. Minho stopped. "Ontaeng did not take our children" he said. Yuri looked at the floor.----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------There was red on the floor, and it was blood. Yuri looked at the PD. "What do we do? Something has happened! Why are you still filming? Help us! There are children! Where is our manager??" The PD shook his head. "My job is to take care of the filming. Since this is a reality show there is nothing that I can do. A small accident like this is something that you need to fix." Minho glared. There was another scream.
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Tagongluv #1
@ kraYcel: Just wait and see!
kraYcel
#2
haha..Taeyeon took the children..?<br />
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Tagongluv #3
@ kraYcel: Yes more Ontaeng is coming. I am sorry if I do not reach it fast but I will try. I have a surprise for you soon after all of the children and parents meet. It has ONTAENG!!!!! <3<3<3<3<3<3<3
Tagongluv #4
@ kraYcel: hahaha ok ^_~
kraYcel
#5
i think it will be better if you try that one..<br />
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but as along as your story has ontaeng, everything will be fine for me..
Tagongluv #6
@kraYcel: Thank you for subscribing and commenting. I want to know, will it be easier to read if the story is in paragraphs?
Tagongluv #7
@anniekhun: I am not very sure how to fix the space, but for the story will it be easy if I write in paragraphs?
kraYcel
#8
ontaeng~~
anniekhun #9
Hi, I'm just reading your foreword and I think it's pretty good. Please don't get offended but I thought it was a bit hard to read (the foreword). Maybe space it out a bit so people could read it easier :DDD<br />
Just a suggestion :)