ONTAENG--- 2.2

Hello Baby! (NEW GROUP COED YELLOW, WITH SNSD, T-ARA AND SHINEE COUPLES)
The paper was about what to do in different times. If a child became sick, or hurt, and if a child could not breath. It also had what young girls who were in the ages twelve to fifteen liked to do. The other page was a different. It had questions that said What do you do if the girl gets her period, and What you do if a girl looks like she is not happy. After they finished, they gave the papers to the staff, and someone came to the door.•••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••Taeyeon opened the door for her daughters. Neeyam smiled. "Hello! My name is Sam Natalie but you may call me Neeyam. I am mixed Korean and Chinese blood. My grandparent came to Korea before my mother was born. Please accept me" Neeyam bowed. Tamie bowed slowly. "My name is Ikeda Tamie. People who know me call me Mien. I am mixed like Neeyam. My parents are Japanese, but my grandparent are Vietnamese"
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Tagongluv #1
@ kraYcel: Just wait and see!
kraYcel
#2
haha..Taeyeon took the children..?<br />
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Tagongluv #3
@ kraYcel: Yes more Ontaeng is coming. I am sorry if I do not reach it fast but I will try. I have a surprise for you soon after all of the children and parents meet. It has ONTAENG!!!!! <3<3<3<3<3<3<3
Tagongluv #4
@ kraYcel: hahaha ok ^_~
kraYcel
#5
i think it will be better if you try that one..<br />
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but as along as your story has ontaeng, everything will be fine for me..
Tagongluv #6
@kraYcel: Thank you for subscribing and commenting. I want to know, will it be easier to read if the story is in paragraphs?
Tagongluv #7
@anniekhun: I am not very sure how to fix the space, but for the story will it be easy if I write in paragraphs?
kraYcel
#8
ontaeng~~
anniekhun #9
Hi, I'm just reading your foreword and I think it's pretty good. Please don't get offended but I thought it was a bit hard to read (the foreword). Maybe space it out a bit so people could read it easier :DDD<br />
Just a suggestion :)