BEFORE

----------Coed yellow members were al in the HN entertainment practice room. Kayoung, Natalie, and Lissy, and Minty were practicing the dance for their debut song, "Agi Cholom" (Like a Child). After the first performance, more than 100,000 CDs had sold in less than two weeks. Mien, Kenyou, Niko, and Maiya were singing the words on the other side of the room. Then, Mien's phone rang and she picked it up. The president, Haneul, wanted to see them. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- THANK YOU TO MY SUBSCRIBER, AND THANK YOU FOR THE PEOPLE WHO GAVE ME COMMENTS. NEXT IS ONTAENG^^ THIS STORY IS•••••• NOT•••••• RATED••••••

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Tagongluv #1 Sep 10, 2011 23:12:44

@ kraYcel: Just wait and see!

kraYcel #2 Sep 10, 2011 22:07:04

haha..Taeyeon took the children..?

Tagongluv #3 Sep 10, 2011 21:02:27

@ kraYcel: Yes more Ontaeng is coming. I am sorry if I do not reach it fast but I will try. I have a surprise for you soon after all of the children and parents meet. It has ONTAENG!!!!! <3<3<3<3<3<3<3

Tagongluv #4 Sep 4, 2011 03:30:47

@ kraYcel: hahaha ok ^_~

kraYcel #5 Sep 4, 2011 03:25:01

i think it will be better if you try that one.. 
 
but as along as your story has ontaeng, everything will be fine for me..

Tagongluv #6 Sep 4, 2011 03:01:19

@kraYcel: Thank you for subscribing and commenting. I want to know, will it be easier to read if the story is in paragraphs?

Tagongluv #7 Sep 4, 2011 02:59:40

@anniekhun: I am not very sure how to fix the space, but for the story will it be easy if I write in paragraphs?

kraYcel #8 Sep 4, 2011 02:14:43

ontaeng~~

anniekhun #9 Sep 4, 2011 01:49:54

Hi, I'm just reading your foreword and I think it's pretty good. Please don't get offended but I thought it was a bit hard to read (the foreword). Maybe space it out a bit so people could read it easier :DDD 
Just a suggestion :)